Poetry 101 from 2001

[champagne1982]

Poetic imagery 101
Describe the scene; invite the reader in and try to create a mood. Do not give a narration.
After a few days anyone please nominate a topic and list the taboo words.

The scene:
A pebble or rock hits the water

The requirements
One stanza
20 to 25 words

taboo words
Wave
Radiate
Pebble
Rock
Stone
Splash
Water
I


Good luck. Extra points for rhyme.
U.P.

Resonance on the surface
from density within
as the catalyst raises reaction
and fish twitches fin.
Boyle's Law, once removed.

20 words.

 

[BooMerengue]

Resonance on the surface
from density within
as the catalyst raises reaction
and fish twitches fin.
Boyle's Law, once removed.

20 words.

Sooo nice! BUT... (lol) Every time I read this- 3, so far, I read '...catalyst raises erection...'

Maybe I'm thinking of catfish? Maybe I need new glasses? Maybe I need to go to Lit Chat?? roflmao

 

[champagne1982]

Sooo nice! BUT... (lol) Every time I read this- 3, so far, I read '...catalyst raises erection...'

Maybe I'm thinking of catfish? Maybe I need new glasses? Maybe I need to go to Lit Chat?? roflmao

heheheh. A new chat nick, CatalyticErection...

It sounds painful. Off we go to the BDSM room.

 

[wildsweetone]

Sooo nice! BUT... (lol) Every time I read this- 3, so far, I read '...catalyst raises erection...'

Maybe I'm thinking of catfish? Maybe I need new glasses? Maybe I need to go to Lit Chat?? roflmao

can i have some of whateveritis you're on?
okay i'm working on mine. i just wanted you to know that. i have to go make dindins. be back later.

 

[BooMerengue]

heheheh. A new chat nick, CatalyticErection...

It sounds painful. Off we go to the BDSM room.

Wowie Zowie! It sounds EclecticallyElectric!!

Are we going to LitChat? Lemme change clothes and I'll be right there!


*heels diggin in screeeeeching...

did you say BDSM??

Grabbing my crop...

 

[wildsweetone]

.
.

deep old pool
vertical cliff towers
trembled earth
crust cracked and plummeting
gravity tugs
hurled down
immersion immense
settling
deep old pool
.
.

22 words

 

[eagleyez]

Kowinski's Tales of Ordinarry Madness comes to mind

We, me and chuck had only office gigs via the postal service On Sundays We would show up early take his van Get 2-3 carts of mail to be processed Just us two and a couple of security cholos. No suits of lifers on sunday, Just me, "the youngee" and Chuck. We both played a bit o golf, so we would get our work done and get a rack of coors talls and nursem, park the van Under big live Oaks in the Parking lot. The cholos would invariably try to get us to put in some quid and by tequila for the BBQ they had scheduled back attheir dive But we adhered to the Chinowski BEER theorum. Sticktoitreligioeusy the beerthat is,did blow onVERY SPECIAL OCCASIONS.
as its and it wont stick to you. Iprefferredpufin weed over drinking booze pufingherbover drnkingth and get to know these guy's bored housey wifes a bit better, swim in the pool, cook for everyone and see what happens, as I has a fledjling Arborcare biz the rest of the week, was happilly single. They always wanted me to work for the post office, but ther money was scwagg compared what I made working for mysef, was in a band and having the time of my life. It was just a Sunday tradition and i STAYED wChuckand he knew IHADHISBACK.

Well, one sunday it was

 

[BooMerengue]

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