POETRY BOOTCAMP: Week Three-- Ballads

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Welll . . .

Well, I suppose we could do it that way, JUDO, but then people couldn't vote on the two different versions. They can only do that if we post two separate poems. Also, if you do post it this way, the first line of the twenty seventh stanza is "Then I slammed my cock in her twat." Also, I want to change the last line of the poem to "While I puff on my hash pipe."

Anyway, I don't know why you're being so stubborn about all this. To me, it's obvious my ending is better than yours.

 

[JUDO]

Re: Welll . . .

Anyway, I don't know why you're being so stubborn about all this. To me, it's obvious my ending is better than yours.

(Ahh...ha hahahahahahahahaha!)

RW! What a sense of humor. Okay, okay, we'll do it your way. Post seperate versions of the same poem with a link or note to the readers that there are competing versions to vote on.

Sound cool?


- Judo

 

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My version up

My version of "Inverness" has been posted. It's at
www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=40771

If you enjoyed this ballad, please vote on it and let me know what you think! (If you didn't enjoy it, please don't vote on it.)

 

[JUDO]

You and your pipe

RW, you're such a romantic. I love a story with a happy ending.
(* tears well up *) (sniff, sniff!)


- Judo

 

[JUDO]

The "Holy Fuck" is up

My version of "Inverness." Thanks, RW.

Our Lady of Inverness


- Judo