Varian P
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drksideofthemoon said:I voted 5 twice on your story, did that help? LOL!!
Not as much as if you'd voted 5 seven times, but it's a start.
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drksideofthemoon said:I voted 5 twice on your story, did that help? LOL!!
fursmoke11 said:Ummm sorry I opened a whole two cans of worms here!
Firly on the voting system; I am way out of my depth and clearly those of you with knowledge I acknowledge and thankyou for informing me.
Which kind of brings me to the second point, the nature of opinion. This is not necessarily applying to the voting system here, but should be borne in mind
on any discussion of voting and democracy.
I agree that those with power...like the pigs...don't necessarily have knowledge, and their opinions may not be valid. For example, when the UK government banned foxhunting they did so because of prejudice not on any scientific evidence. 600 expert veterinary surgeons pointed out that it was by far the fairest and least cruel method of fox control but they were ignored. Many Consrvationists also pointed out the benefits for habitat protection and the fact that Adolf Hitlr's ban on foxhunting in the Czech republic had led to the permanent extinction of the fox there within a few years.
So you had scientists, vets, expert witnesses, historians, animal behaviourists etc ALL giving evidence to the Burns report and what happens?
Because those with prejudice in power pandering to the ignorance (and on the face of it, if you have no knowledge of foxhunting it looks cruel) of voters,
it was still banned. All expert knowledge was ignored.
We must not allow societies to do this. If we do, we go to war without evidence of WMDs, allow them to make decisions based on popular ignorance and even paranoia etc.
For example we could see governments repatriating immigrants and bringing back capital punishment.
This is why in the UK we have a House of Lords. Now those that don't understand it object to it because they believe it based on privilige. But actually, it works as an excellent guard on prejudice. Each Lord is expected to have a specialist area of law or knowledge. It has served us well until now. Now we have a government who overule it; breaking constitutional ethics. The problem is with the US two tier system is that both are elected. That may be seen as a fine thing; but it has problems: not least of which is that your Government on either wing will act on the whims of the voters. And what is popular, is not ncessarily right. Or indeed, the best course of action for truth and justice and liberty or even pragmatism.
Those in power need to listen to legal experts, scientists, and experts in various fields NOT the opinions of the masses...or ideological advisors reflecting them... which may be based on lack of knowledge and a media that doesn't give them enough credit to make things properly explained. And evidence should be heard from every discipline. Any hostorina will tell you that the smoking ban is basd on unsound science and lack of historical analysis. Nobody asked the Historians about Nazi smoking bans or the unsoundness of statistical science (eg massive link between cervical cancer and smoking meant a link? Wrong. Very wrong. And women died because of it).
For example. Take Afghanistan. The underlying problem is simple. Yet for various reasons politicians will not address it. The Afghan economy is based on poppes and karakul....both unsavoury to western moral imperialism. There will never be peace there until those are accepted . Every officer in the armed forces and analyst will tell you that. So every soldier that dies there is the fault of those who do not address it. We need to buy the poppy crop: end of trouble. People do not know that and the media and politicians, influenced by western pharmacutical power, don't tell them. So it is doomed to failure.
So how can anyone have a valid opinion about what should hapen there without this information?
Opinion should be based on knowledge.
One doesn't have to know how to make a hamburger to appreciate it. But someone who has never tasted a hamburger bfore is no judge of whether a big mac is good or not yes? It may taste good to him, but he maybe hasn't tasted one made by BK or one made by a top chef.
Now where I am going I suppose, is that there should be a panel of expert judges voting, and also a public voting system. Comments too.
Sometimes of course the experts will be wrong and the public will love a story.
OR as this would maybe be impossible, an expert judge would maybe carry a double vote?
But at the moment, vote cast by someone who is prejudiced as equal as one who attemts to judge the story objectively are two different things.
If you objct to furs and smoking for example, you would maybe give my story a low mark.
However I do see that Litrotica makes some effort to address this...and vice versa.
Now I realise that some people here will believe I am making an attack on democratic principles, but while we are all encouraged to believe our opinions are of equal worth, it actually will ebentually undermine democracy itself; plummetting us into poor governments acting without full possession of the facts. My solution is that schools should teach people NOT to have an opinion about something they do not research and have good knowledge on. And my experience is that does not happen.
Everyone has an opinon about Iraq for example; I am only interested in the opinions of soldiers, enemies, analysts etc. and not that of the masses (except maybe those who live there) and certainly not politicians pandering to the general consensus of ignorance of the electorate on EITHER side of any debate. Because if governments do not make informed decisions, they will always make dreadful mistakes.
Not all expert knowledge is good either. Statistical science is notoriously misleading. Because it is not a true discipline. Yet again as a society we take great stock in it.
Oh well sorry about the meandering but food for thought. Sorry for attacking sacred cows here.
drksideofthemoon said:I have no idea what point you are trying to make.
First, you can not assign the same logic to art and science. Science is governed by laws of nature.
My whole point is that when it comes to writing, every reader's opinion is as valid as the next reader. The weight that you, the writer, give that opinion may be different.
Yes, I object to both furs and smoking, but instead of giving you a low vote, I would just chose not to read it. That's just my opinion. And it is just as valid as someone who likes furs and smoking.
As to the panel of expert judges, what criteria would you use to give these people "expert" status? What would be the point? If you want real critique of your work there is the SDC already set up for that.
The bottom line is that you can't assign a numerical value to something that is subjective.
Varian P said:I suppose it depends on what the goal of the individual writer is: a judgment of the literary value of their story, or a temperature reading on popularity of a story.
A fast food burger might be a little slice of revulsion to the gourmand with a delicate and carefully honed palate, but the best chef in the world is never going to make the profits McDonald's has.
While literary experts of the commercial or theory variety might be able to rank stories on a variety of technical merits, I'd wager that only the public or the individual is qualified to decide what "works" for them in a piece of fiction, and all the more so in a piece of erotic fiction. Hence, Borders will probably sell more copies of the latest Stephen King novel novel this year than copies of Joyce's Ulysses.
Personally, I've accepted the fact that the kinds of stories I write don't appeal to the majority of people who come to Lit to read porn/erotica, and am thrilled that there is a wee little pocket of people who like my stories.
I don't think I'd care to have a panel of experts weighing in on the merit of the stories here. I'd rather take cues from the other writers here whom I respect for reasons of my own, and read their work and the work they admire. And the opinions of those people about my own work means a great deal to me--more, I think, than an anonymous body of "experts" would.
But, then again, some of the people I'm talking about and many of the contributors here are experts--professional writers, people in the publishing industry, veterans of academia, etc. I suppose, in a sense, their favorites lists, their PCs, and comments they make on the boards could be taken as a kind of expert vetting, though they don't have more power than any of us, when it comes to impacting story scores.
fursmoke11 said:Yes I agree with what you are saying I just think it is sad.
About as sad as someone reading Mills and Boon over Von Sacher Masoch. The former reader won't know the latter book exists.
And your observation on Macdonalds. Yes I agree . However what the rest of the world objects to is America valuing that profit as a virtue.; and it's export to the rest of the world often to the detriment of local businesses and cultural integrity. What the golden arches have done to Prague is an absolute disgrace. And anyone who thinks a big mac is better than a bowl of czech goulash and dumplings is an ingnoramus. Young people in particular are being conned literally by all global marketing which has ruthlessly dismissed the past as "square" and "passe" and encouraged them into new bright better cooler. Started in the 60s and my parents laughed at the idea that Bri nylon crimplene etc was better than wool, but a generation on and the kids have fallen for it under different branding hook line and sinker and it is destroying the environment to boot.
Except we all know its crap don't we? Okay you may take your hat off to people who make money like that....but not me.
And those that do are responsible maybe for this Czech joke:
Q "What is the difference between yoghurt and America?"
A "Yoghurt has culture"
fursmoke11 said:Q "What is the difference between yoghurt and America?"
A "Yoghurt has culture"
Varian P said:Personally, I've accepted the fact that the kinds of stories I write don't appeal to the majority of people who come to Lit to read porn/erotica, and am thrilled that there is a wee little pocket of people who like my stories.
fursmoke11 said:Yes I agree with what you are saying I just think it is sad.
About as sad as someone reading Mills and Boon over Von Sacher Masoch. The former reader won't know the latter book exists.
And your observation on Macdonalds. Yes I agree . However what the rest of the world objects to is America valuing that profit as a virtue.; and it's export to the rest of the world often to the detriment of local businesses and cultural integrity. What the golden arches have done to Prague is an absolute disgrace. And anyone who thinks a big mac is better than a bowl of czech goulash and dumplings is an ingnoramus. Young people in particular are being conned literally by all global marketing which has ruthlessly dismissed the past as "square" and "passe" and encouraged them into new bright better cooler. Started in the 60s and my parents laughed at the idea that Bri nylon crimplene etc was better than wool, but a generation on and the kids have fallen for it under different branding hook line and sinker and it is destroying the environment to boot.
Except we all know its crap don't we? Okay you may take your hat off to people who make money like that....but not me.
And those that do are responsible maybe for this Czech joke:
Q "What is the difference between yoghurt and America?"
A "Yoghurt has culture"
sr71plt said:"How to fix this problem? I haven't the foggiest clue."
I agree there's no "fix" to the problem (some don't even see it as a problem). I think there's a less troll-ridden system that another site or two uses: having only positive voting, as in "hot," "hotter," "hotest." Negative voters wouldn't have much incentive to vote at all, if none of the votes were negative or even "spoiler" votes. There seem to be fewer votes in total under such a system, so even the initial "hot" level would have some satisfaction for the author.
I do like Darkniciad's suggestion too of two "hot" levels rather than one. I would think there would be less "knock down/pump up" fighting over the single level the site has.
The reference to Animal Farm and the pigs, by the way, was just to the line in the book "all animals are equal but some animals are more equal than others." (The more equal ones in the book being the pigs.) When you're talking inherent talent/position (as some of this discussion has been doing), I think it's a truism that everyone isn't (and can't be) exactly equal--in either ability or privilege. But when the discussion stayed on the topic here--the site's voting system--I think the site has made the voting system as equal in opportunity/weight of a single poster's vote as possible.
fursmoke11 said:Opinion should be based on knowledge.
One doesn't have to know how to make a hamburger to appreciate it. But someone who has never tasted a hamburger bfore is no judge of whether a big mac is good or not yes? It may taste good to him, but he maybe hasn't tasted one made by BK or one made by a top chef...
Varian P said:I suppose it depends on what the goal of the individual writer is: a judgment of the literary value of their story, or a temperature reading on popularity of a story.
A fast food burger might be a little slice of revulsion to the gourmand with a delicate and carefully honed palate, but the best chef in the world is never going to make the profits McDonald's has...
fursmoke11 said:And your observation on Macdonalds. Yes I agree . However what the rest of the world objects to is America valuing that profit as a virtue.; and it's export to the rest of the world often to the detriment of local businesses and cultural integrity. What the golden arches have done to Prague is an absolute disgrace. And anyone who thinks a big mac is better than a bowl of czech goulash and dumplings is an ingnoramus. Young people in particular are being conned literally by all global marketing which has ruthlessly dismissed the past as "square" and "passe" and encouraged them into new bright better cooler. Started in the 60s and my parents laughed at the idea that Bri nylon crimplene etc was better than wool, but a generation on and the kids have fallen for it under different branding hook line and sinker and it is destroying the environment to boot.
Except we all know its crap don't we? Okay you may take your hat off to people who make money like that....but not me.
fursmoke11 said:I am not a genius on literature either. That is what I was hoping to get feedback for form some expert writers so I could improve!
Varian P said:If that was your goal all along, it wasn't clear from your first post.
I don't know if anyone here would label themselves an "expert writer," but if you want constructive critiques of stories you've posted on the site, just start a thread saying so, and provide a link to the piece(s) you want critiqued, and I'm sure you'll get a range of responses.
drksideofthemoon said:I thought you were our expert...
DeeZire said:When stories live or die according to public voting, we're stuck with the mindset that brought us George Bush. Is that really what we want to strive for?
I'd like to see the editors/screeners implement a more comprehensive ratings system. Perhaps there could be little e's for stories the editors/screeners like but can't, in good conscience, grant a big E to. Or P's for plot, S's for stroking potential, EM's for emotion (Suzanne by the Sea would get an EM from me.)
Perhaps, in lieu of that, knowledgable readers could start 'sticky' threads with their own top lists. For instance, Jenny's top list would interest me, since I prefer plot and character develpment over OBGYN reports.
I suppose reading your favorite authors is one approach, but then you miss the new authors who get lost in the shuffle.
So many stories - so little time!
drksideofthemoon said:I don't worry much about the votes. It's the comments I get. Did I achieve what I set out to do. Did the reader taste the salt spray from the Irish Coast? Do they feel what it's like to be in the mountains of Montana? Can they feel the sand and heat from the Egyptian desert.
Did the characters make them feel anything? Did the story remind them of something or someone in their life?
That's the things that look for. I always say that if I make one person stop and think for a minute or two abous what I've written, then what I have penned has been a success.
fursmoke11 said:I did not make the joke up and am not Czech.
If you infer something more from it than that it is your issue not mine.
Jenny_Jackson said:I've been thinking about this thread and the "H"s that appear on stories. Lots of stories with the coveted "H" are stroke - many pure stroke.... I've long thought that stories that illicit a raging hard-on and are long enough to let the wankers get off more often than not end up with an "H".