ride_the_horsey
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Very Very well written DVS 
worth waiting for
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Hooooray!!!! Great installment! Thanks DVS
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It makes your shoes look so nice. See how they shine? Are they leather?Esclava said:Thank you so kindly, Snowy!!!
Something tells me she'd not need to be forced. Well, maybe that is a poor choice of words...Esclava said:A word of caution ... Be careful of what you ask for ... lest the DVS One give you more by dragging you into the story as an understudy for the "boss" ...
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Maybe she could be forced...but, willingly.
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Great as usual DVS ... cant wait for the rest .
ride_the_horsey
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When's the next installment DVS?
I need to read more
I need to read more
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Well, it's like this. I'm working on it, but shit happens. I had to reinstall Windows a few times, resently (for some strange and unknown reasons), and one time I thought I had everything backed up, but that installment was the only file I didn't have. So, I lost about 1,000 words or so. But, I'm back on track again, and almost back where I was before I lost it.
And, because of the nice weather, I don't have as much available writing time. we are in the growing seasin here, and grass needs cutting, trees need cutting, and the house needs work, etc.
But, don't think this thread is dead. Far from it! It's just slowed down a bit, is all. In the words of Arnold..."I'll be back?
And, because of the nice weather, I don't have as much available writing time. we are in the growing seasin here, and grass needs cutting, trees need cutting, and the house needs work, etc.
But, don't think this thread is dead. Far from it! It's just slowed down a bit, is all. In the words of Arnold..."I'll be back?
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Esclava said:Thank you so kindly, Snowy!!!
A word of caution ... Be careful of what you ask for ... lest the DVS One give you more by dragging you into the story as an understudy for the "boss" ...
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You're welcome and
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DVS said:It makes your shoes look so nice. See how they shine? Are they leather?
Something tells me she'd not need to be forced. Well, maybe that is a poor choice of words...
Maybe she could be forced...but, willingly.
squared
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Aww I hate when technology rebels against us poor defenseless users ..lol... specially when it slows down the next part of such a capturing story .
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Ah, but the next installment is coming very soon. I hope you still have those juices flowing for it.babiesmiles said:Aww I hate when technology rebels against us poor defenseless users ..lol... specially when it slows down the next part of such a capturing story .
And, I agree that our ever advancing technology does seem to take leaps backwards at the most inopportune times. And, life just sucks, sometimes, too. But, there are those times when it doesn't suck, too.
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This installment is a continuation from post #675.
So very sorry this installment has been delayed. Technology (and lack of same), and Summer weather with its attached chores have taken a fair share out of my normal deviant sexual thoughts. Well, not my thoughts, but the time to get those thoughts down on paper. Nothing will ever take my deviant sexual thoughts from me.
Even if you don't like this installment, I hope it recaptures your desire for this thread and the possible twists and turns this story might take. As always, this installment continues from where the last one left off.
Thanks for waiting so long.
Slowly, the slut wiggled her way up the dildo, trying to take as much of it into her mouth as possible. The mark seemed so far away to me, but even I had seen her swallow it that far.
Lucy looked pissed. I guess her pupil wasn’t doing as she was told. And, with that look, I knew something was going to happen. Lucy looked back to Rita and shook her head. Rita smiled and leaned forward in her chair. She began swinging that whip against the slut’s ass. And, of course, the slut’s reactions were very interesting.
The whip did make a difference. That slut gulped quite a bit more, when Rita was helping. Rita started a rhythm again, with that whip. The slut gulped and swallowed a little more, with each lash.
But, it didn’t look like Lucy wasn’t impressed. She was leaning back in her chair, making no real effort to encourage the slut’s progress. Maybe she was letting Rita burn off some steam. If she was, it was a smart idea. Rita becomes a problem, when she can’t have her fun.
After a minute or so, Lucy finally leaned forward. Rita was still whipping the slut’s ass and the slut was trying her best to deep throat that dildo. Actually, I think she was just trying to keep her sore ass away from that whip, more than anything. I wonder if Lucy was thinking the same thing.
Pointing to the mark, Lucy just sat there, watching the action. Actually, just seeing her pointing at the mark made the slut swallow a little more. Funny how the mind works. I guess she wanted to please Lucy. Or, maybe she just didn’t want to piss her off.
The slut got a little more of the dildo down her throat, but it wasn’t enough to satisfy Lucy. She frowned at the slut. She motioned for Rita to give some encouragement. Rita was only too happy to oblige. She leaned forward in her chair and started in on the slut’s ass. The whip was whistling through the air, and the slut’s body was twitching and jerking after each of the whip’s lashes.
Rita looked up at Lucy, but she continued whipping the slut’s ass. “How’s she doing?”
“She’s just not doing it. She’s not getting any more of the dildo down her throat. None.”
“Well, you know what you have to do, then.”
“I do?”
“You need to take control and show her you’re in charge.”
“I am.”
“No you’re not, and she knows it. She’s skirting by, just like she did before. She’s playing you.”
“Playing me? What do you mean?”
“The remote. You’re all talk and she knows it. You show her the buttons and warn her. In turn, she gives you the wide-eyed look of fear so you think you have made your point. But, does she ever take more of the dildo into her throat when you do that?”
Lucy sat there, silently. She must have been letting Rita’s words soak in. The look on her face changed with nearly every sentence Rita spoke.
Rita smiled. She knew she was getting through to Lucy. “Think about it. Has she swallowed the dildo without help from someone else? Has she done more than gag and seem to be unable to take it, even after you have shown her it’s possible? You’re the smallest woman here, yet you can swallow effortlessly. Doesn’t that tell you something?”
Lucy sat there, listening to Rita. She didn’t say a word, but her eyes told me where her mind was. She was getting pissed. No, not pissed at Rita, but pissed at what Rita was saying. Everything Rita was saying seemed to be true.
Was the slut playing her? I didn’t know. But, she couldn’t seem to deep throat a cock, unless she was forced, in some way, usually with pain from the zapper. I don’t know if pain alone could make that happen, without her throat being able to take it, in the first place. Maybe she had too much of a gag reflex or something. Or, maybe she really was playing Lucy.
Rita continued talking, but Lucy stopped her. I guess she had heard enough. She pressed her lips tightly together as her breath hissed out her nostrils. There was fire in her eyes. Yep, I think Rita was getting to her. She leaned down so she could whisper to the slut. “I know, slut. You had me going for a while, but now I know.”
From where I was, I could see the slut looking up at Lucy. I think I could see honest fear in her eyes. And, being in the position she was, she couldn’t do anything to change Lucy’s mind, so she was not only victim of what Rita was saying, but also at how it affected Lucy.
It did affect Lucy. She wasn’t happy. In fact, she had revenge in her eyes. What she was thinking was almost too easy to predict. It would also be very difficult to stop. Lucy had the remote control. The way she was showing it to the slut concerned me. She was holding it up and pointing out the different color buttons.
Rita had stopped talking. She had put Lucy’s mind right where she wanted it, so she could just sit back and watch the fireworks. She could join in if she wanted, but she had done such a good job of it, there was no need.
After a short silence, Lucy let go. I guess she couldn’t hold it in any longer. “Slut, I’ve told you that one way or another you’d be deep throating this cock. And, I think I’ve been very understanding with your less than satisfactory talents when it comes to deep throating. Now Rita tells me you may have been less than honest with me. Well, we’ll just see how skilled you are and we’ll be doing it a different way, in case you were wondering.” Lucy was almost caressing the remote, as she continued. “Yes, I think we’ll be doing it a very different way.”
Lucy looked up at Rita. “Rita, are we ready to begin?”
“Yes, I think we are, more than ready.”
Lucy looked down at the slut. “Slut, are we ready to begin?”
The slut just looked up at Lucy with those wide-open eyes. “I’ll take that as a yes,” Lucy continued. “So, it seems we’re all ready for the next big test.”
Lucy sat up in her chair. Although she was talking to the slut, she was watching the remote. It looked like she was silently playing eanie, meanie, minie, moe with the buttons. “OK, slut, let’s see how far you can take that cock down your throat, now. Ready? Go.”
She didn’t even look down to see if the slut was trying or not. She just kept touching each button, one after the other. After a short time, without even looking down to see how the slut had performed, she snapped at her. “Not good enough, bitch. Not good enough, at all.”
Then, Lucy pressed a button. I couldn’t see which one it was, but the slut sure jerked forward from it. And, because she had no room to move, that forced the dildo down her throat. She gagged, slightly from it.
Lucy still hadn’t looked down at the slut. She kept her eyes on the buttons of the remote. “No, sorry, bitch. I don’t think you’re trying.” Then, she pressed another button. The slut jerked about the same as last time, and again she gagged from how far her jerking thrust the dildo down her throat.
Lucy seemed to keep her cool, but I wondered if something wasn’t simmering in her head. Again she admonished the slut for not performing to expectations. But, she hadn’t even been watching. “Slut, you’ve gotta do much better than that. That’s just not gonna do.” Then, she pressed another button. That time, the slut’s body jerked a little more violently. She whimpered and moaned between the gag reflex. If the first two times had been the green button, I would guess that last time had been the yellow one. The slut had surpassed her best effort, and then some, but Lucy didn’t seem to even care.
Rita was sitting back, watching everything unfold. She had a smile on her face that looked like satisfaction. Lucy began smiling some, and it looked a little like satisfaction, too. But, I think it was more from revenge. She continued commanding the slut. “Slut, I think it might be time for you to learn your lesson. I’ve been easy on you, up to now.” With that, she pressed a button that caused the slut to lunge forward with a scream.
That shoved the dildo down her throat as far as I’d seen it go all evening. I knew that had to be the red button. But, before I could say anything, Lucy was pressing it again. Again the slut screamed and jerked forward to escape the zapper’s pain. Although she was deep throating that dildo to nearly the base, it was causing a bad gag reflex. I had to grab the remote from Lucy. But, before I could she had pressed the red button several times in rapid succession.
The slut screamed over and over, after each time that button was pushed. By the time I grabbed the remote, the slut was whimpering in pain. Her throat was just not as skilled as Lucy’s was. It would take time and coaching to get past that gag reflex.
Rita was laughing. Lucy was laughing, too. She pointed at the slut. “Serves her right for what she did.”
I didn’t see it that way, but I didn’t say anything. I had the remote, so she couldn’t continue. Rita and Lucy were still laughing. If I hadn’t grabbed the remote, I wonder how far that scene would have gone. With Rita as the instigator, who knows where it would have ended.
I got Lucy’s attention. It was difficult, because she was laughing so hard. “Lucy, I think she’s had enough. Don’t you think you should untie her, now?”
“Had enough? I was just getting started on the bitch.”
“Well, I see it a different way than you do, Lucy. I think you should untie her.”
“Why?” asked Lucy. She didn’t seem to understand at all. I’m sure she would have quickly resumed pressing the buttons, if I had allowed it.
“Why? Well, for starters, she’s my slut and this is my party. And, I think James would agree with me.”
Lucy quickly looked over at James. He didn’t say a word and Lucy knew that wasn’t a good thing. She quickly turned back to me. “But, she was playin’ me. Rita said so.” Lucy was animated and becoming emotional. She pointed her finger at the slut. “And, that bitch isn’t going to play me and get away with it.”
I tried to remain calm, but I was getting tired of being the referee whenever Rita and/or Lucy had a turn with the slut. “I believe in everybody getting the most out of this evening, but there are limits that must be adhered to. And, the one limit I have is no damage to my slut…especially to her ass!”
“But, Rita said she wasn’t playin’ fair. I can’t stand that.”
“Not playing fair? Look where she is. You’ve got her hog tied, without any possibility of movement, except forward or backward. There’s a dildo shoved down her throat and the zapper up her ass and you have the remote. I won’t even mention that you’ve got Rita sitting behind her with that little whip just waiting for the next chance to cut lose on her ass. Tell me, Lucy…how can this slut be playing you?”
“Well…well…Rita said.”
I looked over at Rita. She had a sweet little smile on her face. I’d say it was an innocent smile, but that would be a lie. I don’t know if Rita could ever smile innocently. She’s always got something cooking in her mind. “Rita told you the slut wasn’t playing fair?”
“Yes.”
“And, of course, you always believe everything that Rita tells you, right?”
Lucy sat there for a few seconds, before she answered that question. I guess she was thinking back at all of the other times she had listened to Rita and ended up paying for it. I’m sure there must have been a few. She looked over at Rita. Yes, that smile was still on her face, but I wonder if Lucy saw that smile in the same way I did.
Lucy looked down as if she knew she was in trouble. Then, finally, she answered me. “I guess maybe I got a little out of control. I’m sorry.”
“That’s it? You got a little out of control?”
Lucy looked up at me. “Yes…just a little. I think I was entitled to get even with her. But, I got carried away.”
“You think you were entitled? You got a little carried away?” I glanced over at James. He was smiling. At first, I wondered why he was smiling. But, then it dawned on me. I guess he’d been in the same position more than once, and this was nothing new. Rita and Lucy were quite a pair.
But, I didn’t feel like I could just let it go. If the evening was to continue in the controlled way that I preferred, certain rules had to be followed. So, I thought of a plan. I walked over to James and I whispered my intentions to him. I wanted to make sure he agreed with me. He thought it was a good idea.
I walked back over to the girls. By this time, Lucy had a pout on her face that would immediately melt most any man’s anger. But, I had other plans for her that might change the expression on her face...just a bit.
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*Applauds* Well done DVS Well done indeed
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You are all very Kind, so I'm offering free domination sessions to anyone who comes to visit.
Well, I'd offer that, even without the nice words.
OK, so I'll throw in a session with my violet wand. I know that will get your attention. It will get your attention over and over again.
And, if that doesn't satisfy you, I'll bring out my punishment chair. Any takers?
You see, I don't call myself DVS just for the fun of it. The name fits!
Well, I'd offer that, even without the nice words.
OK, so I'll throw in a session with my violet wand. I know that will get your attention. It will get your attention over and over again.
And, if that doesn't satisfy you, I'll bring out my punishment chair. Any takers?
You see, I don't call myself DVS just for the fun of it. The name fits!
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DVS said:You are all very Kind, so I'm offering free domination sessions to anyone who comes to visit.
Well, I'd offer that, even without the nice words.
OK, so I'll throw in a session with my violet wand. I know that will get your attention. It will get your attention over and over again.
And, if that doesn't satisfy you, I'll bring out my punishment chair. Any takers?
You see, I don't call myself DVS just for the fun of it. The name fits!
Hi DVS!
I wish! This all sounds good but what pray tell is a "punishment" chair? I honestly don't know. Should I already be aware?
Fury
