Raw Anal Lust

[Blushing Bottom]

OMG, There's more?

There is more I looked ... and I had only read post #1.

I can't do this right now but rest assured you have a new fan.

 

[DVS]

OMG, There's more?

There is more I looked ... and I had only read post #1.

I can't do this right now but rest assured you have a new fan.

Take your time. There's no hurry. I've always been told that the good things are worth waiting for. I hope it's pleasant reading.

 

[Blushing Bottom]

Take your time. There's no hurry. I've always been told that the good things are worth waiting for. I hope it's pleasant reading.

How anyone would want to hurry anything this good is beyond me.

 

[gypziedoll]

Take your time. There's no hurry. I've always been told that the good things are worth waiting for. I hope it's pleasant reading.

good morning, just stopping in for a quick hello......and to tell you i reread this wonderful tale again over the last few days.....and as always it was most pleasurable

hope you are well

*kisses*

 

[alice_underneath]

I had to stop a good long while and think before I responded to this thread recommended by you, alice_underneath.

The guy does have a way with words.

 

[gypziedoll]

The guy does have a way with words.

yes he does

 

[~Blacklace~]

very very well written. Ive only read the first post so far, Im looking forward to finding the rest! I have such a hard time finding anything written well enough to keep my attention and not be too distracted to enjoy. Vanilla erotica does nothing for me, yet theres a plethora ack I better stop dont want to rant in here!
Any chance these are on your website anywhere? I havent been to it recently, but I went awhile back, funny we live in the same area.

 

[Blushing Bottom]

~yes~

Kind of makes one wonder what else he has a way with.

The guy does have a way with words.

 

[DVS]

good morning, just stopping in for a quick hello......and to tell you i reread this wonderful tale again over the last few days.....and as always it was most pleasurable

hope you are well

*kisses*

Good morning to you. Well, it's evening, now. My stomach's in knots. Another game literally thrown away.

Long time, no hear. Other than my stomach, I"m fine. Hope you are, too.

So, you read all of this story again? That's a lot of reading.

 

[DVS]

...Any chance these are on your website anywhere? I havent been to it recently, but I went awhile back, funny we live in the same area.

If you mean my little area Lit gives me for my stories, yes.

Each installment ends up as a chapter to "My New Boss" and I fix (well, I try to fix) all spelling errors and maybe refine them a bit. But, mostly, there is no change. I'm a little behind in that, though, as there are only about 12 chapters submitted, and I'm about half finished with chapter 27. I need to get to that.

I started the story here, so I continue to post the chapters in this thread as installments for my friends. I'm sure most of the readers who don't venture to the forums have no idea this thread exists so it's kind of like two different worlds. Searching though this thread can be difficult, if you are just looking to read the installments.

 

[~Blacklace~]

hmmmm perhaps Im mistaken then. I thought you were the same DVS from around here. This isnt your site?

 

[~Blacklace~]

ohh and I didnt mean spelling particularly, just the writing style I guess you could say. Shoot I really cant think of the words right now. But you know sometimes you read something and its like a teenager wrote it or something? Just sentence structure and making sense, and not.....hmmm Im sorry lol I cant think right now (lack of sleep I guess
My point is I like the way you write

 

[DVS]

hmmmm perhaps Im mistaken then. I thought you were the same DVS from around here. This isnt your site?

Nope, not me, sorry. Detroit? I'm kind of south west of there, closer to the yellow brick road, Dorothy and Toto.

 

[DVS]

ohh and I didnt mean spelling particularly, just the writing style I guess you could say. Shoot I really cant think of the words right now. But you know sometimes you read something and its like a teenager wrote it or something? Just sentence structure and making sense, and not.....hmmm Im sorry lol I cant think right now (lack of sleep I guess
My point is I like the way you write

Oh, I understood you. I was just saying the installments are more raw and I proof them again, before I submit them to Lit as chapters. I know you didn't mean what you thought I thought you meant.

And, thanks.

 

[DVS]

Kind of makes one wonder what else he has a way with.

um, electricity comes to mind.

 

[~Blacklace~]

Nope, not me, sorry. Detroit? I'm kind of south west of there, closer to the yellow brick road, Dorothy and Toto.

Well Im not in Detroit, just thumb area, I must clarify that because I have a HUGE thing with people thinking Im from Detroit. My mom tells people that, Im like noooo I am not in Detroit mom, lol, I have issues I know
So what happens if I click my heels three times?

 

[gypziedoll]

Good morning to you. Well, it's evening, now. My stomach's in knots. Another game literally thrown away.

Long time, no hear. Other than my stomach, I"m fine. Hope you are, too.

So, you read all of this story again? That's a lot of reading.

good evening, hope your stomach is feeling better....i am doing pretty good.

Yes I read it all again.....I felt the need to refresh my memory to it all....it still left me squirmming and loved every second of the rereading

 

[DVS]

Well Im not in Detroit, just thumb area, I must clarify that because I have a HUGE thing with people thinking Im from Detroit. My mom tells people that, Im like noooo I am not in Detroit mom, lol, I have issues I know
So what happens if I click my heels three times?

Well, if the story holds, I guess you get a free trip home...which isn't Detroit.

 

[caela]

Well Im not in Detroit, just thumb area, I must clarify that because I have a HUGE thing with people thinking Im from Detroit. My mom tells people that, Im like noooo I am not in Detroit mom, lol, I have issues I know
So what happens if I click my heels three times?

You don't have issues for not wanting to be from detroit...no one that lives in michigan really wants to be from detroit itself. Some of the suburbs and smaller towns around it that it has slowly been swallowing as it grows but not detroit.

 

[Blushing Bottom]

um, electricity comes to mind.

Gee now that's shocking.

 

[DVS]

good evening, hope your stomach is feeling better....i am doing pretty good.

Yes I read it all again.....I felt the need to refresh my memory to it all....it still left me squirmming and loved every second of the rereading

and every second the squirming too, I'm guessing?

 

[DVS]

Gee now that's shocking.

Cute.

Just as an update...
I have just over 3,000 words on this installment. Getting into the good stuff, now. Yes, I've saved it, in case the hard drive takes a dive. I learn fast.

 

[Red Sonja]

Cute.

Just as an update...
I have just over 3,000 words on this installment. Getting into the good stuff, now. Yes, I've saved it, in case the hard drive takes a dive. I learn fast.

Thanks for the update... I'm looking forward to the squirming...

 

[cellis]

Hmmm I am not finding the new chapter.... When are you posting it? Soon I hope...

 

[DVS]

Hmmm I am not finding the new chapter.... When are you posting it? Soon I hope...

Areyou talking about the installment here, or the chapters posted in the BDSM story section?

If you are talking about the installment, I finished another 1,000 words today. Woo Hoo! I'm not yet into the good part, although I'm right next to it. I'd say sometime shortly after Christmas, because of all the time consuming crap that happens this time of year.

If you are talking about the chapters in the BDSM section of Lit, I am editing several chapters now, and I think I'll be submitting about 5 or 6 sometime before the end of the year, if not shortly after. The delay is the same reason...Christmas and New Years foo foo.