reflection

[lostandfounder]

I don't think it sucks. Are you trying to show how, as time goes by, those things get further and further apart? If so, I think it works. List poems aren't my personal favorite, but you have to go with your instincts.

You gain a AV by getting 100 posts on the boards. You're getting very close...

 

[chinacatKS]

thank you

I am trying a new approach..

oh, that is cool about the avatar

 

[chinacatKS]

approach

that was the approach I was trying for

 

[chinacatKS]

hmm

well, I guess I like it well enough....it isn't too wordy that is for sure

it doesn't rhyme which is an old habit for me

I tried a new format

and it does not completely stink

so I guess all in all it is okay

 

[chinacatKS]

yeah!!!

Hi, I forgot to tell you I decided to post this one.

 

[chinacatKS]

hmm

the only reflective thought I have right now is: I sure would like to go crawl back into my warm cozy bed and dream some more

 

[chinacatKS]

start of the day

well, here I go out in to the cruel world to work myself to the bone so I can pay the bills and indulge in the things that make me happy.....Have a Grateful Day!!!!!!

 

[champagne1982]

reflection can be a dangerous thing sometimes

can anyone relate with that?

Yep. Reflection