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[BradBigBrain]

Wonderful! I can handle a story with 'language'. Just need a Russian coach by my side to make sure those little Russian touches are accurate and effective. From my point of view, the story has real potential with you involved.

A combination of the 1800s idea from SxRx and the plot outline from AS may work very well. I'll review those ideas together.

Sounds like a great idea to me. Ready when you are. Gotov kogda ty budesh'.

 

[ninefe2dg]

Niiiiiice!!!

Here's my thoughts...she knows enough English to get by a little bit, and her new husband knows enough Russian to get by. They teach each other the language of love as they're doing it. Translating as they go along. No matter the time period.

I'm looking forward to this, will you all be doing this online?

Just try to avoid the scene where she tries to be sexy by quoting lines she read in a girlie magazine, that is soooo "Her Alibi".

An aside, BBB, does it bother you that Jules refers to "Brad" as both "Brad" and "Brent" in the scene just before he breaks out Ezekiel 25:17? Not as big a "Q" blunder as the "Who Shot Nice Guy Eddie" problem in Reservoir Dogs, however!

Good luck, all. And please make sure the bride broker is nothing like Borat. "you want to maka the sexy time with thees one? Niiiiiice!!"

 

[BradBigBrain]

I'm looking forward to this, will you all be doing this online?

Just try to avoid the scene where she tries to be sexy by quoting lines she read in a girlie magazine, that is soooo "Her Alibi".

An aside, BBB, does it bother you that Jules refers to "Brad" as both "Brad" and "Brent" in the scene just before he breaks out Ezekiel 25:17? Not as big a "Q" blunder as the "Who Shot Nice Guy Eddie" problem in Reservoir Dogs, however!

Good luck, all. And please make sure the bride broker is nothing like Borat. "you want to maka the sexy time with thees one? Niiiiiice!!"

It doesn't bother me...I wish Q would have just made up his mind!

 

[WhiteWave48]

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[BradBigBrain]

No girlie magazine from me, I can assure you. And definitely no Borat! As for immediate online exposure of our impromptu writing talents as well as our knickers - I'm not sure. I'll consult the others on the current state of their long johns.

No long johns on!

Ask me about my state of knickers.

 

[ninefe2dg]

Ida gone w/ Brad...

It doesn't bother me...I wish Q would have just made up his mind!

I worked with a guy named Brad, and he was actually quite smart. He never ate a Big Kahuna Burger though. Brad's got my vote.

 

[ninefe2dg]

No girlie magazine from me, I can assure you. And definitely no Borat! As for immediate online exposure of our impromptu writing talents as well as our knickers - I'm not sure. I'll consult the others on the current state of their long johns.

Good luck w/ whatever you decide. If it's impromptu writing vs. knickers, well, that depends whose knickers they are, I s'pose...

 

[WhiteWave48]

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[BradBigBrain]

I worked with a guy named Brad, and he was actually quite smart. He never ate a Big Kahuna Burger though. Brad's got my vote.

My girlfriend's a vegetarian.....

 

[BradBigBrain]

Knickers? Thinking... thinking...

Knickers... panties... boxers... briefs... and all in Russian, too?

but I am not wearing any knickers!

 

[WhiteWave48]

Phew!

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[BradBigBrain]

Phew! I was wondering...

When SxRx and AS come online, it'll be a matter of panties vs pantaloons. They'll have to fight it out between them.

No need to wonder.

As far as SxRx and AS go, I think it's a matter of no panties vs. no pantaloons.

 

[WhiteWave48]

Touché

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[BradBigBrain]

Touché

LOL..I think it would be a freaky story.

 

[SxRx]

Loveable Bad Guy Bride Broker

Touché

Well, this has definitely proven to be incredibly intriguing. Never say never. I don't believe we could do a period piece around the plot that seems to have taken off. With BBB having his Russian background and goodly number of Lit stories, AS his strong start up rep and extensive Lit stories and WW wonderful womanly touch with her stories I guess I can pass on a period piece. The overall dynamics are too good to pass up. If we do the Russian mail-order bride it'll be a fairly modern piece.

BBB may want to take on the broker role since it will be such a pivotal role, although I did a character in RP as a bouncer in a speakeasy so I suppose I could resurrect '8 ball' and Russianize him. Sort of a rough hewn fellow with good street smarts, handy with his fists, devilish charm and a penchant for the ladies. I just don't know if I can do justice to the culture and make up of a 'Ruskie'. Thinking and planning.

All I ask is that sometime down the line, someone be willing help me bring to life my period piece mail-order bride. Like Sarah Plain & Tall, except she'll be Sherrie Hot & Sexy or some such nonsense! Maybe from New Orleans.

I'll be working on this and look to here from WW and all the rest about how to hammer this out and where to start.

SxRx

 

[BradBigBrain]

Well, this has definitely proven to be incredibly intriguing. Never say never. I don't believe we could do a period piece around the plot that seems to have taken off. With BBB having his Russian background and goodly number of Lit stories, AS his strong start up rep and extensive Lit stories and WW wonderful womanly touch with her stories I guess I can pass on a period piece. The overall dynamics are too good to pass up. If we do the Russian mail-order bride it'll be a fairly modern piece.

BBB may want to take on the broker role since it will be such a pivotal role, although I did a character in RP as a bouncer in a speakeasy so I suppose I could resurrect '8 ball' and Russianize him. Sort of a rough hewn fellow with good street smarts, handy with his fists, devilish charm and a penchant for the ladies. I just don't know if I can do justice to the culture and make up of a 'Ruskie'. Thinking and planning.

All I ask is that sometime down the line, someone be willing help me bring to life my period piece mail-order bride. Like Sarah Plain & Tall, except she'll be Sherrie Hot & Sexy or some such nonsense! Maybe from New Orleans.

I'll be working on this and look to here from WW and all the rest about how to hammer this out and where to start.

SxRx

I'm game!

 

[SxRx]

Btw

If my character holds, then he will have a strict policy that all his brides-to-be must go 'commando'. He will tell them that this 'very American' and 'very healthy 'as weell'. He will then flash his dark, rogue charm and the panties come down! 'Oh, by thee way, darlink, while u r so 'dressed', I must eenspeck ... its OK, just puulll up dress .. yes, that is very good. very, very good' As we say heere in A-M-E-R-I-C-A - A-1.' Bride to be blushes, but is committed to her new life and dreams. If all it takes is to flash this bum, and a little, eh, fool around, OK, I no fool. LOL


SxRx

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Thinking...

Wow, this is like throwing a cigarette on a dry bush and discovering a wildfire the next day. The flames are nearly burning my... thingies.

BBB, so glad to see you're on board. I say let's have fun!

SxRx, I didn't realize at the time you had a period piece in mind. I apologize if I overwhelmed you with my idea, as it was your idea that sparked this. But the rush of inspiration could not be stopped. The whole "modern day" thing clicked in my head and as it were we were (apparently) at a pause so I thought that injecting an idea could be helpful.

Ok, so here's how I see it. Same plot, AS as the harried businessman in awe of a colleague with a hot chick on his arm, who sends him to Sx, an underworld kind of guy, who is linked to BBB, a Russian thug, who scouts for willing (or maybe semi-willing in trouble Russian women) to fill orders.

This is just an idea. I don't own the playground (just all the FUN toys - LOL).

Any input?

 

[BradBigBrain]

Wow, this is like throwing a cigarette on a dry bush and discovering a wildfire the next day. The flames are nearly burning my... thingies.

BBB, so glad to see you're on board. I say let's have fun!

SxRx, I didn't realize at the time you had a period piece in mind. I apologize if I overwhelmed you with my idea, as it was your idea that sparked this. But the rush of inspiration could not be stopped. The whole "modern day" thing clicked in my head and as it were we were (apparently) at a pause so I thought that injecting an idea could be helpful.

Ok, so here's how I see it. Same plot, AS as the harried businessman in awe of a colleague with a hot chick on his arm, who sends him to Sx, an underworld kind of guy, who is linked to BBB, a Russian thug, who scouts for willing (or maybe semi-willing in trouble Russian women) to fill orders.

This is just an idea. I don't own the playground (just all the FUN toys - LOL).

Any input?

Is WW48 writing the Russian woman part? I can help her with the accent and we can fill in some words.

I like the part about being the thug, but, a kind of a Humphrey Bogart kind of thug.

Maybe the girl is willing and she'll do whatever she has to to get to the states, including an audition with the Russian thug and the underworld guy so that they can vouch for the goods to the harried business man, who needs a trophy bride to take to the company get-togethers. Also, she knows the rules...if she's married she can stay. And she wants to stay.

 

[WhiteWave48]

No to 'no pantaloons'

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[WhiteWave48]

Russian bride, please

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[SxRx]

Got to work on your images . . .

Wow, this is like throwing a cigarette on a dry bush and discovering a wildfire the next day. The flames are nearly burning my... thingies.

BBB, so glad to see you're on board. I say let's have fun!

SxRx, I didn't realize at the time you had a period piece in mind. I apologize if I overwhelmed you with my idea, as it was your idea that sparked this. But the rush of inspiration could not be stopped. The whole "modern day" thing clicked in my head and as it were we were (apparently) at a pause so I thought that injecting an idea could be helpful.

Ok, so here's how I see it. Same plot, AS as the harried businessman in awe of a colleague with a hot chick on his arm, who sends him to Sx, an underworld kind of guy, who is linked to BBB, a Russian thug, who scouts for willing (or maybe semi-willing in trouble Russian women) to fill orders.

This is just an idea. I don't own the playground (just all the FUN toys - LOL).

Any input?

AS:

Dude, first you talk about just letting a horse kick you in the groin, now your talking about flames burning the same area. I feel your pain!

As far as the original plot and period piece, it was just an idea that will have to wait it's turn. As we've discovered, the Lit muse had a mind of it's own and let it be so.(I bow and chant, 'All hail the Literotica muse', 'All hail ...'

I would feel much better about my character as an American underworld fellow, perhaps with connections to the new world mobsters such as the Russian thug to be played by BBB. With all the authors involved this should be a great piece or a great flop, but we'll have fun boys and girls!

WW's suggestion to make it a chain story suggests that AS would start the first link in the story chain and hook the reader with his story about his angst, harried life, then suddenly being dazzled by his colleague's incredible trophy bride. Her being Russian, with her dark looks, sharp features and sexy accented voice just gets to him. (Not to own the playground here but to ask that AS learn to share with all his great toys.) So many directions this could go just at this point with the harried businessman and the trophy wife.

Then, somehow, he connives his buddy to cough up my character's name and we move into the next link in the chain - my story. Then link into BBB's and WW and so forth. How do we cross link important nuggets where we might need to share our perceptions of our piece and character? I guess we can work things out as we go. Other than some RP stuff, this shared authoring is new to me.

So we write in private, email our piece to each other, then publish? How should the logistics of this work?

WW - You are the woMAN for the bride to be. Come on, give me a break. You have got to be the bride. After all you are referred by fans as the veritable 'Man's Guide to Women'. Oh, you were just being facetious.

 

[WhiteWave48]

Psst! Time to synchronize watches!

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[BradBigBrain]

'Man's guide'? And I must live up to this? Hmmmm....

It's time to synchronize watches on all this. My little red hot Russian spies have been at work and they know where to find you. When you receive the next message via another means, read, chew and swallow before you digest.

I've got my watch synch'd up and ready to go.

 

[WhiteWave48]

The master plan

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