Sensual metaphors

bluerains said:
:) It's Electric!

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As originally performed by Marcia Griffiths, a Jamaican born reggae singer, she sang backup and toured extensively with Bob Marley's band

Electric Boogie started the "Electric Slide" line dance craze in 1989
you make me think of a dancy tune for the toys...bad girl...

You can't see it
It's electric!
You gotta feel it
It's electric!
Ooh, it's shakin'
It's electric!

Jiggle-a-mesa-cara
She's a pumpin' like a matic
She's a movin' like electric
She sure got the boogie

You gotta know it
It's electric
Boogie woogie, woogie!
Now you can't hold it
It's electric
Boogie woogie, woogie!
But you know it's there,
Yeah here there everywhere

I've got to move,
I'm going on a party ride
I've got to groove, groove, groove,
And from this music I just can't hide.

Are you comin' with me?
Come let me take you on a party ride
And I'll teach you, teach you, teach you
I'll teach you the electric slide

Some say it's mystic
It's electric
Boogie woogie, woogie
You can't resist it
It's electric
Boogie woogie, woogie
You can't do without it
It's electric
Boogie woogie, woogie
Jiggle-a-mesa-cara she's a pumpin' like a matic
She's movin' like electric
She sure got the boogie

Don't wanna lose it
It's electric
Boogie woogie, woogie
But you can't choose it
It's electric
Boogie woogie, woogie
But you know it's there,
Yeah here there everywhere

I've got to move,
Come let me take you on a party ride
And I'll teach you, teach you, teach you
I'll teach you the electric slide

Some say it's mystic
It's electric
Boogie woogie, woogie
You can't resist it
It's electric
Boogie woogie, woogie
You can't do without it
It's electric
Boogie woogie, woogie
Jiggle-a-mesa-cara she's a pumpin' like a matic
She's movin' like electric
She sure got the boogie

Don't wanna lose it
It's electric
Boogie woogie, woogie
But you can't choose it
It's electric
Boogie woogie, woogie
But you know it's there,
Yeah here there everywhere


wooohooo!!!
girls and their toys
mmmm mmmm good (~_~)
 
wip

Coiled in facade,
cold remnant of a
fair weathered lark
encased in no sweet by and by;
he pleas my braid of broken light,
talon on the hunt in southern sky.

His love sustains a howling impulse
in symbols of his superiority.

Quavering beneath his cloak
I am blackened in his harvest.

death_on_the_pale_horse.jpg
 
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bluerains said:
Coiled in facade,
cold remnant of a
fair weathered lark
encased in no sweet by and by;
he pleas my braid of broken light,
talon on the hunt in southern sky.

His love sustains a howling impulse
in symbols of his superiority.

Quavering beneath his cloak
I am blackened in his harvest.

death_on_the_pale_horse.jpg


tha dark horse
rides into the shadows
of my mind


(I always look forward to these images you post!)
 
Fisher of Men

Christians called him a bastard.
"I guess that's the nature of things",
a mother mourned,
while casting ruby red blossoms of spring
into the ashes to fertile sea.
Should she apologize for twining in the dark
within a pale existence of longevity I wonder .
sirene.jpg
 
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bluerains said:
Christians called him a bastard.
"I guess that's the nature of things",
a mother mourned,
while casting ruby red blossoms of spring
into the ashes to fertile sea.
Should she apologize for twining in the dark
within a pale existence of longevity I wonder .
sirene.jpg


mermaid dash
by My Erotic Tale ©

Basking
in the bright moon light
night sky spray diamonds
sparkle still water
around one rock
in a vast sea of blue
mystic hue

A fingers swirl
ripples her thoughts
reflected by the depth
a conscious tail entranced
by a stormy tale
back with a sigh she lay
magnificent mermaid

Long golden hair
teasing trailing braids
on rock bare she laid
Pieces sharade
female sushi live
collective beauty
of the deep blue

heart tied and tangled
swimming so many realms
from the sailors of distant helms
to mermen with fishy film
and then there is ... him!

Captain Soo Kim

A splash of her tail
sends water sprayed
fell into a frustrated daze
sucking her finger in memories rage
sling of seaweed
hair flare
in the distance
a bullhorn blare

A swish of a tail
a smile prevail
pupils gleamed two more stars
a spurt arm dive
and silent water splash

away the mermaid dash
 
am still cheking in ...

My Erotic Trail said:
where o' where
is the blue?
when time permits...


half past two,

forboding night dawns
a new mourning dove
dripping in distress with
a crocodile dance on a rayless moon.,
whirling with the wolf drunk on its fumes
 
bluerains said:
when time permits...


half past two,

forboding night dawns
a new mourning dove
dripping in distress with
a crocodile dance on a rayless moon.,
whirling with the wolf drunk on its fumes


the closes thing to MLP~ <BIGRIN
(~_~)
 
ty...

My Erotic Trail said:
the closes thing to MLP~ <BIGRIN
(~_~)

I guess the two cross sometimes.. this is the finished lines...

crystalball.jpg

Violet Mourning

Foreboding night dawns
a new mourning dove
dripping in distress under
a crocodile dance of winter's ray less moon.

Whirling wolf drunk on Heaven's fumes,
trapped in tragedies tangle,
howls aside her cooing swoon,
breathing moonshine from a firefly,
scintilla spring sacrificed.
 
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bluerains said:
I guess the two cross sometimes.. this is the finished lines...

crystalball.jpg

Violet Mourning

Foreboding night dawns
a new mourning dove
dripping in distress under
a crocodile dance of winter's ray less moon.

Whirling wolf drunk on Heaven's fumes,
trapped in tragedies tangle,
howls aside her cooing swoon,
breathing moonshine from a firefly,
scintilla spring sacrificed.

POWERFUL... native american indian flare
i like (~_*)
 
ty...

My Erotic Trail said:
POWERFUL... native american indian flare
i like (~_*)
still think it needs a bit of something to open up the meaning with tampering too much...any thoughts would be helpful..blue
 
bluerains said:
still think it needs a bit of something to open up the meaning with tampering too much...any thoughts would be helpful..blue

I agree it needs clarifying blue....although it may just be me being obtuse, but there seem to be a lot of metaphors in opposition... :confused:
 
I know

tungtied2u said:
I agree it needs clarifying blue....although it may just be me being obtuse, but there seem to be a lot of metaphors in opposition... :confused:
is why I haven't posted...it..
I like the feel of it but, its missing some of the words to turn on the light of it...
its about the man who always falls for the damsel in distress...usually at his own expense..so to speak...with a bit of pagan flare...any idea... :)
 
bluerains said:
is why I haven't posted...it..
I like the feel of it but, its missing some of the words to turn on the light of it...
its about the man who always falls for the damsel in distress...usually at his own expense..so to speak...with a bit of pagan flare...any idea... :)

the call of the wild
brings with it risks,
running in cold white light
answering the instinctual howl
treading paths well worn
from ages of urges, only to find
what you thought was a mating call
was naught but hunger for heat
a momentary feeding
quickly forgotten once needs were met

:eek:
 
dang...

thats getting into the mix and grinding out the knots...
its really good...I tend to be a bit difficult in finding simple ways to put things....
you should post it...am honored for the dissection...ty...blue

tungtied2u said:
the call of the wild
brings with it risks,
running in cold white light
answering the instinctual howl
treading paths well worn
from ages of urges, only to find
what you thought was a mating call
was naught but hunger for heat
a momentary feeding
quickly forgotten once needs were met

:eek:
 
howdy yall

I got tongue tied in a conversation
staring into the wild blue yonder

so I sat poetically
and pondered.
 
She Rocks

Curse this comfort zone
for wielding its scalpel
piercing fear
from the lullaby net
of her safety.

Tranced in
this rocking bassinet
world,
we remain your
petrified relic
our chambers
unfurled.
eye.jpg
 
bluerains said:
Curse this comfort zone
for wielding its scalpel
piercing fear
from the lullaby net
of her safety.

Tranced in
this rocking bassinet
world,
we remain your
petrified relic
our chambers
unfurled.
eye.jpg
Hey blue, just passing through and saw this. I likes this. :)
 
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Welcome to seduction
of rain singularity.
A station of try not to
cry while liquidity gathers
moans from bonfires
of it hurts so good.
The watcher flips another card
on the St John’s river....
 
wip

Faith brought her in from the rain, fractured.
Raven eyes remain on wet branches,
silent sentinel,
beatific servant bound to tragic endings.

Her never-ending notion
to conquer the crown of might
and her willingness to be foiled again,
dries the wind , opens cold wings...
navigates navy blue
 
My shot? Ah...

Smirking, leaning against the wall
Watching my little slave in tortured, pleasured agony
Teased, released, teased, released
Pulled to the brink of the break of the bliss
Needing no denial other than
Denying the denial
Needing only a touch, a kiss
Any little thing to push you over the edge

I sip my caffeine, eyes glancing down
Into the rim, focusing on the tea leaves below
I smile, I nod, I know it's time
To hurt you more and serve you more
To make sure you're wrongly treated
Now teased, released, teased, pleased
So I lean forward, tipping, slipping
Letting hot liquid scream forth
Landing on your inner thighs and ricocheting away
Droplets touching your sex
Your clit
Your lips
And rudely yanking your orgasm out of you

...you have always been a pain-slut, hm?
 
Zingoleb said:
Smirking, leaning against the wall
Watching my little slave in tortured, pleasured agony
Teased, released, teased, released
Pulled to the brink of the break of the bliss
Needing no denial other than
Denying the denial
Needing only a touch, a kiss
Any little thing to push you over the edge

I sip my caffeine, eyes glancing down
Into the rim, focusing on the tea leaves below
I smile, I nod, I know it's time
To hurt you more and serve you more
To make sure you're wrongly treated
Now teased, released, teased, pleased
So I lean forward, tipping, slipping
Letting hot liquid scream forth
Landing on your inner thighs and ricocheting away
Droplets touching your sex
Your clit
Your lips
And rudely yanking your orgasm out of you

...you have always been a pain-slut, hm?


dominion needs its watchers....and players..such is ricohet...
 
bluerains said:
Faith brought her in from the rain, fractured.
Raven eyes remain on wet branches,
silent sentinel,
beatific servant bound to tragic endings.

Her never-ending notion
to conquer the crown of might
and her willingness to be foiled again,
dries the wind , opens cold wings...
navigates navy blue


navigates navy blue
into the cold tomorrows
churning yesterday's seas
on the silent raven's notion
 
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