Sensual metaphors

[bluerains]

thoughts unfolding in the now...wip

(((((

 

[hmmnmm]

daring to force change
qualms divide currents
time has fallen to trickling drifts
codes unwind twixt the flow
sense has bedeviled spindled apex
body spins in discord splicing circuitry
resonation winks allowing
mind to unwind
unseen

Intention was to add, not necessarily a word or metaphor, but a fruit, which word feels good on the tongue: Mango. Had one the other day - first real fresh one in years, and it offered no choice but to condider it, the sensual propensities of the mango, inside, outside, even the word itself: mango. Rhymes with tango.

Then I noticed the words above...
"trickling drifts"

Nice.

 

[bluerains]

I like the word

Intention was to add, not necessarily a word or metaphor, but a fruit, which word feels good on the tongue: Mango. Had one the other day - first real fresh one in years, and it offered no choice but to condider it, the sensual propensities of the mango, inside, outside, even the word itself: mango. Rhymes with tango.

Then I noticed the words above...
"trickling drifts"

Nice.

I needed to add the reason for the poem and you made it work ty...blue

Island Angles

daring to force change
qualms divide currents
time has fallen to trickling drifts
codes unwind twixt the flow
sense has bedeviled spindled apex
body spins in discord splicing circuitry
resonation winks yielding in
mind bends unseen
night howls
rain sheds khaki clothing
Nassau rises
mangos drip Bahamaian juices
blue is integrated

 

[hmmnmm]

Oh yeah.

Khaki, rain, juices, bahamas

Love the khaki.

Khaki & Kinky

something alliterative?

 

[bluerains]

quickie

she draws featherlines
in goddess ink

his private twilight
joust shadows
blurring boundaries
of dangerous
beyond friendship

flickering unfettered
fantasy stretches skin
in the face
and limbs
become
instruments
for her tongue
in head to toe
metaphoric migration

 

[RhymeFairy]

he speaks

of the games we women play.
I play no games. honesty always.
time was, once
we were a team, now friendship bindes
two to one. always friendship. but
but
but
I remember nights, spent holding, caring
for more than here and now.
I remember wanting to spend my life with him
as partners
in crime and bed. spearing mother earth wide open
from tha pure passion that dripped
and screamed out her name, no
that was me, screaming,
moaning. wishing, believing
hoping.
for a life spent under tha covers
not buried alive, in memories.

 

[bluerains]

writing metaphoric live

Saturday was the last night
in the Que
walked through hallways
of yesterdays blues
tomorrows blues
tonights blues
drank a few german brews
just to help the Que
validate itself
in veiled perception
thinking an average thought
of a not so average wisdom
Que was buried in disquise...

 

[My Erotic Trail]

Saturday was the last night
in the Que
walked through hallways
of yesterdays blues
tomorrows blues
tonights blues
drank a few german brews
just to help the Que
validate itself
in veiled perception
thinking an average thought
of a not so average wisdom
Que was buried in disquise...

I haven't a que?
but I like reading blue... <grin

 

[bluerains]

The Weakest Link

sold in an etheric auction
her halo,
an empyrean design
forged by the likeness of Anakim,
captured by a
corporeal mutant
within weakness of want,
willing to sell his
hearts desire
for avarice

 

[hmmnmm]

sold in an etheric auction
her halo,
an empyrean design
forged by the likeness of Anakim,
captured by a
corporeal mutant
within weakness of want,
willing to sell his
hearts desire
for avarice

I haven't a que?
but I like reading blue...

Me too...!!!

 

[bluerains]

live metaphor wip

*THANKS* to all of you who read my codes of writing...often I write messages
to myself for a future life of self that may stumble upon the words and find meaning maybe even in 6565 ...or at least 71707...so I understand why one might not get a clear meaning behind the codes...its just my wired crossed mind
thinking...thanks to all of you who support my world... L

prearranged upon the cosmic clock
criss crossed by moonsilt
charred stars sunstroked
already we had our fun
yes, we tasted it mid air
this thing called melted
after the pulsing fire
we did drink
in tall grass blind
we linger there
devoured
depleted
redesigned
by ignition
frozen

 

[bluerains]

blue sharing a must radio listen

http://www.redicecreations.com/radio/2007/05may/RICR-070510.html

 

[bluerains]

live wip

To walk into a life of this
stressed out man
living beyond means
to be happy
brought great sorrow
to an already heavy heart
imbalanced, insecure,
frequency shook
foundations
beneath my feet
I felt your pain
I heard your fears
I bled your silent tears
in merlot veins
til my crystal body
did heave and swirl
the realm of you to the wind
and now,
as comfort sets in
walking the path along
the sea
still, my being
will never balance my world
without the harmony of yours

 

[bluerains]

Only for you,
would I make a morning memory
and seal it in the sun,
savoring each portal in moments,
starry eyes undone.

 

[bluerains]

wip hotwired

her secret center
draws him into
her hot pulsing universe
of pagan fevered swells

her doorway of femininity
open to his dreams of
thundering thrusts
and depth probes rock hard
so he can release his
cool pools of dampness
and extinguish a wildfire
burning out of control

 

[RhymeFairy]

her secret center
draws him into
her hot pulsing universe
of pagan fevered swells

her doorway of femininity
open to his dreams of
thundering thrusts
and depth probes rock hard
so he can release his
cool pools of dampness
and extinguish a wildfire
burning out of control

*fans-self*

Very erotic and sexy Blue ...

Your a sneaky lil one eh ~ Great imagery here !!

 

[My Erotic Trail]

Only for you,
would I make a morning memory
and seal it in the sun,
savoring each portal in moments,
starry eyes undone.

wow, I read this in the new poems list then came here and found the image that goes with it and I must say... I LIKE!!! (~_~)

 

[bluerains]

only for you II

to know the evening after
I was bathed in the distinct
fragrant textures
of such an ambrosial tongue
quickened my pulse
leaving rain print heat
beneath the tall grass ground..

 

[bluerains]

Tasting patchouli sweat,
buried in thighs seeping in sweetness,
mouths dine on scented saliva
blended by taste buds of
tongues slipping between fluid lips,
fed by cups of hunger ,
dripping in a thousand of flavors of flesh expired.

 

[bluerains]

wip live

a simple sapphire
to thee
I'd be
or an airborne orchid
on a giving tree
both cast a line
in time
you see,
so maybe
I'm not as perfect
as the green grass of home...

 

[My Erotic Trail]

a simple sapphire
to thee
I'd be
or an airborne orchid
on a giving tree
both cast a line
in time
you see,
so maybe
I'm not as perfect

as the green grass of home...

...or perhaps... (~_~) <grin

as jewels glistening
as flowers blooming

 

[tungtied2u]

hovering between elation and despair,
the dog's howl and traffic's roar
waiting for silence enough to hear
the soft breath of whispered words
wanting to be lifted upon currents
of care and comfort, carried to that stillness
where I can lie wrapped in warmth
immersed in the everything that is you

 

[bluerains]

that goes well with the theme Art!

...or perhaps... (~_~) <grin

as jewels glistening
as flowers blooming

however, I was writing for self about how I relate to someone else's belief system
ie green grass..am still working on this thus the wip..thoughts working in process... wips are my thoughts working out issues..and not fantasy metaphor..they may at some point end up as one is another form...nice to have you back...those ladies must be keeping you jumping these days... blue

 

[bluerains]

hovering between elation and despair,
the dog's howl and traffic's roar
waiting for silence enough to hear
the soft breath of whispered words
wanting to be lifted upon currents
of care and comfort, carried to that stillness
where I can lie wrapped in warmth
immersed in the everything that is you

hushed encounter
soothing words
drifting from land of plenty
smothered in kinetic kisses

 

[bluerains]

cauterized wet wings
dancing to her flaming heart
fused an epic thirst