Tzara
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Excellent poems, you two. Sigh, now I have yet another poet on my must read list. Bastards!Angeline said:I really like Daphne Gottlieb. She's more hard-edged than me, but I can relate to her voice. She sounds like a cousin or someone who lived on my dorm floor in college. Must be the Jewish thing. I totally got the Jewish Aetheist Mother poem.
watch your tense and case
daphne gottlieb
oh baby
i want to be your direct object.
you know, that is to say
i want to be on the other
side of all the verbs i know
you know how to use.
i've seen you conjugate:
i touch
you touched
you heard
she knows
who cares
i'm interested in
a few decent prepositions:
above, over, inside, atop,
below, around and
i'm sure there are more
right on the tip of
your tongue.
i am ready to spend
the present perfect
splitting your infinitive
there's an art to the way you
dangle your participle and
since we're being informal it's okay to
use a few contractions, like
wasn't (going to)
shouldn't (have)
and a conjunction:
but (did it anyway)
and i'm really really glad
you're not into dependent
clauses since all i'm really
interested in is your
bad, bad grammar
and your exclamation point.
(Uh, I mean, "bastard (that's you, DA) and, um, you pushy woman!" Or something like that.)
Hey. Those Tal Bagels were flat! Don't they know about yeast?
I owe you for the scallion cream cheese, though. My wife renewed her vows over that. Excellent stuff.