The MAZE OOC

[BiSmiley]

Yes, proof reading is torture. Editing is even worse.

Yep VERY evil process, good story though action romances nation wide kinkyness

 

[slippedhalo]

I look forward to reading it. As much as I write fiction I think my first best seller will end up being a biography. It's been a hell of a past couple of years...But, in a public forum no comment, lol.

 

[BiSmiley]

I look forward to reading it. As much as I write fiction I think my first best seller will end up being a biography. It's been a hell of a past couple of years...But, in a public forum no comment, lol.

Reaaaaallly?
click here if you've got time to kill its just the first chapter short an sweet.

if you can guess the main character preference you get a cookie...if I can find them

PS:yes Its an art site I draw too not very well but I try

 

[zoelikesjam]

Name: Amelia Campbell
Age: 18
Sex: Female
Orientation: Has found herself attracted to both females and males
Occupation: Currently without a job.
Height: 5'6
Weight: 8stone
Hair color: Chestnut brown, with deep red strands
Eye color: Bright Blue
Build: Small, slight. Described as tiny.
Personality: Friendly but secretive. Amelia is currently homeless, due to a huge falling out with her mother and step-father. She has been living out of seedy little motels for a few weeks now. She is easily taken advantage of due to her submissive nature. Still a virgin, and has had no experience with sex apart from the attempted abuse from her step-father. This has made her quite bitter, and street smart.

 

[Paulwilson57]

Name: Stephen Beckson
Age: 28
Sex: male
Orientation: secretly bi curious
Occupation: massive movie star
Height: 6,0
Weight: 198 pounds
Hair color: brown
Eye color: blue
Build: movie star buff with toned body, board shoulders
Personality: Very trusting, friendly

 

[BiSmiley]

Hello folks smiley here,

after the rest area I've an idea for the next challenge room but I don't want to steam roll whatever ideas you guys may have cooking so throw up what you're thinking and we can make a group decision on what to go with

I was thinking the Simon could give them the opportunity to get some clothes, each set of clothes has a catch to it a kinda kinky twist though its no revealed until they choose their outfit

The was also an idea of a 'hall of mirrors' where each character's worst fear comes to life the more they try to hide the truth of it or run from it (not my idea but definately worth bringing up)

 

[slippedhalo]

Um, well...that was my idea so now I don't need to say it, lol.

I also had an idea about perhaps someone having to volunteer for some sort of intimate piercing (nipples?) to save the others from a pit slowly filling with sharks, to be boiled alive once full...that might be for a grand finale of sorts, a very dangerous one.

 

[BiSmiley]

Um, well...that was my idea so now I don't need to say it, lol.

I also had an idea about perhaps someone having to volunteer for some sort of intimate piercing (nipples?) to save the others from a pit slowly filling with sharks, to be boiled alive once full...that might be for a grand finale of sorts, a very dangerous one.

You just gave me an evil idea

Two doors one reading ink & steel, the other silk and leather the group has to divide evenly three in each room
Ink and steel is all.about piercing and tattoos
The other is lingerie dresses and bondage gear
But the group in the opposite room has to make decisions for them I'm thinking or face penalties like your sharks or something then all dolled up they get sent out into the hall of mirrors

......maybe its far fetched but it should create some angry drama between the characters maybe

 

[slippedhalo]

oooh, interesting
I like the idea of making them make life altering decisions for the others. And, yet having to do so to save each other is really demented and cool.

 

[slippedhalo]

Note: ''Blew his cover'' makes more sense than "Lewis cover", food for thought.

 

[BiSmiley]

oooh, interesting
I like the idea of making them make life altering decisions for the others. And, yet having to do so to save each other is really demented and cool.

What can I say.... I have a slightly sadistic side
Are you thinking we should heap them all into the same boat or leave them separated

 

[BiSmiley]

Note: ''Blew his cover'' makes more sense than "Lewis cover", food for thought.

Lol sorry its a quick text correction thing my bad

 

[slippedhalo]

lol, ok I was confused at fist, then read it aloud and realized what you meant, then just found it kind of amusing.

 

[slippedhalo]

What can I say.... I have a slightly sadistic side
Are you thinking we should heap them all into the same boat or leave them separated

I think they would benefit from seeing each other suffer a bit. It's good for group bonding and interesting dynamics of tensions between people either growing or diminishing with these difficult situations and bonding exercises, ect.

 

[BiSmiley]

I think they would benefit from seeing each other suffer a bit. It's good for group bonding and interesting dynamics of tensions between people either growing or diminishing with these difficult situations and bonding exercises, ect.

It's an answer but not an answer then??
I meant should everyone go into the same room
Simon can always broadcast they're torment to each other monitors and stuff

 

[Superman6352]

I think they shoudl seperate again for a bit. People always behave a little more eraticaly when seperated from the group.

 

[BiSmiley]

Good point
And we get the whole reunion with emotions running high too...

 

[Superman6352]

And if we do split. I was thinking perhaps my and crystal should be separated for added suspense.

 

[BiSmiley]

And if we do split. I was thinking perhaps my and crystal should be separated for added suspense.

It's up to her but its a good idea

 

[BiSmiley]

When I get some free time I intend on making a kinda group photo drawing of all the characters.
why? you may ask because I can I'll prolly have'em standing around in towels or something provocative or nothing at all varying poses ect...

Examples of what it may come out like (though maybe a little better because I've improved a little)
Nude group
Clothed Group

Yes I know our characters wont be pointy eared critters so don't worry.
I post this here because I'm asking permission to draw your character
And if you can proved references to what they may look like(the character sheets can only help so much)

References peices I'm using to draw>>> Kris/Kristian<<<
to give you an idea of how I put things together

anyway get back to me on this I'd really love to draw this cast of characters

 

[slippedhalo]

I can never see what you post because I'm not a Deveantart member and I don't want to join the site just to have a peek. What if you tried something you can copy and paste your own stuff from like Photobucket?

I kind of already gave an idea of how Jessica looks. I have a thing for ginger characters.

 

[BiSmiley]

References for Kriss's/Kristian's look and examples of what the finished product may look like the first three NOT my art

general appearance

Hair

My art My art My art My art My art My art

 

[Superman6352]

I give my consent for the drawing. And if you like I can send a pic.

 

[BiSmiley]

I give my consent for the drawing. And if you like I can send a pic.

Cool feel free to send me a reference

whatcha of my idea of how Kris looks did it fit what you imagined?(question goes out too all of you )

 

[zoelikesjam]

you definitely have my permission! Slight description is in my character profile, but just to remind you

Height: 5'6
Weight: 8stone
Hair color: Chestnut brown, with deep red strands
Eye color: Bright Blue
Build: Small, slight. Described as tiny.

Have fun drawing!!!