The threads about haters on "Loving Wives" are true

[Jenny_Jackson]

The only Loving Wives story that would rate high will all the Trolls wanking in the audience is one where...
Wife is gang banged by the entire Chicago Bears Football Team.
Becomes a hooker while her unknowing husband is at work.
Has two or three lesbian affairs
Has 16 threesomes, foursomes or fivesomes.
Is murdered by her husband when he finds out.
Husband is arrested, tried and freed on the grounds of justifiable homicide, then given a ticker tape parade down Park Avenue in New York.

See? There's your entire story written for ya.

 

[lance gt]

Hey Jenny, that's close to what I wrote about, lol.

 

[sr71plt]

The only Loving Wives story that would rate high will all the Trolls wanking in the audience is one where...
Wife is gang banged by the entire Chicago Bears Football Team.
Becomes a hooker while her unknowing husband is at work.
Has two or three lesbian affairs
Has 16 threesomes, foursomes or fivesomes.
Is murdered by her husband when he finds out.
Husband is arrested, tried and freed on the grounds of justifiable homicide, then given a ticker tape parade down Park Avenue in New York.

See? There's your entire story written for ya.

Wouldn't a touch of incest push the rating higher?

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Wouldn't a touch of incest push the rating higher?

Possibly, SR, as would some Kiddy Porn, but that would be going too far.

 

[lance gt]

I'm wondering if my comment for the trolls to send me their story line will pan out. I can't wait to write about them. Time will tell

 

[ugelybobs]

Marriage, Divorce or sex

I'm so glad I found this thread if that's what it's called. I don't feel so bad about my new three part story getting slammed with out any reasons explained, just name calling and request for my death to be quick and painful.
I have a book written and its sequel half done. I ran into a block so I took some time away and wrote (Marriage Divorce or sex) as i enjoy writing short stories and fill i owe lit. for all the help they have given me getting my new hobby off the ground.
I wasn't expecting such heated emotions in the response to what was supposed to be a exercise in writing a dirty story with out all the dirty words.
I always try to give my best effort to any project I'm working on and hope some will enjoy the result of my early morning fantasies. I promise if I write any more loving wife stories it will be about wives that bring home barely legal foxy girls to do nasty things and leave. If it were only like that in real life I would have fucked my self to death by now.

 

[lance gt]

LOL, Bob. I read your Marriage story after seeing the nasty troll posts and yeah, it wasn't necessary. They're hard bunch to please, what with two factions warring with each other. You have the 'Burn the Bitch' group on one side, and the 'Let's make up and be nice' group on the other. I tried to please bvoth sides at once and BOTH sides attacked me for 'Payback's a Bitch'. So with no redemption in sight from anywhere, I spent a good deal of time Troll bashing just for the fun of it.
If you look at threads posted in different areas, you'll see that there are many that offer help in writing better. Story Feedback is one and Story Discussion Circle is another. as far as trolls are concerned, just ignore them and delete the comments. at least until you feel ready to have fun and do some troll bashing, just to get the edge off. lmao Lance

 

[ugelybobs]

tramp and the wild child

I was just writing to fill the void left from writers block. I didn't take Marriage divorce or sex seriously and wonder why it got so much response good or bad. I can't wait to see what kind of response Tramp and the wild child gets as it was written with lots of care and effort although it's my first real effort at pinning a true novel. I'm ok with all the negatives and think I'm ready to finish the second novel in that series. all told I'm enjoying writing these stories and the response I've received is giving me just the push I needed to get back to work. hope every one who reads my stuff enjoys them although it seems some doesn't.