I can't comment on votes - I am far too new as an author to have any meaningful input - but I can tell you I gave this 4 stars.So I posted a Hotwife/Cuckold Story today. It at first did amazing in the ratings, had the red H and all. But soon it was pummeled by low ratings, and Im conflicted as whether it was me, or whether it was the much hated subject matter of infidelity on Lit.
https://literotica.com/s/pimping-wife-for-ambition
Long story short I would love some kind, but honest feedback on the story. I caught one or two typos that I have going through with fixes in an edit. But they were not enough in my mind to rate so many low votes.
I had someone I know look at it, but I need to use an editor from here I think to be sure… Ive done that for other stories, just didn’t go that route this time since I had someone else willing.
Any tips would be nice, or if you liked it or it was half way decent I would love to hear that too to boost some confidence.
Thanks all
I enjoyed the story, but (like others) thought the transition to pregnancy fetish was a bit abrupt.
I also noticed a few times that you had dialogue addressing "Mrs Riley" and "Mr Gregg" rather than Mrs Spade and Mr Finch .. if that was deliberate, then it comes across a little clumsily - oh, and you refer to "Mr Greg" (one g) at one stage.
But I enjoyed the story, and thought it had a good balance of character development and rumpy pumpy
