utagaki poetry challenge?

[flyguy69]

Yeah, I'd do Angeline. But I'd have done her before this poem, too. Hell; so far I'd do every one of these authors. I might have to slip Carrie inbetween Neo and I to keep people from talking, but I doubt she'll mind.

 

[Angeline]

Yeah, I'd do Angeline. But I'd have done her before this poem, too. Hell; so far I'd do every one of these authors. I might have to slip Carrie inbetween Neo and I to keep people from talking, but I doubt she'll mind.

fat chance of that after you called my poem cliche.

 

[flyguy69]

fat chance of that after you called my poem cliche.

Did I say cliche was bad? My whole life is cliche! Smother me in cliche kisses, baby!

 

[sandspike]

No cliche, an original

Tan love wrenches
in a skittle suit
blue over
bronze
head
over heels

 

[Tathagata]

Ichiban.
Snowbreasted highway
narrows to city clash
blinking, and neon blurs
windshield drops sliding
in the powder melt.

Ichiban.
Hold my hands,
dip my fingers there,
ginger lifted carefully.
Open my mouth two
wasabi tears.
Swallow.

Utaghki.

koibito,
snow falls
on the stone lantern,
and I whisper
"cherry blossoms".

In my palm
my offering
melts,
gone with a breath
like a dream of you.

Aijinchan,
all I can offer
will vanish,
shall we be
snowflakes together?

 

[Remec]

Early morning fog
drifting throughout the Garden
covers the wet grass
and hides you from me

The warm sun finally burns
through the mist, and I
find you at our Tree
waiting...words on your full lips,
offering me your love

How could I refuse?
You are ev'rything to me...
feed me, I am yours.

 

[Angeline]

I wish to be
a jet snowflake
melted to ink
and written not
on wind.

Flesh is canvas
for speaking
every word,
unutterable to any
but murmured
forgotten
in his chest.

Yoi yume o.

 

[champagne1982]

<snip>Hell; so far I'd do every one of these authors. I might have to slip Carrie inbetween Neo and I to keep people from talking, but I doubt she'll mind.

I don't do threesies -- but I am sometimes enticed to think about it...

from the definition posted
<snip>Later the term came to mean an exchange in which the mating was fictional.</snip>

OooH yeah, I forgot fictional.

(does anyone else think these hypoxic blue smilies need O2?)

 

[Angeline]

I don't do threesies -- but I am sometimes enticed to think about it...
OooH yeah, I forgot fictional.

(does anyone else think these hypoxic blue smilies need O2?)

Me.

And a few extra blankets. I think they must be my neighbors....

 

[annaswirls]

anti-gaki

anti-gaki


this one takes the prize

 

[Savage Kitten]

Tan love wrenches
in a skittle suit
blue over
bronze
head
over heels

Here I am, trying to envision a rolling mountain side with lush green trees which could be concealing the lover of my dreams, what I would say to him to lure him to me.

AND YOU!! argggggggggg!!! You are making me ache for the smell of the suntan oils at the beach, the taste of salt in the air, and the soft sting of the sun on my cheeks.

DANG YOU!

 

[sandspike]

I am what I am

Here I am, trying to envision a rolling mountain side with lush green trees which could be concealing the lover of my dreams, what I would say to him to lure him to me.

AND YOU!! argggggggggg!!! You are making me ache for the smell of the suntan oils at the beach, the taste of salt in the air, and the soft sting of the sun on my cheeks.

DANG YOU!

Sorry Kitten. The idea seemed cool to me. Then I noticed a couple of av's,
Angeline in that suit, Pat has a picture of a beach house. I forgot about the
bamboo forest and went home. My hope was to start posting on these
boards, something I haven't done in the past. These visuals and a long
winter have done me in. Sandspike has gone back to the beach. Walk with
me as the summer heats up, I'll show you life as I simple as it gets: tans,
sands, beach bands, and of course longneck amber beauties. Go back to the
forest and find the poets who write the words of enchantment. I'm going to
make some ferry reservations.

 

[Angeline]

Sorry Kitten. The idea seemed cool to me. Then I noticed a couple of av's,
Angeline in that suit, Pat has a picture of a beach house. I forgot about the
bamboo forest and went home. My hope was to start posting on these
boards, something I haven't done in the past. These visuals and a long
winter have done me in. Sandspike has gone back to the beach. Walk with
me as the summer heats up, I'll show you life as I simple as it gets: tans,
sands, beach bands, and of course longneck amber beauties. Go back to the
forest and find the poets who write the words of enchantment. I'm going to
make some ferry reservations.

Yep. My av is wishful beach thinking. (And my poem Boardwalk Life is gonna be up at Thieves Jargon tomorrow. Yay!)

 

[Guest]

I don't do threesies -- but I am sometimes enticed to think about it...
OooH yeah, I forgot fictional.

(does anyone else think these hypoxic blue smilies need O2?)

Me.

And a few extra blankets. I think they must be my neighbors....

Ange's undies are cyanotic... I'm thinking they need some O2 by a special delivery system.

 

[Angeline]

Ange's undies are cyanotic... I'm thinking they need some O2 by a special delivery system.

Ain't nothin chilly happenin there pal!

And it's a bathing suit, darnit!

 

[Savage Kitten]

Sandspike has gone back to the beach. Walk with
me as the summer heats up, I'll show you life as I simple as it gets: tans,
sands, beach bands, and of course longneck amber beauties.

*sighs* i know, i know

I live in Florida. I pity all of you who are suffering the snow and freezing temps. But, I am in torture here too! The beach and river are accessible to me, and we have even had temps in the high 70's already, BUT it's still too chilly to pull out the bathing suits!

Have a fun relaxing time on the ferry hun and hurry back and post some more

Sk~

 

[flyguy69]

Yep. My av is wishful beach thinking. (And my poem Boardwalk Life is gonna be up at Thieves Jargon tomorrow. Yay!)

Congrats, Blue Bunny!

 

[sandspike]

No..I won't do that

I walked backwards
kept her passing at bay
her mid rift a beach
between patches of blue

offering beer and lotion
Cd's and champagne
memories to carry
in her heart on her thighs

following bare foot
through sea oats and sand spurs
asphalt parking lot hell
never complaining until

utagaki forest appeared
tight wearing lute playing
cupid minded oriental poets
....No I won't do that



I'll see you guys on the other side of the woods. Please straighten
your cupid clothes before leaving the forest.

 

[twelveoone]

anti-gaki


this one takes the prize

wow, I just saw this
what's my prize?
is this where I stick this critter ?
I got blasted for this with low hidden votes
I should remember not to use words like that
"purred" 1201 laughs, rides off into the sunset with Johnny Derrida

 

[annaswirls]

what's that?
You finished your apple name challenge and need something to do?

we have not meet in the woods for a while...

 

[Tzara]

Uta, gawky

Rhenish miss whose whip-like limbs
wrap my body—Freya, limned.

To masked Teutonic goddess Sin,
I sing a bawdy, leering hymn—

Deutschland, Deutschland über alles,
Über alles in der Welt!

 

[wildsweetone]

They'll be there until nightfall

I know by the breeze
they hide in the trees, limbs
stretched along rough bark
torsos trembling, dreaming
of my touch
light upon heated skin.
Blossoms on cheek, chests
beaten by sun fingers
they have nailed their need
in my mind, before
the demise of Spring.