Variations - Words edition...

[SpicyBean99]

I hope I did it right (in ode to my dad, happy Father’s Day)

Sultans of Swing reminds me of you
The car, your laugh, your tapping hand
That song still feels like something true
Sultans of Swing reminds me of you
The chords still do what words can’t do
They bring you back, just like we planned
Sultans of Swing reminds me of you
The car, your laugh, your tapping hand

 

[Saltfountain]

I hope I did it right (in ode to my dad, happy Father’s Day)

Sultans of Swing reminds me of you
The car, your laugh, your tapping hand
That song still feels like something true
Sultans of Swing reminds me of you
The chords still do what words can’t do
They bring you back, just like we planned
Sultans of Swing reminds me of you
The car, your laugh, your tapping hand

That's fantastic! And yes, you did it right

 

[Awaywego]

Some would call them lovers,
but I call them friends.
Truth is, I lie alone beneath the covers.
Some would call them lovers,
the thought of that makes me shudder -
I never learned to swim in the deeper ends.
Some would call them lovers,
but I call them friends.

So thoughtful and insightful, love it

 

[Awaywego]

My garden is my happy place
It’s where I long to be
A peaceful, calm, inviting space
My garden is my happy place
Calm, still thoughts, a slower pace
My own sweet therapy
My garden is my happy place
It’s where I long to be

So true, this is great

 

[Cjbdd]

I love my weekend days
When the work week is done
The only time I can sit and laze
I love my weekend days
I can sit outside in the sun or haze
My only concern is having fun
I love my weekend days
When the work week is done

 

[Poeticwolf]

Music is the blood in my veins
my life poetry where I bleed.
Sad or happy it waxes and wanes.
Music is the blood in my veins
It's like raindrops on the window panes.
Little soliloquys escaped and freed.
Music is the blood in my veins
my life poetry where I bleed.

 

[Saltfountain]

Watching someone sexy shed their clothes
Slowly uncovering, revealing more
What's visible next, I don't know
Watching someone sexy shed their clothes
As more is removed, excitement grows
The clothes moving from on her to the floor
Watching someone sexy shed their clothes
Slowly uncovering, revealing more

 

[Cjbdd]

Watching someone sexy shed their clothes
Slowly uncovering, revealing more
What's visible next, I don't know
Watching someone sexy shed their clothes
As more is removed, excitement grows
The clothes moving from on her to the floor
Watching someone sexy shed their clothes
Slowly uncovering, revealing more

Thank you….I'm flattered

 

[Poeticwolf]

Thank you….I'm flattered

wait, is this a private show? hehe

 

[Saltfountain]

wait, is this a private show? hehe

Unfortunately not any show as its not that kind of thread, and someone else may object somewhat

 

[AngelicaS1780]

Ingredients become a dish
And show my care for you.
That you enjoy, the only wish.
Ingredients become a dish.
Start with a chicken, maybe fish
Some vegetables a farmer grew.
Ingredients become a dish
And show my care for you.

 

[Saltfountain]

I think I'm enjoying this week more than last week as there's obviously much more thought needed to make the poems work.

And they have been fucking fantastic!

 

[DannieB]

Dad, thinking of you makes me smile.
All the laughter, games, music, and fun.
Please stay with me for a long while.
Dad, thinking of you makes me smile.
Playing the guitar in your own easy style,
Grilling outside and soaking up the sun
Dad, thinking of you makes me smile.
All the laughter, games, music, and fun.

 

[lindi_85]

Watching someone sexy shed their clothes
Slowly uncovering, revealing more
What's visible next, I don't know
Watching someone sexy shed their clothes
As more is removed, excitement grows
The clothes moving from on her to the floor
Watching someone sexy shed their clothes
Slowly uncovering, revealing more

Did it work?

 

[Saltfountain]

Did it work?

Nope

 

[Awaywego]

Water, calms my life
Whether pool, lake, or ocean, I float
Outside world rife with strife
Water, calms my life
When hotter, slide in slow be an otter
Don't bake, be cool, it's my potion
Water, calms my life

 

[Saltfountain]

Water, calms my life
Whether pool, lake, or ocean, I float
Outside world rife with strife
Water, calms my life
When hotter, slide in slow be an otter
Don't bake, be cool, it's my potion
Water, calms my life

Nearly got it!

 

[Awaywego]

Nearly got it!

Well hell ..

 

[Awaywego]

Nearly got it!

Homework I guess ...

 

[Polranny]

I don't have time at all today
to sit and write some verse
particularly not a triolay
not even time to sit and play
a game of words on Lit today
I dont have time at all today
to sit and write some verse

 

[barefootgirl69]

@Saltfountain - thank you for this thread and for teaching us (me!) new things, and letting us get creative.

Because of this week's prompt, I wrote a triolet poem for my dad and put it in his card.


You chose to be my father
When I was just a child
I never needed another
You chose to be my father
And I became your daughter
Even if I was a little wild
You chose to be my father
When I was just a child

 

[Saltfountain]

I don't have time at all today
to sit and write some verse
particularly not a triolay
not even time to sit and play
a game of words on Lit today
I dont have time at all today
to sit and write some verse

Damn, that was close!

 

[Saltfountain]

Homework I guess ...

A (first line)
B (second line)
a (rhymes with first line)
A (repeat first line)
a (rhymes with first line)
b (rhymes with second line)
A (repeat first line)
B (repeat second line)

 

[Saltfountain]

Because of this week's prompt, I wrote a triolet poem for my dad and put it in his card.

This makes me very happy

 

[Polranny]

Damn, that was close!

It was nearly midnight and , being tired and emotional, I lost concentration!