What Do Women Think Of These Story Scenarios?

[Tony88888]

Women's Halloween Chapters

I'm now writing a Halloween scene for the heroine in my story.

Women, what types of erotic, totally unrestrained sexuality would you like to read about at a private Halloween sex party where no one there knew you?

What things would you like to see happen to her or things she would at last be free to try at least once?

Make it hot!!!!

Thanks,
Tony

 

[Tony88888]

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[Tony88888]

I would very much like to hear female input on the story subjects

I'm writing new chapters now to my story Discovering My Nasty Wife on Literotica and wanted some female input on the subject.

Thanks Tony

 

[LustiRusti]

Hi Tony! I'm sure you're not looking for opinions on a Halloween story anymore, right?

But, I have replied to your poll! Some of the choices I marked off were "several men cumming all over the woman", "the husband made to kiss his wife after another man came in it", "creampies", "going down on two cocks at once"... I think there may have been more, but those 4 stood out in my mind once I hit the reply button!

Are there any other questions you have for us women?


~Kenzie

 

[Tony88888]

Questions for the women

Thanks for warming the thread up Rusti and thanks for voting.

I do have a few questions. I want to write more about the feelings and emotions of the star females in my stories.

I'd like to hear from you and the other females out there what feelings and emotions a woman feels or fantasizes that she would feel when she is:

Going down on two or more cocks
Kissing her husband after her lover cums in her mouth
When her husband is licking her clean after her lover has filled her
Several men are cumming all over her
She is watching a straight male suck anothers cock
And also what turns them on about a man's cum

Hearing these emotions from females will help me write better for my female readers and make my stories dripping wet for them, which is one thing I want to do.

Here are two of my stories.

My Wife's Fantasy Lover (Won Story of the Month)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=25471

Discovering My Nasty Wife (Downloaded over 150,000 times)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=25477

Thanks for your help and interest.

Tony

 

[LustiRusti]

Re: Questions for the women

I'd like to hear from you and the other females out there what feelings and emotions a woman feels or fantasizes that she would feel when she is:

Going down on two or more cocks
Kissing her husband after her lover cums in her mouth
When her husband is licking her clean after her lover has filled her
Several men are cumming all over her
She is watching a straight male suck anothers cock
And also what turns them on about a man's cum

1.) I've never gone down on two cocks at the same time before. The idea excites me greatly, though! I can only imagine feeling like such a slut (that's a good thing!) for stretching my mouth to take two cocks at the same time!

2.)I've never kissed a man immediately after having his (or any other man's) cum in my mouth. Usually I've swallowed and taken a drink of water, or I have brushed my teeth even, out of respect for the man. But, I think a scenario of a cuck husband being "forced" to kiss his wife after another man came in her mouth is a hot one!

3.)I have had "creampies" licked clean from me before! It is a wonderful feeling being eaten out any time, of course, but knowing a man actually wants to while you still have cum inside you is a huge turn on!

4.)I've never experienced bukkake, but I want to! I get sooooo turned on by the thought of having many men jacking off in a circle around me and having all of them aim for my face, or to feel their cum everywhere on my body! It is a fantasy I hope to fulfill one day.

5.)Now, I've never been a very big fan of lables, and I don't think any man sucking another's cock is "straight". I know there is a "fetish" for "gay men turning straight men" or "bicurious" men, but I really don't believe they are straight. I enjoy watching two men enjoying each other's bodies greatly, though!

6.)What turns me on about a man's cum? I love the way it feels when it hits my face, and I love the way it feels inside me. All men's cum tastes differently, so I can't exactly say I "love" the taste. There have been times in my life where I most certainly have not!

I hope these answers help you some. Hopefully more women respond for you as well!


~Kenzie

 

[jack jackson]

Tony,
I've really enjoyed your stories and like your ideas. For me, what makes them hot is the mental part, how the wife teases the husband and takes control over the relationship and what he does. That's why I think the hottest threesome scenario is when the cuckolded husband has to watch while the hot wife gets fucked. Then his having to eat the creampie afterwards and being teased about it is really exciting. I think if you had the husband made to clean off (licking, sucking) the lover's cock afterwards that that would be good, too.
Or you might start a scene off by the wife making the husband jerk off onto her pussy, to help her get nicely lubricated for the huge lover's cock, but not letting the husband actually fuck her until after the lover has had his way.
So you can see that my interest is more about the husband being made to be submissive and serving his increasingly hot, horny wife.

 

[Tony88888]

Reviving the Poll and thread

Wow, I can't believe I've been away this long. I wrote my two stories and then lay my pen down. Well my new girlfriend has convinced me to pick it back up and share my experiences and fantasies again.

I'd love for the female readers to let me know what you think of the story scenarios in the Poll above.

I'd like to hear any thoughts you have on what turns you on reading about or fantasizing about.

Oh if you want to read my two MFM stories they are:

'My Wife's Fantasy Lover' at:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=25471

'Discovering My Nasty Wife' at:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=25477


I look forward to reviving the poll and thread and hearing what you'd like to read about in my new upcoming stories.

Tony88888

 

[AnnOnymousFantasia]

Personally, the whole idea of cuckolding or having married couples involved with "others" tends to turn me off. I don't care if others like it, do it, whatever, I'm just not attracted to this particular scenario. Then again, I've never been married, so perhaps I just don't empathize.

On the other hand, the idea of two bi or straight guys "coaxing" (and you can take that to run anywhere from forceful to romantic) a woman into bed with them.... And you can include all the cum you want. ::Shiver:: There's a handful of good stories out there, but most of the threesome stories focus on infidelity or MFF (again, no personal empathy there, not that matters to me if others like it or not).

 

[abstract]

The results of this poll are very surprising as I've had quite a few women tell me they are completely turned off by m/m interaction. I also remember seeing the results of a poll in a newspaper (for what it is worth), that had well below half the female respondents saying it turned them on. IIRC, the reverse (ie. men being turned on by f/f sex) was something like 75%. Which didn't surprise me at all.

 

[Roleplay_Mom]

I read both your stories and enjoyed them greatly, especially the dialogue and creampie eating. I'd LOVE to see things go further, with one or both of the guys trying oral bi (with wife's encouragement/help).

I also find the following ideas arousing:

1. wife sucking both cocks at the same time
2. snowballing (lover cumming in wife's mouth and she shares deep kiss w/hubby)
3. hubby licking her face clean after a nasty facial

Thanks for warming the thread up Rusti and thanks for voting.

I do have a few questions. I want to write more about the feelings and emotions of the star females in my stories.

I'd like to hear from you and the other females out there what feelings and emotions a woman feels or fantasizes that she would feel when she is:

Going down on two or more cocks
Kissing her husband after her lover cums in her mouth
When her husband is licking her clean after her lover has filled her
Several men are cumming all over her
She is watching a straight male suck anothers cock
And also what turns them on about a man's cum

Hearing these emotions from females will help me write better for my female readers and make my stories dripping wet for them, which is one thing I want to do.

Here are two of my stories.

My Wife's Fantasy Lover (Won Story of the Month)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=25471

Discovering My Nasty Wife (Downloaded over 150,000 times)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=25477

Thanks for your help and interest.

Tony

 

[Tony88888]

bumping in the night

It's been a while since I'd visited this forum and thought I'd give it a bump of life.

I'm an erotic writer and would like to get the feedback of female readers on which of these subjects most arouse them.

Your feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks,
Tony

 

[jeninflorida]

I don't get the whole two cock's in one place, think its a guy fantasy.

I had to add more "cream pie" stuff as that's what the readers wanted

I love to write erotic stories for women and would like to know what women feel about these two scenarios in a story about 'two men and one woman'.


1. 'Cream Pie' senarios

2. Where her straight or maybe bi male lovers go down on each other for her.


I have put a poll where you can vote for those senarios you like.

If you have any other erotic story ideas I'd love to hear them.

Thanks Tony

 

[Tony88888]

Thanks Jen,

I appreciate your input.

I think the two cocks 'in one place' has been misinterpreted. I didn't really mean in one place as much as in one love making session.

Most of the feed back I've gotten from male readers is that they enjoy the idea of a cream pie. I had no idea that turned so many men on.

I'd like to hear from more female readers on that subject. Is it a turn on for them too?

Tony

 

[sunandshadow]

I love mmf stories, but the kind I like are the erotic romance novels where either the two men are bi and already lovers, or there is a shortage of women and the two men are forced to work together to win one of the rare women.

What I did with my own writing is come up with a 3-gender species of human-like aliens. That way I can treat two of the genders as male, which makes an mmf triad the normal/ideal marriage in their culture, it provides a reason that one 'male' is tall and muscular and the other slender and petite, and all three genders are necessary to create a child, so no one gets reproductively excluded or cuckolded. If anyone else wanted to write something similar I'd read it.

 

[Tony88888]

Now that's some creative thinking with the three gender thing. It could be an interesting read.

Thanks for your input.

I'm writing a new MMF story now. It seems a lot of readers want to see the men as straight but still having a bisexual experience. Do most women feel like you and want to watch the guys in the story have oral sex?

 

[sunandshadow]

Now that's some creative thinking with the three gender thing. It could be an interesting read.

Thanks for your input.

I'm writing a new MMF story now. It seems a lot of readers want to see the men as straight but still having a bisexual experience. Do most women feel like you and want to watch the guys in the story have oral sex?

IME women are split pretty strongly into those who want to see _romance_ between the men (I'm in this group) and those who want the men to be straight with either one being the dominant alpha and the other the dominated beta or both being rival alphas)

 

[Tony88888]

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[jeninflorida]

the real issue or fear for having two lovers in her bed, men can get too excited and hands all over the place. that takes away from the experience

some men need to learn how to slow down and enjoy the moment

Thanks Jen,

I appreciate your input.

I think the two cocks 'in one place' has been misinterpreted. I didn't really mean in one place as much as in one love making session.

Most of the feed back I've gotten from male readers is that they enjoy the idea of a cream pie. I had no idea that turned so many men on.

I'd like to hear from more female readers on that subject. Is it a turn on for them too?

Tony

 

[Tony88888]

bumping in the night

Bump to move the thread back on the board.

 

[Tony88888]

 

[msh13]

i see alot of women on here are cool with that n thats great everyones got their own fantasys. i like to see a young girl thats taken advanatage of by one or more men. the feeling of being powerless is such a turn on. having no control and just feeling everything. those are the kinds of stories i search for.

 

[Tony88888]

Giving her a bump

Bump in case anyone wants to post