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Thank you! I think I was too in-my-head regarding the number of readers. I appreciate your comment and will continue writing. Best of luck on your publications as well!
Thank you. I should mention that you already have 76 followers. It took me, I think, over three years to break 100. Although followers may be an overrated metric, since few of them seem to vote or certainly comment.

"Views" is another fuzzy metric, because it's impossible to know how many of them actually read it.
 
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Thank you. I should mention that you already have 76 followers. It took me, I think, over three years to break 100. Although followers may be an overrated metric, since few of them seem to vote or certainly comment.

"Views" is another fuzzy metric, because it's impossible to know how many of them actually read it.
It feels like the metrics around here can all be a little fuzzy at times, lol. I'm sure your followers enjoy your work.
 
It feels like the metrics around here can all be a little fuzzy at times, lol. I'm sure your followers enjoy your work.
I guess they must have liked it, but it's hard to figure out what they are up to. I hardly remember any of their names, and I don't get many comments. I admit, I follow a few people, but I may not get to read what they write (sorry guys, I apologize).

It's hard to get comments on any site I've ever seen. Except for Loving Wives, where one will get tons of attention in every metric. That's if you can stand the nastier ones, which seem to be at least half of them.
 
I recently published Part 2 of my series, and I'm not sure what went wrong. Part 1 was well received and seemed to resonate with readers, despite its length, but Part 2, a shorter part, does not appear to be gaining traction. Part 1 is still receiving likes, but no one is returning to read Part 2.

This is my first time publishing on this site, and I want to write more in this series, so I'd like to fix my mistakes and figure out where I went wrong in writing Part 2 and why people don't seem to want to read it despite expressing their enjoyment of the first part.

Any constructive criticism and helpful feedback would be truly appreciated!

https://literotica.com/s/teenage-fantasy-1
https://literotica.com/s/teenage-fantasy-ch-02
In my experience, people are varied in taste and perception. Even when I am aware that I have produced an absolute banger of a story from other honest reviews, I have seen little such appraisal here. Yes, people would rather fave the first rather than all of them, depending on the length you might see less views on a shorter story because they leave and come back later, thus it being possible for later parts which were bigger to have staggeringly more views.

Good criticism is hard to find as most do not bother with even a comment. I have had over four thousand reads for my first part, yet only 48 reviews, one comment and 9 faves which reduced significantly on later parts which got longer and more plot and sex intensive. Oh, and I have one guy who insists to go to each story to give them all a one star review without even reading. Yes, how could he review it one star two hours after it was posted when it took me 8 to proof-read it?

My advice is to not seek out to please people. They are whimsical, chaotic and focused on such different things that it's like chasing wind. Write the story you want, but indeed focus to get better. Think on how characters develop, interact, learn... what new truths change things. Try not to repeat yourself in specific words too often and focus on the feel of the story. I always wondered how might a reader look at the part I lay down. And once it is done, be proud that you made it and don't care too much on what others say. You could be the next shakespeare and thousands of people will call it crap just because you did not represent their own view, or did not include their kinks or some other thing they do not have the spine to voice out loud because it suddenly makes them look like shallow idiots. Write your story, make every part of it reachable... tangible and as descriptive as you need to be. Then just send it out and don't look for the likes and shares and other internet points. They do not matter.
 
In my experience, people are varied in taste and perception. Even when I am aware that I have produced an absolute banger of a story from other honest reviews, I have seen little such appraisal here. Yes, people would rather fave the first rather than all of them, depending on the length you might see less views on a shorter story because they leave and come back later, thus it being possible for later parts which were bigger to have staggeringly more views.

Good criticism is hard to find as most do not bother with even a comment. I have had over four thousand reads for my first part, yet only 48 reviews, one comment and 9 faves which reduced significantly on later parts which got longer and more plot and sex intensive. Oh, and I have one guy who insists to go to each story to give them all a one star review without even reading. Yes, how could he review it one star two hours after it was posted when it took me 8 to proof-read it?

My advice is to not seek out to please people. They are whimsical, chaotic and focused on such different things that it's like chasing wind. Write the story you want, but indeed focus to get better. Think on how characters develop, interact, learn... what new truths change things. Try not to repeat yourself in specific words too often and focus on the feel of the story. I always wondered how might a reader look at the part I lay down. And once it is done, be proud that you made it and don't care too much on what others say. You could be the next shakespeare and thousands of people will call it crap just because you did not represent their own view, or did not include their kinks or some other thing they do not have the spine to voice out loud because it suddenly makes them look like shallow idiots. Write your story, make every part of it reachable... tangible and as descriptive as you need to be. Then just send it out and don't look for the likes and shares and other internet points. They do not matter.
My comments to views ratio ranges from 1100 views per comment up to 60,000+ per comment. The average is 16,000 views per comment in the genres I write. So, 4000+ is okay. My latest story, while it's getting a fair amount of fave's, is at almost 13,000 views and 0 comments, Que Sera, Sera.
 
My comments to views ratio ranges from 1100 views per comment up to 60,000+ per comment. The average is 16,000 views per comment in the genres I write. So, 4000+ is okay. My latest story, while it's getting a fair amount of fave's, is at almost 13,000 views and 0 comments, Que Sera, Sera.
In my experience, people are varied in taste and perception. Even when I am aware that I have produced an absolute banger of a story from other honest reviews, I have seen little such appraisal here. Yes, people would rather fave the first rather than all of them, depending on the length you might see less views on a shorter story because they leave and come back later, thus it being possible for later parts which were bigger to have staggeringly more views.

Good criticism is hard to find as most do not bother with even a comment. I have had over four thousand reads for my first part, yet only 48 reviews, one comment and 9 faves which reduced significantly on later parts which got longer and more plot and sex intensive. Oh, and I have one guy who insists to go to each story to give them all a one star review without even reading. Yes, how could he review it one star two hours after it was posted when it took me 8 to proof-read it?

My advice is to not seek out to please people. They are whimsical, chaotic and focused on such different things that it's like chasing wind. Write the story you want, but indeed focus to get better. Think on how characters develop, interact, learn... what new truths change things. Try not to repeat yourself in specific words too often and focus on the feel of the story. I always wondered how might a reader look at the part I lay down. And once it is done, be proud that you made it and don't care too much on what others say. You could be the next shakespeare and thousands of people will call it crap just because you did not represent their own view, or did not include their kinks or some other thing they do not have the spine to voice out loud because it suddenly makes them look like shallow idiots. Write your story, make every part of it reachable... tangible and as descriptive as you need to be. Then just send it out and don't look for the likes and shares and other internet points. They do not matter.
Thank you so much for your help! I apologize for the delay in responding. I'm wondering if that's the case; the sections are lengthy, and reading them requires a significant amount of dedication. That could be a turnoff, especially for an unfinished series. Some people may be hesitant to begin such an endeavor without knowing whether or not the piece will be completed. I try to communicate in the comments, but I understand why people are hesitant.

I apologize for your spiteful starrer. Some people appear to have a vendetta. I, too, receive mixed ratings (I think), so it happens, but you should be very proud of what you have accomplished. I see you've posted what appears to be a very successful series. You have put in a lot of effort, and I am sure it shows in your writing. I will definitely focus on the story and write what I have in my head regardless of what others think, but it is nice to know if you've written something that people enjoy and can relate to. I suppose what I really want is for someone to treasure my work as much as I do.
 
My comments to views ratio ranges from 1100 views per comment up to 60,000+ per comment. The average is 16,000 views per comment in the genres I write. So, 4000+ is okay. My latest story, while it's getting a fair amount of fave's, is at almost 13,000 views and 0 comments, Que Sera, Sera.
I suppose it becomes difficult to determine how people are reacting to it. I appreciate everyone's feedback on my work. Even the negative ones help me improve my writing. I hope people keep commenting throughout the series because it lets me know how they feel. But you're right: it can sometimes be easier to put a heart or a rating than it is to leave a comment. Feedback is feedback, no matter what.
 
I guess they must have liked it, but it's hard to figure out what they are up to. I hardly remember any of their names, and I don't get many comments. I admit, I follow a few people, but I may not get to read what they write (sorry guys, I apologize).

It's hard to get comments on any site I've ever seen. Except for Loving Wives, where one will get tons of attention in every metric. That's if you can stand the nastier ones, which seem to be at least half of them.
I haven't spent much time in the Loving Wives category. I guess I never thought about how the categories affect the readership. I know that a few categories have a lot more stories published in them, which I'm sure helps garner an audience.
I'm also aware that my scenes aren't exactly kinky. My editor has mentioned that as a potential disadvantage on this site, as there are a lot of wild adventures posted that I'm sure my scenes pale in comparison to. In any case, as you mentioned, it's difficult to figure out what the readers are up to.
 
I haven't spent much time in the Loving Wives category. I guess I never thought about how the categories affect the readership. I know that a few categories have a lot more stories published in them, which I'm sure helps garner an audience.
I'm also aware that my scenes aren't exactly kinky. My editor has mentioned that as a potential disadvantage on this site, as there are a lot of wild adventures posted that I'm sure my scenes pale in comparison to. In any case, as you mentioned, it's difficult to figure out what the readers are up to.
There is little point in being concerned about what the readership wants or what will be popular, because it's so arbitrary and unpredictable. Don't worry about how kinky or not it is; that is entirely up to you. In fact, everything is up to you. Write whatever you please and, if they like it, the readers will come to you (or maybe they won't!). If you try to figure "them" out first, that's sort of doing it backwards. Imagine that you are Stanley Kubrick and you have complete creative control. True, few filmmakers have ever had that. But there is no money at stake here, no production costs or schedule to worry about, so you do have that control.
 
Thank you so much for your help! I apologize for the delay in responding. I'm wondering if that's the case; the sections are lengthy, and reading them requires a significant amount of dedication. That could be a turnoff, especially for an unfinished series. Some people may be hesitant to begin such an endeavor without knowing whether or not the piece will be completed. I try to communicate in the comments, but I understand why people are hesitant.

I apologize for your spiteful starrer. Some people appear to have a vendetta. I, too, receive mixed ratings (I think), so it happens, but you should be very proud of what you have accomplished. I see you've posted what appears to be a very successful series. You have put in a lot of effort, and I am sure it shows in your writing. I will definitely focus on the story and write what I have in my head regardless of what others think, but it is nice to know if you've written something that people enjoy and can relate to. I suppose what I really want is for someone to treasure my work as much as I do.
Most of the time, The best advice I can give is the one I am trying to follow. HAVE a story. But also have passion. I have tried several times to put out some ideas I had as stories (Like 6 times), but I did not have passion... and that was usually because I had no idea WHERE the story is going. As an example, I have this almost metaphysical story about the struggle between good and evil happening as one man tries to indulge in all the temptations of a garden of eden and... I have no passion for it. But as I think now to a story that is a sequel to the one I have here, but from a POV on the other side... I don't yet know consciously where it's going, but my subconscious wants me to make it. Maybe because I want to shape the idea of community for these people, their way of thinking, how they look to other problems and how much easier life is for their thought process.

That story I had right there was basically written in a month long grip of passion. A story I wanted to put down and just found no reason to do much else. But I did not do a Stephen King to just sit at my desk and put out 2 pages to make them. Also, yes.... people here tend to want quick fucks to get off, to which the many parts of plot might feel like some big break. I think I had to force myself to actually put porn in there at times.

Also, don't worry about the one star guy. He has actually amused me as I continuously check the ratings and do the math. For example, I know they put a one star review on my final part, it has a total of 5 reviews and a score of 4.2. Multiply 4.2 by 5 and you get.... 21. Do the math on what the others are.
 
If it's any comfort, I have a similar problem with my multi-part series. I think that is a problem inherent in the (necessary) splitting of larger works. Unfortunately many readers seem to have an expectation of how the story will develop, then get angry in the next part as they find that the plot isn't tailor made for them. There is a weird expectation from them that they are the only reader and somehow the author is duty bound to deliver just to satisfy them.
 
If it's any comfort, I have a similar problem with my multi-part series. I think that is a problem inherent in the (necessary) splitting of larger works. Unfortunately many readers seem to have an expectation of how the story will develop, then get angry in the next part as they find that the plot isn't tailor made for them. There is a weird expectation from them that they are the only reader and somehow the author is duty bound to deliver just to satisfy them.

This isn't a series story unique problem - people click out of standalone stories all the time. The difference is that you don't have any data that tells you that, you only know how many times your story was loaded. Series stories, on the other hand, have natural break points where you can actually see that dropoff and give you a truer picture of your actual reader numbers.
 
I never said they were
You implied the view number (or some stat here) would give you "actual reader numbers." No stat here will give you actual reader numbers. There is nothing capturing actual reads here.
 
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