lickmyboot
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- Joined
- Jul 20, 2002
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I love the first stanza. It's perfect and I wouldn't change a thing. I would like to see maybe one more stanza in between the two. Maybe a reaction to her actions? That would give a little more story. The last stanza's a hard read if one doesn't know a little french, but I tend to like the mystery of it. You, as always, are a puzzle box.
kisses!
lickmyboot
I love the first stanza. It's perfect and I wouldn't change a thing. I would like to see maybe one more stanza in between the two. Maybe a reaction to her actions? That would give a little more story. The last stanza's a hard read if one doesn't know a little french, but I tend to like the mystery of it. You, as always, are a puzzle box.
kisses!
lickmyboot
