Thanks for the message, curl4ever. Whitewave continues to amaze. I started reading the payoff when it first appeared and now I don't even recognize the first chapter. The wrestling that has gone on between the writer and her readers is a complete story of its own interwoven with this dynamically evolving story. It makes for a very rich and enriching experience.OK. I stand corrected.
Funny you should reply today, because WhiteWave48 has just posted two new stories:
THE PAY-OFF - A farcical non erotic story about marriage and mistresses (some of it real!) written as an experiment. http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=368662
and VACANCY - dog poem - in memoriam
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=368856
Both are excellent!
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Illustrious Writer!Thanks for your support curl. Much appreciated.
This was never my thread in spite of its title, but it seems to have found its way out here again. Perhaps it's a good place to ask for feedback.
My latest saga, 'The Pay-Off' has been an experiment - most of it in the Non-Erotic category. Until I tested the waters, I didn't know Non-Erotic was such a challenging place to be. In response to reader comments, I have already submitted drastic edits.
If anyone here has the time to sample any part of it, I'd really like to know what you think. It's a farcical revenge turned reconciliation. The link is in my sig.
Many thanks.
Chapter 9 is a delicious full-bodied transporting experience for this reader. I think the postscript dilutes the magic of the story, though.
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Nice to hear from you, lorencino! I always enjoy the precision and insight of your comments on stories.
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I would just like to....
Second anything good that has been said about whitewave. To those people who didn't understand her story, and therefore critisized it. Perhaps they should ask her to teach them how to write a story. White wave has taken a break from writing for the moment. I hope we who like her work can persaude her to start writing again. Nice thread by the way. White wave should get her own thread, but she is too modest to start one.
Second anything good that has been said about whitewave. To those people who didn't understand her story, and therefore critisized it. Perhaps they should ask her to teach them how to write a story. White wave has taken a break from writing for the moment. I hope we who like her work can persaude her to start writing again. Nice thread by the way. White wave should get her own thread, but she is too modest to start one.
