words to avoid in erotic poetry

[The Mutt]

Azure:

http://www.literotica.com/p/azure

 

[twelveoone]

Azure:

http://www.literotica.com/p/azure

see in context the double azure fits perfectly,
I stand corrected, worst erotic poem ever (which I claimed for chainsaw love) I now yield the title

 

[twelveoone]

With reference to Snigger/Snicker. My English teacher many years ago told us with a smile that, " Horses snicker and neigh - but we (people) snigger and nay."

As she was a young woman with an unimpeachable reputation I took her statement at face value - but why do I still remember 30+ years later.

Or maybe you remember her knickers, but hey...

 

[Tsotha]

Sorry, it's Shakespeare's pun from Hamelett.

Bah, my knowledge of English literature is pathetic. Most references go right over my head.

 

[twelveoone]

Oh, hell, he's denoting

seems to be some confusion in words here Harry

de·no·ta·tion
ˌdēnōˈtāSHən/
noun
noun: denotation; plural noun: denotations

1.
the literal or primary meaning of a word, in contrast to the feelings or ideas that the word suggests.

detonation
http://chamorrobible.org/images/photos/gpw-20050304-UnitedStatesArmy-061014-A-5493S-057-cache-unexploded-ordnance-detonated-near-Forward-Operating-Base-Falcon-Iraq-20061014-medium.jpg

ever wonder why it got an E? it took me awhile...

 

[HarryHill]

seems to be some confusion in words here Harry

de·no·ta·tion
ˌdēnōˈtāSHən/
noun
noun: denotation; plural noun: denotations

1.
the literal or primary meaning of a word, in contrast to the feelings or ideas that the word suggests.

detonation
http://chamorrobible.org/images/photos/gpw-20050304-UnitedStatesArmy-061014-A-5493S-057-cache-unexploded-ordnance-detonated-near-Forward-Operating-Base-Falcon-Iraq-20061014-medium.jpg

ever wonder why it got an E? it took me awhile...

Oh Hell, he's detonating

 

[twelveoone]

Oh Hell, he's detonating

better
and it has a picture

 

[butters]

Oh Hell, he's detonating

"What did the duck say?"

"Bang..."

 

[HarryHill]

"What did the duck say?"

"Bang..."

No, Flambe!

 

[twelveoone]

"What did the duck say?"

"Bang..."

Oh christ, not that story again

 

[butters]

No, Flambe!

mmmmm, duccccccccccccccccck

Oh christ, not that story again

your fault i'm quackers

 

[HarryHill]

mmmmm, duccccccccccccccccck


your fault i'm quackers

Fowl! match point
..
ETA: no email notifications please.

 

[Maria2394]

{this thread needs a gag-emote . . . as in a fingers down throat jobbie, not the kind some of you enjoy nor a comedic reference }

LOL! I second that Good advice for new poets and not so new poets.

Nice thread!


Am I lost? hmmm, I thought I was posting on your over used word thread, read the last few posts now I feel as though I have ole timers coming on....

 

[Magnetron]

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Tits ...horrid word

 

[UnderYourSpell]

A secret garden just snuck into Feedback and Discussion

 

[RhymeFairy]

words to avoid ...

silence,

seems to work ..

really ...

I expected, sooo much more


imho..

 

[Piscator]

Originally Posted by butters View Post
"What did the duck say?"

"Bang..."

No, Flambe!

I'm not at all sure about this orange.

 

[always_curious]

titillate

 

[AlotLikePsyche]

Cum. Ugh. Hate that spelling.

Any word that cheapens the act.

Tits comes to mind. And twat. And rod.

Yuck.

I don’t know. I’m picky about words. More about the way they’re put together, though.

 

[AnneSexton]

Any words that cheapen the act.

Agree.

 

[HarryHill]

They fornicated most of the night,
upstairs, then down a flight,
tumpas in the rec room,
breakfast in the kitchen.

 

[oneblueye]

hey...

They are when they become hackneyed and the readers groans and thinks 'Couldn't you at least have looked for some originality'.

Not only this place but ANY site or place or book you are capable of reading has an original thought or phrase or word.
It has all been thought or seen or felt or read or written or experienced in one fashion or another LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGG before any of you were just swimmers in your Daddy's sac.
So go on and roll your eyes and talk your shit...
Originality---, now that's funny.

 

[LightningSeed]

Hm. Are cliches really so bad?

They are the opposite of poetry.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Not only this place but ANY site or place or book you are capable of reading has an original thought or phrase or word.
It has all been thought or seen or felt or read or written or experienced in one fashion or another LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGG before any of you were just swimmers in your Daddy's sac.
So go on and roll your eyes and talk your shit...
Originality---, now that's funny.

There you go, for this forum at least I don't think I've seen 'swimmers in your Daddy's sac' before.