Would love some feedbacck

[Bramblethorn]

Oddly enough, the OP apparently didn't have a problem with my feedback.... Why do you?

OP didn't reply to your feedback at all. If you're equating lack of reply with "didn't have a problem with", you have a whole lot to learn about communication.

 

[Lazaran]

You keep proving my point.

I...is your entire post.

Now of course feedback is pretty much opinion, but you can give an opinion based on the story itself in a detached manner or you can fill your critique with your personal feelings and that's what you're doing. The story is bad to you because you don't like/understand that situation, not because of how its written.

I loathe non con stories, therefore I don't read them because I could never big an opinion other than rape is disgusting to me even in fiction...but that is not feedback that's personal feelings so I never join in any discussion when an NC author wants a good critique of his work because I can't give that to them, and I wish more people would do that and not bash based only on your emotions.

I am well aware there are different forms of LW stories, and a readership for all of them, and also trolls for all of them, and I have never understood why people like yourself who know what you like and don't like continue to read what you don't like then get offended like the story is personal.

"whorish behavior" again takes any credence out of your words, that is 100% a personal feeling and nothing to do with the story.

Bet you wouldn't mind if the story went BTB though...am I right? If the whore got hers?

I wrote three stories in that category, and decided after the last one, that I no longer need to participate or feed a category filled with angry incels and their absolute hatred of women.

I'm not saying that is every reader there. but they are easily the most vocal, and I'm not saying you're one of them, but you 'quoted' all the key words that identify you as only being able to accept a story where a woman behaves in a manner YOU approve of.

So I stick to my opinion that the LW category is by far the most volatile and divided and one can't judge the quality of a story by the reaction of the lunatics in that asylum.

Ummm, I don't usually read cuck stories. I read this because the OP asked for feedback. I had no preconceived notions about the full content of the story based on the OPs description of it. Upon reading the preface it was clear there were cuck elements, but I've read a lot of stories in LW where it is handled in a multitude of ways so I pushed on in fairness to the OPs request for honest feedback. My original reply was based almost entirely on the absurd timeline and the incredible transformation of the characters behavior..

Do I find it realistic and believable that a husband would react like the character in the story?? No. Do I find it realistic and believable that a wife would behave like the character in the story?? No.

If there had been some build up to an open marriage it might have made more sense, but going from a monogamous relationship of eight years to public sex with multiple partners in one afternoon is farcical IMHO. The final scene where the husband gets off just from his wife being glazed and fucked while sitting on his lap is just icing on the cake(pun intended).

Again, these are just my opinions that THE OP ASKED for; and opinions are what people base their rating on.

P.S. I'm also a big proponent of creating a true Cuck category either by dedicating LW to willing cuck stories, or by creating a separate category called Cucking Husbands. I believe the latter would be easier because contrary to some peoples beliefs, LW has a wide variety of scenarios involving married couples. Also, willing cuck is as polarizing as Non-Con, BDSM, and Incest; all of which have their own category.

As for my feelings on BTB, with the second B short for bitch or bastard, I've seen both executed very well and very poorly, and I've rated them accordingly. Same for Non-Con and incest, etc. I personally read Non-Con as crime drama/escape room pulp. I'm always pleasantly surprised (though it rarely happens)when the prey turns the tables on the predator, instead of the worn out trope of women submitting to the cock and in the very worst examples falling in love with their rapist. The stories that glorify the rapist as an alpha male actually trigger me. Oddly enough, in many stories with cuck elements, it's not the women getting physically raped, it's the husband getting psychologically raped and physically intimidated by the glorified alpha male, while the wife submits to the cock. Equally as offensive IMHO.

P.P.S: I also get offended when people suggest others not read stories in LW because they're all willing cuck stories and they're all labeled as such. Both assertions are BS. It is because of many unlabeled cuck stories in LW that some people(like me) get triggered. Imagine investing time into a story and then having the surprise willing cuck twist revealed. Hence my support for a designated Cuck category.

Rant complete.

 

[gordo12]

Now that your rant is over, let it go. The site has been aware of the need to change LW for almost as long as I've been here. Twenty years now.

It isn't going to change and you contribute nothing by constantly complaining or putting comments on stories the like of which you've outlined here.

I get your feelings over the sudden plot shifts, it pisses me off too. But I move on. Voting and commenting on stories like that because it offends you is useless and the very definition of insanity.

Repeated action without a result = insanity

Are you insane?

 

[DelNovo]

SalaciousScribe, are you reading this thread? I'll post detailed feedback if you are.

 

[Salacious_Scribe]

Reading yes, but not feeding any trolls and I do appreciate those who gave contstructive criticism.