MarkoAaron
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- Dec 31, 2015
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The idea from the start was gonna have the story taking place seven years later. One of the main characters was a college student in the first story, she has since started a career and won't be in the main story. The cabin however belongs to her, so she would meet the new characters. Really, I think it would work as a Part 2, and as a story of its own. It's mostly the location and the cabin I want to get back to.Perhaps make the new story set seven years later? Where are the characters now?
The original story had two college girls go to a cabin to get away from other people and just have a little spring break to themselves. Unbeknownst to them, the area was inhabited by a group of bigfoots who take an interest in the girls, I'm sure you can guess HOW they were interested. The story turns into a four male, two female fuckfest. The girls were unharmed and left the cabin, now having knowledge of the existence of bigfoot/bigfoots/bigfeet... Whatever plural term you decide is better.
The next part would center around an all female, sasquatch research group. Not T.V. big, just a Youtube channel where the women discuss sightings, evidence and share their experiences in the field. While they've "Gone Squatchin" in different parts of the country, they have very little evidence and as a result, the channel is in decline. With nothing to lose, the leader of the group asks the fans to suggest places where bigfoot activity has been documented, in earnest hope to possibly get something tangible and boost their viewership and sales of merchandise.
Low and behold, one viewer is Janell, the female protagonist from the original story. Who had a very close encounter with the mythic monsters. She contacts the research group and GUARANTEES them, they will find something. Janell has since become a big, bigfoot fan. Watching every video she can find, reading every article on the web and is a fan of the show. She meets with the group at the cabin and being a supporter of bigfoot research, offers the cabin to the ladies to set up their base camp. Unfortunately, Janell cannot join them, due to her job sending her out of town for a few weeks. She doesn't divulge what exactly happened to her and her friend, scared of what they might think.
So the story would continue with the research group setting up in the cabin and beginning their search. Soon, they realize Janell was right about the area, but they also discover an encounter with the monsters would be very different from what they had in mind.
I've also considered maybe doing a series with Janell, maybe she went back to the cabin and had more encounters with the bigfoot, but I'd rather write about a group of women, not just a singular character.