2'nd ooc: High school blues

[Jacobo_Curious]

Cats, you blew it!

Come on, and I was so impressed by the flying scene!

Just relish the moment, fly down, and go to bed. I always hate it when you guys chop my scenes in two.

 

[cats]

You gotta love this thread. Romantic drama, the bonding of a renewed friendship...

..and Eiji searching for the bathroom.

Sheesh.

Personaly I thought the restroom was a nice touch. Quite a clever tatic, I''l try and rember it for latter threads.

 

[cats]

Cats, you blew it!

Come on, and I was so impressed by the flying scene!

Just relish the moment, fly down, and go to bed. I always hate it when you guys chop my scenes in two.

Seems anticlimatic to me but chances are it's what would of happened normally, even if they did cut it in two.

 

[Jacobo_Curious]

But, but! You can be graceful! And I was recollection time for Tetsuru!

Well, fine, whatever. Cut it if you want.

Sissy.

 

[hybirdx]

Okay okay, you two stop arguing.

 

[cats]

Looks like I left you with the wrong impression. I didn't mean I was going to cut it, but now we can cut to the island and Jameo. I got a little bit more plot building there. Once thats done we can be under the joint attack of Katala, the Doc, and yippy the back fliping dog.

 

[Jacobo_Curious]

Dude! Yippy the Backflipping Dog! Yippy is the bomb!

*envelops Cats in a huge hug*

All is forgiven!

Well, I think I set up an interesting plot point along our way to Jameo... and also so it wouldn't be a huge time chunk lost, since I imagine if even another day went by, SOMEBODY would get into a fight.

 

[cats]

In a story it's hard to waste time. Well we seem to be pretty good of pulling out little things we said way back when any how.

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| The 32nd air born loves |
| Yippie! |
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[Jacobo_Curious]

Whelp, I'm heading to bed. Cats, I think you're up for next postage.

Night, loves!

 

[cats]

Sorry to keep you guys waiting. I screwed up. Oh well now I'm calling it a night.

 

[cats]

I'm on still. Jacobo, Hy I'm not shure if either one of you has something to post right now. But if you do then I can respond.

 

[hybirdx]

waiting for jacobo to post.

 

[cats]

Well now that you mentiond it I don't think I can go on until he posts. Well unless you want to post Mia and Milo at the beach.

 

[hybirdx]

not just yet, I'm still trying to figure out where I'm gonna make K-Tetsuya strike.

 

[cats]

I hope you plan to draw it out.

Prehaps he will show at the beach gathering, then disapear. So they know Tetsuya is here but not that he is evil. Then we got some reason to explore and then Jacobo could work in the fater of Yoshiro and Testsuru, then we can stumble on to K-Tetsuya and fight him. Or he could carry out his act of revenge after we finish with what Jacobo has planed.

But ofcoarse this is what makes sense in my mind it may not work quite as well for you two. But in any case will figure it out as we go.

 

[hybirdx]

The real hard decision for me is if I should do this or not... If I do, Milo's past will be opened, if I don't, I'll still have secrets to hide.

 

[cats]

I see. well open Milo's past then. Prehaps not all the way though. Explain what he is rather then who he is and so forth. For example up til this point I've given a little info as to what LEA is but ihaven't told you much about who she is. Along the same lines you can tell us more about Milo but not tell us his conection to Rock and Makai and how he knew them, there relationship and so forth.

My concern is that you and Jacobo cordinate whats going on in this chapter. That way you two don't bump heads about whats going on in the story and I end up to confused to know whats happening. (Which now that I think about it might be unavoidible seeing how I was confused at least once in the last two chapters.)

 

[hybirdx]

Cats... you get confused every 3 days.

 

[cats]

But now I plan to beconfused today. That would be two from the last on and thuis confuse your stat and thus leave your mind open to my assults.

 

[hybirdx]

Uh...

 

[cats]

"Look a distraction!" *points behind Hy.*

 

[hybirdx]

not going to work.

 

[cats]

*Drops his finger.* "Okay then." *Begins to walk away.* "But you may regret it. After all it was a very nice distraction."

 

[hybirdx]

*Points in the same direction* oh look! Jacobo is about to post!

 

[cats]

*Kicks hy in the chin knocking him to the floor.* "I knew you'd let your gaurd down sooner or latter." *Moves out of hy's range.*