Janette_norway
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Hi, have been on the hospital for some time, i where in a car acident.
Soo it was good to come back and read some more,
Janette
Soo it was good to come back and read some more,
Janette
A dream i have, fantasy
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Welcome back Janette. Sorry to hear of your accident. Hopefully it wasn't too bad, though anytime in the hospitial is "bad" time.
Hopefully too you like the story so far. It's taken a bit of set up before we saw sex with the older couple, which is coming up next. I know the story is a little different from what you originally proposed. Sorry sometimes my story take on a life of their own and the characters do what they want. Stay tuned though I think you'll like the finish.
Since you're recovering I'll bump up the priority of the story and try and get the next five parts finished quicker than I had been doing the first parts.
doc
Janette_norway
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hi, love how the story are going, and are looking forword to read some more.
My apologies Janette. I'll bet you were stuck at home recuperating. I had to go out of town for two weeks doing effects for a small independant film and didn't have internet access on location. I did take my laptop and got most of the rest of the story outlined (some parts fully written) and hopefully will get everything up this week.
doc
Our story continues...
Janette slowly pushed herself up from the table. Crystal went over to the couch and sat.
“You got me all flush, fighting me like that.” Crystal set the riding crop on the couch next to her. “Since you and Mary have been fooling around at night then I’m sure you’ll know just what to do.”
The older woman wore a long dressing gown. She pulled at the belt and opened it. She was naked underneath, wearing only her heels.
“Come here.”
Janette walked slowly over to the couch. Crystal spread her legs. Janette could see Crystal’s pussy. She realized then what Crystal wanted. For her to kiss her there, like she’d done with Mary.
“Kneel down,” Crystal ordered.
The shock of everything that had just happened made Janette’s mind numb. She felt as if she were outside of herself, watching things as if they were happening to someone else. She did as the older woman ordered and knelt between Crystal’s legs.
“Well get on with it,” Crystal said curtly.
The floor was hard on Janette’s knees, even with her dress. And her bottom was throbbing from her beating. Still an electric spark flashed through her when she placed her hands on Crystal’s legs. They were smooth and silky under her fingers. So soft! She pushed gently opening Crystal’s legs further.
Mary had had quite a bit of soft brown hair on her sex. Crystal though had very little just a small blonde stripe at the top of her pussy. The rest, her belly around her pussy lips was smooth. Even Janette as young as she was had more. Janette as she leaned her face forward realized that for some reason the older woman had shaved her pubic hair off.
Crystal’s face was flush and had a strange look to it. Janette realized it had the same look the rough Detective had had when he had been molesting her. And Crystal was right, beating Janette had clearly excited her. As Janette brought her mouth towards the other woman, she could smell her. She had the same smell Mary got after they had played together for a while and had had several orgasms. Crystal smelled like sex.
Janette moved one hand up Crystal leg, lightly stroking her with her fingertips. With the other she took her thumb and touched Crystal at the base of her pussy, resting it just below where two lips meet. She moved her face closer and stuck out her tongue. She took a hesitant lick, lightly across Crystal’s pussy. This brought a soft moan from the older woman.
At first Janette went about it dispassionately, licking the other woman’s pussy lips up and down slowly with her tongue. Occasionally she would slip her tongue between those lips and a little deeper into Crystal’s pussy. This always seemed to bring out a moan from Crystal. The blonde woman had slumped down on the couch a bit and had opened the robe she wore further. She was playing with her breasts, rubbing them with her hands.
Janette slowly got her composure back. True the last hour had been nerve racking for the young girl, but kneeling there between Crystal’s legs and sucking on her pussy wasn’t that much different from what she’d done with Mary. And she’d always liked that. As she licked part of her noticed that Crystal seemed to be enjoying Janette’s actions.
Taking her two hands Janette slid both thumbs slowing into Crystal’s pussy and then gently spread the lips apart. Janette took her tongue and gave Crystal a long slow lick from the base of Crystal’s pussy to the top. There Crystal’s clit stuck out. Janette took the stiff little knob of flesh between her lips and sucked on it lightly. This brought a long low husky moan from Crystal. And another even longer when Janette flicked her tongue softly across her clit, fluttering it like Mary had taught her.
There was a rustling sound to Janette’s left. She looked up and saw with surprise Mr. Lucendi had his pants undone and his penis out. He was sitting on the edge of the desk and with one hand was stroking his penis. Already it was stiff, poking out of his pants. She stared at it for several moments with naïve wonder until Crystal placed a hand on Janette’s head and pulled it back to licking her pussy.
Janette went back to sucking but continued to glance at Mr. Lucendi from time to time, watching him stroke his penis. As she licked she realized that somehow things had changed. Where minutes ago she’d been under Crystal’s control, now it was she that controlled the pace of things.
Experimenting Janette began licking rapidly across the top of Crystal’s pussy paying particular attention to her clit while sliding both her thumbs up and down between her pussy lips. She knew from her play with Mary this was very exciting. Crystal must have found that true for she began moaning. Her head lay back and Janette could see she had her eyes closed. Janette kept her rapid stimulation up for a long minute then as she sensed the older woman was close to coming, Janette paused.
Crystal gave a shudder and sat up.
“What, don’t stop!” she said.
Janette went back to licking, though slower than she had been. She silently smiled to herself. Yes, it seemed the tables had turned. She felt a strange sense of power come over her.
There was a chuckle from Mr. Lucendi. Janette glanced his way. He had his pants off, on the floor at his feet. His penis still stuck out stiff and as Janette looked at him he gave it a couple of firm strokes. He smiled, obviously having noticed what Janette had done, teasing Crystal with pleasure then backing off. He started unbuttoning his shirt.
Janette thought maybe if she gave Crystal a quick orgasm then she’d be free to go, so she began again to speed the pace of her licking. She also started sliding one finger into Crystal’s pussy going as deep as she could, pumping it back and forth like she’s done the sausage in Mary.
Her actions seemed to do their work. Soon the older woman was moaning almost continuously. Janette her face in Crystal’s crotch felt a hand on her head, pulling her in. Crystal’s hips began to move in little circles and Janette realized from her experience with Mary that Crystal was nearing an orgasm. Janette stopped her licking and took Crystal’s clit in her mouth.
That seemed to do it.
Crystal gave a long low moan. Janette felt her body tensed up and her crotch lifted from the couch to press against Janette’s mouth. The hand or her head clenched in her hair and pulled her face even tighter forward. Janette suddenly felt her probing finger grow moist as Crystal came. She softened the force of her suction on Crystal’s clit, knowing that one grew sensitive at that moment of bliss.
After several moments Janette felt the hand release her head. She sat up and wiped her face with the sleeve of her dress.
“Looked like you did a pretty good job.”
While Janette had been busy making Crystal come, Mr. Lucendi had finished removing his clothes and was now standing next to the couch. He had one hand on his stiff penis pointing it towards Janette.
“Now how about sucking on this.”
to be continued...
BedtimeStories
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Aren't stories supposed to be submitted to the site and not posted on threads?
They are.
What happened was I received feedback from Janette on a story I had, which lead me here for the first time. I posted the first part not knowing that the board ettiquette was to write, submit the story to Lit, then post a link here. I've been on other boards where it was ok to post stories.
I guess I got the first few portions posted before the moderator could let me know. Since then the moderator has been kind enough to let me go ahead and finish the story for Janette, with the understanding that I won't do the same in the future. I've only got four more sections until I'm done.
I hadn't planned on getting as detailed as I have, but just post an outline, with feedback from Janette on the story. As any writer knows stories tend to take a life of their own, and I found myself putting more detail in than planned. And I didn't realize at first Janette was not a native English speaker, so her feedback hasn't been as much as I'd thought I'd have.
Or she's just really liked the story.
Thanks for the compliment. Sometimes its hard for me to get good sex when the main character is naive and especially with this plot where you begin with a virgin and have to work her thru the whole discovery thing. I also tend to write erotic stories in a different style than what I've done here. After I finish I'm going to go back and redo the whole thing since some of the earlier sex was pretty plain.
The next few parts in wrapping the story up should be pretty good. Without throwing too much in spoilers I think everyone realizes now that Mr Lucendi is working for the Chicago Mob.
In the part after this next one, his boys are going to steal a truck belonging to a French photographer. In searching it they're going to discover some naighty french postcards with nudes on them. Not able to sell the equipment they end up offering the truck back to the Frenchman.
That meeting will see both parties go into the business of making the first porn movie (the frenchman has an early movie camera). Since Al owns a speakeasy next to a local cinema, they plan on showing it on New Years Eve at a big party.
Janette unfortunately will end up being coerced into being the star (along with Mary and Turtle). The party will be a big success given the novelty of the film. At the party Janette ends up meeting (and being befriended by) a visiting Englishwoman Lady Chatterly, who is there with Al Capone.
(I'm doing a series about the original Lady Chatterly's descendant daughters for a different website, sort of taking them "Forest Gump" like thru history.)
Surfice it to say the ending should have a nice twist to it.
doc
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Okay. I was wondering. I've seen other "stories" deleted by the moderator here...
I've seen other "stories" deleted by the moderator here...Janette_norway
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Better than stories
Wow...this was a great set of scenes.....great work!
Wow...this was a great set of scenes.....great work!
Janette_norway
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will be moving to La , going to school, but are going to NY
