A Game of Chance

[Bacteriophage68]

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[Penelope Street]

3.83? That's a bit disappointing.

I guess the story posted last night.

With 12 votes, it's my lowest rated story with a 3.83.

I guess I knew it probably wouldn't be on the top ten list, but 3.83 is ridiculous. Shows once again, as if we needed another example, how voting is no measure of a story's worth.

Forgive me if I laughed about the PC titled "Scum in Love"?!
I hope you didn't imagine I had left that one!

Take Care,
Penny

 

[GEKKEN_]

No chance.

 

[drlust]

Inverse ratios...

Hi Dr.M.:

Sometimes I think there is an inverse ratio between the quality of a story and the ratings on Lit., at least when the story is about a story rather than about stroking.

Allan

 

[dr_mabeuse]

With 82 votes now it's come up to a 4.37. I figure that's a pretty fair measure of how people feel about it.

One comment said they'd give me a 5 for writing, but a 1 for how they felt after finishing it, so they figured that averaged out to a 3. I suppose that about sums it up.

I can't really argue about that. The story's a bummer. I think it's an exquisite little bummer, but it's a bummer all the same.

---dr.M.

 

[Roadieeeeeee]

Just my two farthings

I haven't read the story because I'm overdue to do some dumb income producing stuff, but I read the opening sentences and froze upon the following:

"...Bogdan thought he was being slick, keeping his sunglasses on so I couldn't read his pupils, but I could see the reflection of his hole cards in the curved iridescent lenses of his Serengeti Arezzo’s every time he peaked at them: Jack of hearts and four of clubs."

As much as I love Serengeti sunglasses, they aren't mountains. As I glanced through the lenses of my own glasses, however, the choice of words still piqued my internal spell-checking ability.

I love this place!

Roadie

 

[dr_mabeuse]

I haven't read the story because I'm overdue to do some dumb income producing stuff, but I read the opening sentences and froze upon the following:

"...Bogdan thought he was being slick, keeping his sunglasses on so I couldn't read his pupils, but I could see the reflection of his hole cards in the curved iridescent lenses of his Serengeti Arezzo’s every time he peaked at them: Jack of hearts and four of clubs."

As much as I love Serengeti sunglasses, they aren't mountains. As I glanced through the lenses of my own glasses, however, the choice of words still piqued my internal spell-checking ability.

I love this place!

Roadie

Damn! Mea Culpa.

Well, at least it's not "piqued"

 

[Tainted Angel]

Wha? Sh

Sad ending.

 

[Alex756]

Murder in Erotica

OK I feel able to comment on this. A full 50% of my feedback on my non con story are people mad I didn't kill the male character. They are also the only feedbacks I regret because in the original I did kill him.

I let the fuzzy win and didn't go with what was the -right- ending.

The only thing I see wrong with the 'evil' ending, it needs (in my opinion) a tinge more graphicness. a bit of the scent of gunpowder, a bit of the recoil of the gun. The rest of the story is soo sensually fulfilling that the murder is like a break to black and white.

Is J evil *shrug* I don't think so. Does he perceive the world in his own way? yes.

Maybe I read some into the story, but I almost felt he -had- to kill her. He loved her, so he couldn't leave her with her husband. BUT he does what he does and has to remain in control, a man like that can't be dragging some intoxicating woman around or he'll end up dead.

Hmm, Maybe positioning her a bit nicer after the murder would have been better.

But basically, if you think a character needs wacked, a character needs wacked

--Alex756

 

[shereads]

Maybe I read some into the story, but I almost felt he -had- to kill her. He loved her, so he couldn't leave her with her husband. BUT he does what he does and has to remain in control, a man like that can't be dragging some intoxicating woman around or he'll end up dead.

Hmm, Maybe positioning her a bit nicer after the murder would have been better.

On behalf of intoxicating women, please don't love us if it means you'll have to drag us around or whack us. Let's just be friends instead.

With utmost sincerity,

~ shereads

 

[furrygobletdrinker]

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Hiya..Just wanna ask you a favor ??..were having another Swingers Party in three weeks.But with this one ,were gunna add a new twist with a fancy dress Party.There will be 5 couples there and even tho we know how to have a good time , would appreciate if you could come up with a story for us ??? Or some kinda Party games ??... A little bit about us .. we are all mid forties all into Full Swing all the women are Bi but non of the guys are, three of the women swallow and one of them will take a Fist.Hope you can come up with something for us to participate in ? you can e-mail us at swscotscpl@yahoo.com with your suggestions ?
Thank you Julie n Jeff

 

[CharleyH]

Apologies for not seeing this earlier

 

[Boxlicker101]

Hiya..Just wanna ask you a favor ??..were having another Swingers Party in three weeks.But with this one ,were gunna add a new twist with a fancy dress Party.There will be 5 couples there and even tho we know how to have a good time , would appreciate if you could come up with a story for us ??? Or some kinda Party games ??... A little bit about us .. we are all mid forties all into Full Swing all the women are Bi but non of the guys are, three of the women swallow and one of them will take a Fist.Hope you can come up with something for us to participate in ? you can e-mail us at swscotscpl@yahoo.com with your suggestions ?
Thank you Julie n Jeff

I wonder if anybody answered this. I didn't. If they want to, there are about 100,000 stories they can download. I didn't even click on the link since I don't trust it.

 

[shereads]

Hiya..Just wanna ask you a favor ??..were having another Swingers Party in three weeks.But with this one ,were gunna add a new twist with a fancy dress Party.There will be 5 couples there and even tho we know how to have a good time , would appreciate if you could come up with a story for us ??? Or some kinda Party games ??... A little bit about us .. we are all mid forties all into Full Swing all the women are Bi but non of the guys are, three of the women swallow and one of them will take a Fist.Hope you can come up with something for us to participate in ? you can e-mail us at swscotscpl@yahoo.com with your suggestions ?
Thank you Julie n Jeff

"The Yearling" by Marjorie Kinnan Rawlings is a sad story, but a genuine classic. Hint: insist on playing the role of Jodie or his father. In fact, if your group have all read the book, you might have a tough time casting the role of the pet deer