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poetboy
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a bump for this wonderful thread...and I read "Love on the Leaves", your literotica story...it is a very sensual story, written in such a believable style...thank you for writing it!...in my fantasy it goes together so well with you beautiful pics, they allow me to **see** the things about which I **read** in your story...
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rozweb said:Thankyou poetboy... do you write to... always happy to read others stories
Good morning,rozweb,
...yes I write too from time to time, but I´m mostly writing poems, sometimes erotic and sometimes funny..it depends on the occasion...but I´ve to admit, they are not as skillful as your story...
I don´t have a literotica page, but I´ve contributed a few of my poems to dfferent threads here..
I´m a bit short of time the moment, but if you want I´ll try to post one of my poems here at your thread the next days...
I wish you a wonderful day/evening (probably evening at your place of the globe)....be safe and well!
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rozweb said:I look forward to it
This is one of my first poems and I have posted it previously at another thread already. It is a soft poem, but I hope you love and enjoy it...and **thank you** for your two latest pics, I loved them...they show so much without showing to much...
Have a good day, rozweb,...and now please enjoy
My fingers like so much to crawl,
in a soft, caressing kind,
and during these crawling trips,
they sometimes make a find.
At your right shoulder they detect,
a strap running from front to back.
Let´s follow it, my fingers said,
whereat it leads, let´s check.
Following the mysterious strap,
down your back my fingers strived.
But suddenly their path was block,
at a crossing they arrived.
The downwards path, it seemed to end,
a new strap went to left and right.
Which direction we´ll travel,
my fingers now had to decide.
Let´s go left, my thumb decided,
being my finger´s boss,
leftwards along the strap they crawled
your right side they did cross.
At your front the strap extended,
to a plane of silk, quite fine,
that covered a soft hill, quite steep,
crawling here felt divine.
While crawling at your silken hill,
you slapped my fingers with your hand:
„Lots of people see us here,
your travel has to end!“
My fingers now travelled backwards,
till at the crossing they arrived,
´cause the upwards path they knew,
forwards my fingers strived.
At the middle of your back,
they made their next find:
two straps seemed being connected here,
with small hooks being the bind.
My fingers startet to explore,
the hooks at the strap´s end,
when suddenly they felt again,
a soft slap from your hand.
„Stay well away from these hooks“,
you whispered, very low,
„lots of people are around,
it´s dangerous, right now!“
All is forbidden, there´s no fun,
my fingers discussed loud,
but you grinned and sweetly said :
„Later in private, it´s allowed...“
„...then you can crawl on silken hills,
hook play is allowed too,
and so your crawling trip will bring,
much pleasure me and you!“
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rozweb said:Wow.. that is fantastic
I´m glad that you loved it and I love the thought that you could relate to that exact thing happening...
and I´ve to tell you that this poem is based on a real happening indeed....
I could relate to your story very well too and felt nearly as being the male participant in this wonderful story. Do you plan to write any further stories?
Have a beautiful day, rozweb!
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rozweb said:
rotflmao....no... but What you yankin' there Roz? Sorry I'm a baaaaaaadddddddd Cat.....
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rozweb said:
lol...chicken.....
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webbo1 said:To all the ladies who wanted another shot of me ....there ya go
To the guys who wanna be me.......
na ne na ne naaaaaaaa naaaaaaa
About time.....
