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What a magnificent narrative!
I can certainly tell you have put a huge effort into this!
Thanks!
I agree, rbijon. Very well done.
I've enjoyed catching up immensely. That battle was truly epic, as were the soundtrack and sound effects! I especially enjoyed the way in which Hamad effectively removed himself from the equation . What a wonderful story this has been. Thank you for all the effort you've put into it. It seems as though there will be a more than deserved happy ever after ending too.
I had to laugh at the captain being forced to rip the bodice again . Such a great story .
Even though I know the word 'bodice', I had to ask myself if I really knew what one was. So like the clever lad that I am, I looked it up on Wikipedia. After reading more about the details of this particular device, I have to lend my sympathies to the good Captain. Under circumstances of stress and where an urgency for a decisive action is imperative, it is those few who instinctively act in the correct way who earn the rank of leadership...and that's why he's the Captain!
From Wiki:
In historical usage, particularly in Victorian and early 20th century fashion, a bodice indicates the upper part of a dress that was constructed in two parts (i.e., with separate skirt and bodice), but of matching or coordinating fabric with the intention of wearing the two parts as a unit... During wear, the parts might be connected by hooks and eyes... This construction was standard for fashionable garments from the 18th century until the late 19th century, and had the advantages of allowing a voluminous skirt to be paired with a close-fitting bodice....worn in Europe from the 16th century to the 18th century, either over a corset or in lieu of one. To achieve a fashionable shape and support the bust, the bodice was frequently stiffened with bents (a type of reed), or whalebone. The bodice was different from the corset of the time because it was intended to be worn over the other garments. In earlier periods, bodices and corsets were laced in spiral fashion, with one continuous lace
I had to laugh at the captain being forced to rip the bodice again . Such a great story .
Last night I finally caught up to the ongoing narrative...a wonderful escape into the land of adventure and love...I have enjoyed "reading both of the minds" that shared this tale with us, and wonder; Are we not really the one who is in our mind, rather than the one who is constrained by the material world? Or to say it another way; If I could be anything and anyone...
You crazy kids . . . .
What an amazing project. Your consistency over the last four months (much better than mine even reading it) is amazing. I thought this might last a couple weeks, you two are marathoners.
Congratulations - I've never seen anything quite like this. All the photos and sounds, the video, the story line and perfect writing, of course. Standing Lit ovation.
I often wonder; Why pain? Why must there be pain in the world? But as the Captain and his new bride have shown, pain is just the darkness before the dawn...and one wonders; if there was no pain, would we appreciate joy?
Ah, the gift of the written word, to think that a simple story on a "porn site" might inspire such thoughts of love and hate, pain and fear, hope and joy...
You crazy kids . . . .
What an amazing project. Your consistency over the last four months (much better than mine even reading it) is amazing. I thought this might last a couple weeks, you two are marathoners.
Congratulations - I've never seen anything quite like this. All the photos and sounds, the video, the story line and perfect writing, of course. Standing Lit ovation.