A Wager of Innocence OOC (closed to CGRaven, Yeishia and Kaena)

[Kaena]

I am so far, yes.

 

[yeishia]

I will try and have a post up tonight. I have a big kiddie party today so I might just sleep. It been an exhausting week working sick isn’t easy. If I can’t Friday night for sure.:kis

 

[yeishia]

.........double Post

 

[yeishia]

I have posted I hope it’s ok.

I wasn’t sure about the last line.

The devils eyes seduced.

Or the devils eyes seduced did they not?

Or simply leave it out ?

Maybe add him asking her name.

Child what is your name,

Her whispering aimée

I sort of left the rest up to one of you .

I hope you understood who evil walking over her grave was...A bit of foreshadowing lol

 

[Kaena]

Looks great. You can add him asking her name if you wish

 

[yeishia]

As it’s ok I think I’ll leave it.

 

[cgraven]

A very nice post yeishia.

 

[cgraven]

Kaena posted . I believe you are up next. You can let us see The Batards Chateau.

 

[yeishia]

I have a question do you want me to answer Lous Question before Keana posts?

I can do it. As it will be a short post I’ll try and do it straight after work. Or is it the plan to leave her behind to be collected once she retrieves her things or turns 18.

I can also change her age to be 18 that very day.

Also, in my post Aimée never spoke to Louis she was to afraid to break protocol .

Those were her thoughts ...

My fault, I should have advised you before we started.

I use speech marks for speech and

Italics for thoughts . I know some so the reverse .

Should I go back and edit mine to try and match yours... I don’t mind .

 

[Kaena]

I think what you wrote still works with his but if you wish to change it a bit that is fine. It could be just implied that she said something to the king.

 

[yeishia]

I think what you wrote still works with his but if you wish to change it a bit that is fine. It could be just implied that she said something to the king.

Thank goodness. I’d really rather not have to rewrite again it I can avoid it

Can we also assume she answered him re her age so that you can post at your leisure Kaena.

Having said that for me things need to flow re details. It might well drive me nut in that at some point in the middle of the night I’ll head back to fix it lol yes I’m crazy he he

 

[Kaena]

I will post next. I will work on describing the chateau as well. It may take me a bit to reply since I work all weekend, but, I will try my best. I think to avoid tripping over each other and causing others to have to rewrite their scenes, we should announce here when we intend to post next. It will not always be conducive to the flow of the story to go in the order of one after each other. There may be times where two of us post multiple times before the other is needed to post, depending on the scene.

 

[cgraven]

Sounds great Kaena.

 

[yeishia]

That sounds great a Keana. Hi CG.

I will pop up up a short post before Keana in response to Louis question. I will also have her voice her shock that she had spoken her thoughts our loud.

 

[cgraven]

Sounds good yeishia.

 

[Kaena]

I finally posted. If either one of you want to elaborate more on what the estate looks like, feel free to do so of course. Hope you guys like it.

Remember whoever wants to post next, please announce your intent to avoid the other from having to change what they wrote.

 

[yeishia]

I’ll let CG. post next . I have a huge week at work and am not feeling to good. I’ll probably not post before the weekend .

 

[Kaena]

No worries yeishia. I know how balancing work and being sick is. Hope you feel well soon

 

[cgraven]

Posted.

 

[yeishia]

My post is up , sorry for the delay

 

[Kaena]

I havent felt up to writing much the last few days. I hope to have a post up soon.

 

[cgraven]

Kaena That was a great post. I still am doing poorly but will try and get a post up. This is a great story.

 

[Kaena]

Take care of yourself. It is no rush. We are patient.

 

[cgraven]

Kaena I am trying to take care of myself.

Posted I hope it will move the plot along and give a little different approach to Aimee's seduction.

 

[yeishia]

Of course I’m interested . I have been posting lots . Pics and every thing

Thank you CG for posting especially as you’re still unwell *Hugs you* I loved your post.

I will have a response up by tonight