Adult incest - Mother and son

[momloverson]

I think it's a good idea but that it would work better if they don't talk TOO much about what they are doing right away. The element of erotic tension is enhanced if the taboo and reluctance elements remain through most of the series until near the end. So, for example, they start kissing, but they're not willing to do more than that and on Days 1 through 3 they don't have any expectation or intention to end up having sex. Don't make it too planned. Let some of it happen by accident, or unexpectedly.

For instance, on Day 2, they plan to do another massage, but without really planning to do it they start kissing. That's sexier than if they've had it all planned out ahead of time.

But the overall idea of it -- a vacation where on each day the action gets heavier and hotter -- sounds fun. I'm working on my own story with a 7-day vacation format, hopefully to be submitted with the Summer contest.

very hot premise Simon, you are a seasoned mother son genre writer

 

[lucy_anne21]

It’s a fertile area for a story, and it happens in real life a lot more than most people realise.

I might write something based on events that I’ve witnessed, but I’ll need to think about it for a while.

Lucy.

 

[momloverson]

All or nothing

I agree with Simon. Once that steel wall of society's norms is opened I am not sure it's easy to stop. I would say 6 days of close calls, but the moment if the wall opening, the knowledge they share that each wants the other and is wiling. I think "Jack and Diane" went through seven days of courtship if you will. It is the incredible fear of rejection and/or revelation, not only to the other, but if they tell anyone. That is the fear that fuels the fire. For something this taboo, it would be all or nothing I imagine. It is the playing of the game that is the fun, to me at least.

Oh yeah so my 7 days... Through out these events each is fantasizing about "what can never be" and "what I should not even think of".

1) Son home from college, matured and confident, to empty house after divorce.
2) Son comes down to breakfast only in shorts.
3) Mom sunbathes having seriously slimmed down after the divorce in the fall.
4) Son masturbates, louder than he things as mom is next door putting away clothes.
5) Mom discovers her vibrator moved and the ipad where she writes literotica not as she left it.
6) Son's birthday and mom makes his favorite meal with wine, fantasizing of seducing him. He goes out after dinner, leaving her sad and feeling down, finishes the wine.
7) Son comes home late and drunk finds mom on the couch in her robe. Sees the empty whine bottle and glass....

@wickedpen agrees with Simon and I agree with WP....its all in the detail, the slowness, the fear of rejection by the other, the fear of being not able to tell a soul what might happen on this vacation, slow and gentle hand holding by the sea to start

 

[momloverson]

"It's just the wine, making me tipsy" she forced herself to think, as butterflies fluttered in her tummy at the sight of her half-naked son.
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"g'nite mom"

hhmmmn.....it was the wine making her tipsy or the sight of her handsome, fit son half naked outside her room?? tropical weather & romantic places

 

[momloverson]

I find Mother-Son incest stories such a turn on. But I like certain parameters to be in place. First of all I like the first sexual activity to be initiated my the mother not the son.

Secondly it shouldn't be too obvious and too quick....too many read "I walked in on my mother in her bedroom, she was naked and we fucked".

Anyone ever been on a nervous first date ? You look for an excuse to touch the other person...something you can brush off as perfectly innocent if you don't get the response you wanted. Like touching his/her hand to see how soft the skin is or to admire the choice of nail paint. If she stiffens up and pulls back you can just smile and move on.

Be creative.

Be descriptive.

Mom is not a super model either, yes I want to know what description you have in mind but remember you're describing a woman in her late 40's & son is 23ish

 

[lucy_anne21]

I find Mother-Son incest stories such a turn on. But I like certain parameters to be in place. First of all I like the first sexual activity to be initiated my the mother not the son.

Secondly it shouldn't be too obvious and too quick....too many read "I walked in on my mother in her bedroom, she was naked and we fucked".

Anyone ever been on a nervous first date ? You look for an excuse to touch the other person...something you can brush off as perfectly innocent if you don't get the response you wanted. Like touching his/her hand to see how soft the skin is or to admire the choice of nail paint. If she stiffens up and pulls back you can just smile and move on.

Be creative.

Be descriptive.

Mom is not a super model either, yes I want to know what description you have in mind but remember you're describing a woman in her late 40's & son is 23ish

There are other more subtle ways it happens between a mum and son, and I’m part of the way through writing an article which has quite a number of the elements you suggest.

Based on real life experiences of a friend’s mother, and the details she furnished to me during several open and honest conversations, which I hope to submit for publication soon.

Of course I realise that it may not be exactly what you want, and I apologise in advance, as my writing isn’t too good, so you may find the style not to your liking, but I am learning, although I have a way to go yet.

However it was an interesting and very intense episode of taboo human interaction. I was invited and allowed to watch them together one evening, though I may not include that in the article, it depends on the flow of my writing.

Lucy.

 

[momloverson]

There are other more subtle ways it happens between a mum and son, and I’m part of the way through writing an article which has quite a number of the elements you suggest.

Based on real life experiences of a friend’s mother, and the details she furnished to me during several open and honest conversations, which I hope to submit for publication soon.

Of course I realise that it may not be exactly what you want, and I apologise in advance, as my writing isn’t too good, so you may find the style not to your liking, but I am learning, although I have a way to go yet.

However it was an interesting and very intense episode of taboo human interaction. I was invited and allowed to watch them together one evening, though I may not include that in the article, it depends on the flow of my writing.

Lucy.

ohhhh wow lucky you that you witnessed mother son flirting, teasing or maybe more in person....when & where do you intend to publish this?? @lucy_anne21 I think our likes, kinks, wants match