BlackSnake
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sirhugs said:Blacksnake - with a bit of polishing, I think you have a great start. Maybe add 200 words on the "why" of his attraction?
I hear yah. It's a romance story idea. With this, the girl gives it up at the end, with a hopeful vision for the future. I don't think I'm the romanic type. Maybe this should be written by someone with more of a feel for the soft touch.