I've written a lengthy (107k+ words) lesbian (mostly) BDSM story. I apparently have an issue in a lot of my writing where I mix up character's names in later chapters of my stories and of course re-reading them myself doesn't help me catch those issues most of the time.
Also, the story is sort of a-typical as the dom in the story is in the aftermath of a blow to her confidence, and the sub is just getting into the lifestyle on somewhat false pretenses.
If anyone would be willing to review it for continuity and that name mix-up issue I mentioned, I'd appreciate it.
Also, the story is sort of a-typical as the dom in the story is in the aftermath of a blow to her confidence, and the sub is just getting into the lifestyle on somewhat false pretenses.
If anyone would be willing to review it for continuity and that name mix-up issue I mentioned, I'd appreciate it.
