BigMac7189
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I am looking for a beta reader, preferably female, for my first foray into erotic literature. It would be in the Erotic Couplings category and is just shy of 6200 characters. It was inspired by an online friend of mine who asked me if I had any fantasies I wouldn't mind sharing, and this is the result. It is about two people who share an attraction and what happens when they meet in person for the first time. It is written in the first person, is a descriptive text of the encounter, and has no dialogue (at least not in the first installment).
I have already read it to my friend who says she enjoyed it, and would like a second (or third, or fourth) opinion on if it's good enough to share with the readers here. While constructive criticism of the grammar and punctuation is fine, I'm mainly looking for feedback on if it comes across as erotic and arousing, or just trite and cliche. It was written for a female audience, which is why I would prefer a female beta reader, but males can feel free to reply as well. My story is the first part in what I hope will be a multi-part series, depending on the feedback.
edit: changed "6200 words" to "6200 characters" because I misread the document stats.
I have already read it to my friend who says she enjoyed it, and would like a second (or third, or fourth) opinion on if it's good enough to share with the readers here. While constructive criticism of the grammar and punctuation is fine, I'm mainly looking for feedback on if it comes across as erotic and arousing, or just trite and cliche. It was written for a female audience, which is why I would prefer a female beta reader, but males can feel free to reply as well. My story is the first part in what I hope will be a multi-part series, depending on the feedback.
edit: changed "6200 words" to "6200 characters" because I misread the document stats.
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