bored housewife

[tightropewalker]

ok that doesn't really describe me...but kind of...now I'm going to post some poetry....and since I'm bored...and new on here...ill await the blows lol I call this one
lover
with your legs wrapped around me so tight....I feel alive and weightlessI take flight...like a phoenix rising out of the fire...the pressure you give me, the desire...the look in your eyes I cant read but inside I feel the need...waves crash inside my mind....I leave this world behind...nothing exists except this moment...No one in the world but us...tie me bind me to the moment...punish me for I am a slut...choke me I put my life in your hands...and if u want to kill me you can..I don't blame you for your distain...in all fairness he feels the same...run away from your words...they only serve to remind me how absurd...i am alone,to believe is a joke...love, the shit will make you choke....its fortunate that i tasted you...for a second my dreams felt tru...back to life and I know its a lie...thats why you will never see me cry....feelings fill me like your cock....and maybe I'll explode when you are on top...fuck me harder and when you are gone...its those memories I'll
hold on
so....if you have an opinion....let me know, I'm a big girl I can handle it

 

[ogre17]

more like a song than iambic pentameter

 

[tightropewalker]

lol I tend to write more like a song I would say thats a good analysis. And typically I would not even bother to post anything I do write but...I was bored today so I thought I would do something different. Thanks for the read!!!

 

[derrick4life]

sounds like a nice song, set to candlelight and fireplace

 

[tightropewalker]

its more like an angry song...but im sure candlelight can be incorporated

 

[derrick4life]

yeah, im dead by the fire. burned to a crisp

 

[derrick4life]

got any more?

 

[tightropewalker]

sounds serious....lol but yeah i got a few more pieces lol i think maybe each darker than the last lol I may need a fireplace to lighten it up

 

[derrick4life]

is Black your favorite color?

 

[tightropewalker]

some days i suppose it is....

 

[derrick4life]

i once dated a girl that wore black all the time. Well i dated her once, she brought her brother along.LOL

 

[tightropewalker]

giggles....

 

[tightropewalker]

i dont wear all black, i think i may be to old to do that kind of thing anymore....

 

[derrick4life]

Aww. Come on now.. Anybody that can write like that can't be too old for black undies

 

[tightropewalker]

ok...you are right about that...but mostly its none at all...wait...was that tmi????

 

[derrick4life]

Yeah i think it was

 

[BnB_Wolf]

and now comes the flood of IMs.

 

[tightropewalker]

o no i think thats already over...

 

[BnB_Wolf]

*chuckles* well part 2 then

 

[tightropewalker]

well i didnt really say if for that....because....thats kind of useless but i like to think i can have a sense of humor....and so far soooo good knock on wood, the avalanche did NOT happen....

 

[haha12345xxx]

i told you everyone would like it =)

 

[tightropewalker]

stretches...yawns...i hate mornings....thanks for the encouragement, you def called it!!!

 

[LanceWrite]

I actually heard this in my head as a 'spoken word' performance. More of a rap than a song.

Strong images. Raw emotions. Good art. Keep writing.

 

[tightropewalker]

Thanks...i would say thats kind of how i see them in my head also...and its pretty much real life feelings at the moment so i think it feels real also...thanks for the comment!

 

[derrick4life]

yea great song!! I like the one you sent me!! Wow