Bubblegum Pink by Tigerjen

Hey G.P.!

guilty pleasure said:
First, please picture me bowing repeatedly
and moaning..."I'm not worthy..". I am in total
awe of the folks in here and of their work.
So it is with jangling nerves I ask for opinions and
critique of my poem "Blind Love". Bear in mind that
the poems you see in Lit are my first attempts.
I have to admit that I think I threw them to the
wolves before polishing them. Then again, one can
spend too much time buffing...
Thanks for hours of pleasure, not
guilty at all...:)

Hi G.P.!
I will be more than happy to check out your poem
and give you feedback! :) Will do later on as I need
sleep...had overnite shift at work last nite and I haven't
even gotten to sleep yet!

Will read later!

TJ :)
 
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