Busy Bee's

[PhoenixLord]

A few days ago, I had an idea to expand on a series I made, inspired by a gay male story I read on Gaydemon many years ago (See "The Groom and the Dude Ranch")

The story Idea I had was this: A couple mixes up their reservation, and they find themselves at a clothing-optional bisexual beach Bed and Breakfast resort (Kind of like the gay porn trilogy, "Boys Trip"), where everyone walks around in next to nothing and has wild sex around the grounds. The Resort they're in is called "Busy Bee's Bed and Bathhouse", which is the same name as their intended destination, but their reservation site accidentally links the clothing-optional resort when they googled "Busy Bee's" without adding the "Bed and Breakfast" part. I was thinking it could work as both a humorous story and a group sex story. IDK which to make more of, since humour is subjective, and I'm currently writing something atm.

Thoughts?

 

[dirk2024]

I try to inject a little humor into some of my stories, but not enough to call them humorous. I can't pull that off...but I have seen some writers who can.

I would think that the couple needs to be very, very vanilla and the thought of any sort of exhibitionism freaks them out a bit. But, they do want to grow their sex life so, while they are in Rome...

 

[Carnevil9]

With the "bed and bathhouse" vs. "bed and breakfast," mix-up, I think you are already in the humorous category*. Fish out of water stories can be very entertaining. The naive couple could end up being vastly changed by the experience, if they embrace it. Or they can resist and escape with their vanilla natures intact and a set of horrifying memories.


*Not that I recommend submitting to the Humor category. I like to add a touch of humor to a tale that could easily fit in another category.