Club orgy

[fanzee1]

I think it has potential.

And I hope this doesn't offend, Fanzee, but I think that x would have a place in this story. I know it's not legal, etc., but I think that it's fiction, and at certain times things that aren't legal (whether it be drugs, murder, rape, etc.) have a place in fiction. If it's important to the story.

Just my thoughts. Don't hate me!

no, you're absolutely right. unfortunately, xtc is a big part of the rave culture. It should be in the story. I just wouldn't feel right writing about it.

Don't worry, i don't hate you...at least not for that.

j/k. you're cool with me.

 

[penguindance]

 

[MsLinnet]

somthing along the lines of the accused pool hall gang bang

 

[penguindance]

 

[Chicklet]

Chicklet, my only complaint about your story would be that it's awfully similar to other "rubbing" stories i have read.

I never know that anything I'm writing is mainstream, because, frankly, I've never read anything like it = p

Which is how I ended up with an "erotic coupling" story that gets me a "too mainstream!" response like, every day!

Chicklet

 

[penguindance]

 

[fanzee1]

You gotta learn not to listen to them, baby. Write what you like. Learn to write for you, not them.

(Not Fanzee, lol, the people who send you feedback...really, we're ALL writing for Fanzee, aren't we? )

Hmmm, i can't figure out whether that was an insult or a compliment, pls. I think i'll just move on.

 

[Guest]

There was a club here in London that used to have private parties on Sundays. To get in you had to know someone in the organising crew. One of the main "attractions" about the parties was that everyone stripped down on the dance floor. Of course the drugs took away most peoples' inhibitions and the common result was a wild orgy.

 

[penguindance]

 

[Chicklet]

There was a club here in London that used to have private parties on Sundays. To get in you had to know someone in the organising crew. One of the main "attractions" about the parties was that everyone stripped down on the dance floor. Of course the drugs took away most peoples' inhibitions and the common result was a wild orgy.

That sounds awsome!

 

[fanzee1]

There was a club here in London that used to have private parties on Sundays. To get in you had to know someone in the organising crew. One of the main "attractions" about the parties was that everyone stripped down on the dance floor. Of course the drugs took away most peoples' inhibitions and the common result was a wild orgy.

now THAT'S a party.

 

[fanzee1]

It was a compliment Fanzee darling, relax.

And mindpower...wow, that sounds crazy, doesn't it?

awww shucks. thank you.

 

[fanzee1]

counterculture?

mindpower touched on something quite interesting. The idea that there are countercultures, whole other worlds hidden in society is interesting and could be used as the framework for an erotic tale with many chapters, or even something short if you could boil down the exposition.

Kind of like the vampire subculture in the "Blade" comics and movies. You have to know someone in order to get in. We could have a story about someone on the outside who gets drawn into this underworld, where the rules are different, and has to learn his/her way through sexual adventures. Kind of like a hardcore Barbarella!

p.s.: Anyone who hasn't seen barbarella, rent it and get ready to laugh. One of the best "bad" movies ever made. Hilarious.

 

[MrFrost]

that movie rocked... and it also was a really cool club scene. i still think i would be intrested in reading this story.

 

[penguindance]