Comments That Make Your Day

A little something different in my comments today:

He's talking about:
Cheat-ify The Bitch
Ain't Technology Wonderful?

And

Cheat-ify The Bastard!
“The esteemed author "Gordo" should be canonized for creating these two compatible over the top works of retribution on those who sullied his fine upstanding MC's marriage. 5 stars. Thank You Gordo for the laughs I endured reading the best parts to my wife. (Who mildly shakes her head in a negative fashion while tolerating my interruption of whatever newscast she's listening to at the moment.)”

Cheatify the bitch comes first if you read.

Warning: reading these stories to your wife...well, I hope you sleep with one eye open
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There was a thread on 4chan, where stories in a gigantic Mega file were passed around.

Someone in the thread said, "You fucker, I went in here to have a wank and I went into one that had a funny name and I ended up reading a fucking novel-length epic romance between two futa porn stars that made me feel emotions."

Someone ELSE said, "Oh you found that one too? Yeah, it fucked me up a bit as well. Good read tho."

I checked the list to see if MY story about two futa porn stars with a silly name, The Grande Futapest Hotel, was on there. And it was. So I asked if that was the one they were talking about, and they said it was. He enjoyed it so much that he stopped masturbating and spent the entire night reading it.

Writing is my passion, which is why it's led me to write about all this sin. But comments like those... that shit is life-affirming. It has all been worth it.
 
So I guess batch processing for everything is now the agenda: How the fuck do you moderate your stories?
Checking as much as I could, it appears that all this activity took place in roughly 12 hours last night.
And with the time it takes to write and polish a story, the 1-2 days it gets in the sunlight are no longer worth it.
Better to turn them into books and put them on booksellers for the income.

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“A fantastic story. Thank you. Joystick007”
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“I liked - no, loved the story. And yes, tears here too.”
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Hidden Boss
“A fantastic story. Thank you. Joystick007”
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“A fantastic story. Thank you. Joystick007”
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“We had a few afghan hounds. We had a fenced in back yard but also an eight by forty foot kennel with a U shaped lever to keep the gate closed. One of the dogs learned he could open the gate by using h… Show all”
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“An absolutely fun read 😄
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“A fantastic story. Thank you. Joystick007”
 
Someone told me last night that my turns of phrase made him hard, my quick wit made him leak and my shamelessness made him cum.

If you ask me, we need more people like that in the world. Namely, people who compliment me and dedicate their orgasm to me.

I yield my time.
I swear I heard a mic drop.
 
“One of the best , intense , totally realistic , an entry into sexual adulthood that so many young men would have loved instead of same age fumbling that generally happens , it’s no wonder that age gap adventures are no longer looked down upon You write in such detail that your reader feels everything sees everything..."
 
The good from a Lit member:

"This was a very arousing story to read. Something like what was described in Part 1 is my top fantasy right now."

The bad from Anonymous:

"Another CFNM story. Is that all you know how to write?"

I have posted 31 CFNM stories thus far and I must be confused with another author.

Love, Patty
 
Not a comment, but I just had someone follow me after favoriting the first chapter of my series. This first chapter is only one page long and arguably rushed, yet this person didn't just like the chapter; they followed me because of it. Kinda insane.
 
Sure I know the praise really means 'one of the best I've read on the site recently,' but it's still nice to get the comment. It's the only story of mine that has the distinction of being stolen and republished (so far), and objectively it's my highest rated story (4.65 in Loving Wives, which is above 99th percentile).

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“Very elegant and entertaining story. One of the best stories on this site.”
 
A couple of nice comments last night from a reader who is obviously reading my entire portfolio. Always love that kind of dedication.

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Buckshot Ranch
“A fantastic story. Thank you. Joystick007”
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“A fantastic story. Thank you. Joystick007”
 
Translated from German 😊
This story is an absolute masterpiece!
However, if I had known how it would end, I’m sure I wouldn’t have read it.
Now I’m sitting here with tears in my eyes, feeling like someone who received no reward for their work, who is denied an orgasm during sex, whose plate is taken away while eating just as they reach for the fork…
I have never read such a sadistic story before.
 
I had some dramas around people’s ability to comment on my short Nude Day story, ‘The Chocolate Fountain’, but receiving some earnest discussion about whether wind would sufficiently cool melted chocolate on skin while escaping from skinny-dipping in said fountain on e-scooters has really made my day.

unadulterable35 minutes ago
Very entertaining. Without other clues as to season, I guess from Mia's sundress and your shorts and sandals that it was summer, though with antipodeans you can't be sure. I further wondered about the convective cooling of the scooter ride, and whether it would be enough to solidify the chocolate despite skin temperature, but Penny might be right that it would remain sticky. I suggest some empirical data.
 
A couple of nice comments last night from a reader who is obviously reading my entire portfolio. Always love that kind of dedication.

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“A fantastic story. Thank you. Joystick007”
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“A fantastic story. Thank you. Joystick007”
This has always caught my attention. Why will a reader sign off on a comment with their Lit handle but not comment under it?
 
I received this comment on my one remaining posted flash fiction story Her Orgasm. Thank you SH.

You should open up voting, just so that I could give this an 11. I realize that i am not your target audience. The brilliance of your work is that it speaks to me anyway.I could picture it unfolding. i could taste the chcolte.i could feel her thumb. I felt like it was me cupping her breasts. I have a big appreciation of dialogue driven writing, and i admire this. Intensely. I hope that you do not mind.
 
I recently submitted The Closer which is my first story in Gay Male.

While I certainly have a distinct bi streak, my adult experiences are limited and, obviously, I'm not gay. So, I was really concerned about it being cliche and descriptions being at least somewhat authentic.

Much to my relief and joy, the story has so far been well received and the following comment, although short, really made my day:

“Great story, loved reading it, I hope there are other chapters, would love to know Marcus point of view and if he is interested in him for more than that.”

The idea that someone had an emotional connection, at least on some level, to one of the characters really makes me happy and inspires confidence to explore this genre further! I know that a lot of the readers may be like me and not overly experienced so that may skew overall reception in my favor but a comment like that one, simple as it is, is very nice because it wasn't about the sex but about the character.
 
Not a comment, but someone just favorited my story so it's in their catalog of 20 favorite stories. Right beside my story is one of the first femdom stories I read when I found Lit. Absolutely surreal to see my story put alongside that classic story. Not to mention most of the other stories in their favorites page have a red H.
 
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All four Chapers of ‘Five Rules for Yes' are up now. ‘Five Rules for Yes Chapter 1 of 4’ etc. This came from a comment on Chapter 3. It makes me happy that someone thinks enough of the ethics session that they would think to consider adapting/pondering over those rules. 😀

by nthusiastic on 07/04/2026

So gosh darn proud of Sara Anne! The way she walked into the therapist’s office with a plan to make the most of her last visit. They did, too, they laid out a road map of ethics that would keep her safe, or at least safer. Those five rules are smart & fair. I think I’m going to add them to my journal & ponder over them.
Thank you for sharing your creative talents with us.
 
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