Comments That Make Your Day

[NoTalentHack]

On Shouldering the Burden:

Damn you. That I keep coming back to your stories, despite this being an erotic site, is testament to your skills as a writer. Let's be honest, your entire catalog is like boner genocide. 5

Another heartbreaking five star story. How many times did you watch "Grave of the Fireflies" as a boy?

 

[gordo12]

"Boner Genocide?" Man, that got a laugh out of me!

 

[NoTalentHack]

"Boner Genocide?" Man, that got a laugh out of me!

I laughed so hard at that one I scared my kids.

 

[gordo12]

I laughed so hard at that one I scared my kids.

Well, it's not fair you get such cool comments. I'm going to have to raise the bar for my readers!

 

[Djmac1031]

They want "mom's hot, why not?" look up another author.

Reminds me of a comment on my brother / sister incest story complaining about how conflicted the brother was about wanting to fuck his sister, like it's supposed to be totally normal for him to desire that.

 

[onehitwanda]

Reminds me of a comment on my brother / sister incest story complaining about how conflicted the brother was about wanting to fuck his sister, like it's supposed to be totally normal for him to desire that.

It only happens when one of them is on a flight of stairs. Step-bro, Step-sis, bow-chicka-wow-wow.

I'll show myself out.

 

[rutherford366]

I just jumped into a conversation about boner genocide, should I be worried?

 

[Euphony]

It only happens when one of them is on a flight of stairs. Step-bro, Step-sis, bow-chicka-wow-wow.

I'll show myself out.

If I never see another sister stuck in (assuming front load) washer...

 

[onehitwanda]

If I never see another sister stuck in (assuming front load) washer...

I thought the whole point of these scenes was to convert a front-load to a rear-load...

 

[gordo12]

A raft of comments tonight

Homeless:

A great, great story. Love it. AAAAAA++++++

Same commenter on Wheelchair Girl

What a beautiful story. Loved it. AAAAAA++++++

April Fool No Longer

Great story, very different. Just one little gripe that the author might think about. I can't believe that a cheating wife would become a bitch overnight because of her cheating, slightly different behaviour, yes, daydreaming, yes, guilt feelings, yes, being over affectionate, yes, a birch I doubt it. I was cheated on by only my second serious boyfriend, but he was never anything but nice. It's amazing how many lit author's call into this trap, writing in the LW section. Sorry could only give 4*

Cheatify The Bitch:

Don't care for death in a story, but it was as good a 750 word cheating wife story as you can get.

 

[SyleusSnow]

In the comments for my Valentine's story, I'm getting railed (ha!) because it mentions pegging. Guess I shouldn't have posted it in Romance. But several readers get it:

Very sweet story of two people finding each other again. And, to answer the question another commenter asked, "What man wants a giant dildo up the ass?" A man who loves his paramour enough to indulge her fantasy. Love isn't about doing what I want: it's about doing what my partner wants.

Nicely done. What the anti-anal obsessed miss is that he DIDN’T want “ a giant dildo up his ass” but what he DID want was to make Heather happy. And was willing to try something despite feeling uncomfortable about it to try to fulfill her desire... The focus for the readers should not be on a specific act that apparently bothers them but on doing that reluctantly but to try to please a special lover. Maybe that should add a star for the author taking a risk rather than subtracting one for including something some find offputting.

His abject fear of the dragon dong had me snickering all through the wrestling scene. And yes, a **real** man is willing to at least occasionally indulge his lover’s fantasies, even if it initially gives him the willies, as she will for him. 5 stars.

 

[Rustyoznail]

From my very British 750 word story...

"What's a todger?"

I nearly spat out my coffee laughing. I thought it was pretty bloody obvious from the story.

 

[onehitwanda]

From my very British 750 word story...

"What's a todger?"

I nearly spat out my coffee laughing. I thought it was pretty bloody obvious from the story.

what a weapon.

 

[theWollstonecraftWoman]

Sigh, even I who has never been out of America, knows what a todger is. What a Schmuck! I wonder if he knows that one? Of course, the original Yidish word is shmok. But a prick is a prick no mater the slang. Oh, wait, prick is slang. Of course, I'm talking about a person not a body part. Or am I?

 

[Kumquatqueen]

I wrote a Valentine's femdom story that was as emotionally nice and kind as such a tough BDSM story could be.

Anon says, You truly are a evil woman...and wonderful. You make pain alluring.

Mission accomplished!

 

[Kumquatqueen]

Had a couple recent comments on my story Gas Station Guy, presumably from people who read my recent story with the same character Rachel:

This really isn't my cuppa, but this was great.

And Aw it’s lovely. Great that Rachel appoints herself the young lad’s auntie, innit. (drifts off into defence of the area I'd called 'the armpit of south London')

 

[SamScribble]

I don’t post stories here at Lit to be instructed in the art and craft of writing stories. After writing professionally for more that 60 years, I usually have a pretty good idea of what I’m trying to achieve when I set out. And, an hour or two, or a week or two (or sometimes a month or two) after I have finished, I usually have a pretty good idea if I have achieved what I set out to achieve. Sometimes the answer is ‘yes’. And sometimes the answer is ‘not quite’. But sometimes I get a comment that makes me think: Well, that was worth it. Here's one recent comment:

‘Oh hell yes!’

 

[FifthEstate]

I had a serious case of writer's block from 3/21 till 8/22--I thought my time at Literotica was done. It finally started to lift in late summer of 22'. I came back with chapter 7 of my series "Warden's Wife Pays His Debt" in early October (4 mos. ago). I've been absolutely blown away by the response(s). Not only has it been my highest scoring story/chapter ever, but it's already captured 100k views, 100+ fav's and 70+ comments. It's the comments and emails that have absolutely warmed my soul and sparked my motivation to write again...I'm happy to say I now have several other things in the works including chapter 8 to this story. Sorry for the long list of quoted feedback, but I'm truly humbled by it. It was hard to pick which ones to post.

by Anonymous user on 10/02/2022
Never thought I’d see this!
I have to admit I thought this would never come. You are my favorite writer on Lit and it’s been over 2 years. I’m so happy you finally started writing again. I only read the first couple of pages cause now I feel like I want to savor it. So freakin good already! Welcome back!!!

by Anonymous user on 10/03/2022
WELCOME BACK!
This really is the best story - right up there with Cryptkeepers corruption stories - of anything on this site. So glad you are writing again!

by Sarahwithlove  on 10/04/2022
This is a masterpiece, and I was lost with arousal while my husband read to me this chapter. My god! We did not sleep a wink last night.

by furburger69  on 10/05/2022
Well fifth you've excelled yourself once again as a premium erotic story teller. Where will it go from here cant wait for final instalment don't keep us waiting to long.
hail the king of erotica

by Anonymous user on 10/24/2022
Bases loaded, top pf the 9th and CRACKKKKK his bat explodes with a grand slam homer. Yet again a great read from my favorite author.

by Anonymous user on 12/27/2022
been reading literotica nc/r stories for over 20+ years..
this is my best 5 star rating!
"attention to detail" is amazing..

by Anonymous user on 02/03/2023
This is the best piece of erotica I have ever read and I must say I have read quite a lot....I always had a proclivity for non/con, but I didn't know that it could be written so masterfully. I will be waiting for the 8th part hope you drop it soon Fifth!!!

 

[SyleusSnow]

Somehow I missed this one posted a few days ago for On the Side Ch. 03:

Having just read the most perfect Literotica story ever, I do now think that I shall have to leave this site for good, as anything else would pale in comparison. Thank you for sharing this with us, and thank you for telling us what happens to our protagonists in the future. I hate loose ends.

Hyperbole much? But I'll accept it just this once

 

[autoplot]

Not one specific comment, but there have been times when readers have told me they want to see more because they just want to follow the characters' lives, to be a part of their world in some way. They don't want to leave. Those are the best kinds of comments to me.

 

[MelissaBaby]

A comment today on Twitter, from a fellow author, regarding Wild Birds of Maine

"I just read this terrific story and I low-key wish I had written it. Wonderful pacing, genuine emotions, and an open ended HEA that leaves you wanting more. 5"

I can't imagine a greater compliment from another author than "I wish I had written it."

 

[ChloeTzang]

Oh my, I just got this one and I was really really moved that someone really felt what I was trying to convey.

"That was the most searing story of love and loss I have read on this site. It was also a searing description of depression, I know, as I was clinically depressed for 5 years following the breakdown of my marriage when I was 30."

 

[gordo12]

Nice Comment on Cheatify The Bastard:

I love the way you think 5 stars. Keep on writing

 

[gordo12]

Nice Comment on The Bet (10 Dates)

Loved the story, thought after reading it it might be in the wrong category, but great story ether way..

 

[Djmac1031]

Since I'm not publishing as often as when I first started here, I have less comments to share lately.

But getting some really nice feedback on my newest story, just published today, including this one:

"so loving, so erotic. Maybe one of your best stories."

Especially encouraging since I feel my writing hasn't been as inspired lately.