Comshaw
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- Joined
- Nov 9, 2000
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I just received this comment on my 750 word story "More Than They Know". I try to be a stoic, grumpy old fart, but sometimes, sometimes an ego stroke by a reader sneaks past my sourpuss facade. When it does, it does feel good, like butterflies and honey biscuits.
shadrachtabout 8 hours ago
An absolutely masterful 750 story. So many of these lack so much detail that the story suffers greatly. Here, the economy of words tells us things without spelling it out. It gets every detail that's really salient across, and doesn't waste a single character. Super difficult to do, and 5 / 5 marks here. Thank you.
Comshaw
shadrachtabout 8 hours ago
An absolutely masterful 750 story. So many of these lack so much detail that the story suffers greatly. Here, the economy of words tells us things without spelling it out. It gets every detail that's really salient across, and doesn't waste a single character. Super difficult to do, and 5 / 5 marks here. Thank you.
Comshaw

