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MysteriousRyu
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Lawlz, oh man now everyone is coming out of the woodwork. Anyways I posted that alternate path in the Chigusa vs Dolly match.
Also Xorph you should post in the story more, your posts are usually pretty good imo.
Also Xorph you should post in the story more, your posts are usually pretty good imo.
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Still going. I added a few threads to the jobber bondage olympics.
I also had a new character in mind... this story's been leaning way more towards catfighting than wrestling lately. So I thought I'd make one who was a wrestler. Not like Melissa, more of a traditional wrestler... I was thinking of Robin the session wrestler and Ariel X, who's the ultimate surrender champion righ now when I came up with the idea.
Plus one I came up with the last time I tried to post. I wrote a thread a long time ago where Becky and Yasmin went to a restaurant. I was going to make the waitress there a character. Gimmick is that she looks like a jobber but she's really a psychopathic heel like Becky and Yasmin. A wolf in sheeps clothing. I had a really long thread written and lost it cos my browser crashed...
I also had a new character in mind... this story's been leaning way more towards catfighting than wrestling lately. So I thought I'd make one who was a wrestler. Not like Melissa, more of a traditional wrestler... I was thinking of Robin the session wrestler and Ariel X, who's the ultimate surrender champion righ now when I came up with the idea.
Plus one I came up with the last time I tried to post. I wrote a thread a long time ago where Becky and Yasmin went to a restaurant. I was going to make the waitress there a character. Gimmick is that she looks like a jobber but she's really a psychopathic heel like Becky and Yasmin. A wolf in sheeps clothing. I had a really long thread written and lost it cos my browser crashed...
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Actually since we have real life girls and wrestlers in the story I definitely wouldn't mind seeing any Ultimate Surrender girls in the story like Ariel X, Vendetta, or even Nina.
I am thinking of creating a new character but, instead of creating yet another character and then fiding there's zero interest in her, I thought I'd mention it here first.
She's going to be a novice wrestler who aspires to be a legendary Heel. Unfortunately, she's four foot nine, built like a towel rack and is woefully inept at wrestling. She's also totally oblivious to her hopelessness and thinks the big win that will make her a star is just around the corner, which it never is. I'm thinking of calling her Little Miss Chaos.
What do you guys think? Is this an interesting character, or should I just write stuff for the characters that are already there?
She's going to be a novice wrestler who aspires to be a legendary Heel. Unfortunately, she's four foot nine, built like a towel rack and is woefully inept at wrestling. She's also totally oblivious to her hopelessness and thinks the big win that will make her a star is just around the corner, which it never is. I'm thinking of calling her Little Miss Chaos.
What do you guys think? Is this an interesting character, or should I just write stuff for the characters that are already there?
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I think it's a good one adn you should make it. I've always been an advocate of having jobbers for the good girls to rough up and fuck hard.
I've also always sort of thought that what makes a new girl catch on is whether she has a good personality or not. I've made some characters based on just some random fetish like Sadie Boudreux and Kaavya, and they didn't catch on. The ones that did were Yasmin, who's an obsessive-compulsive perfectionist to the point of being psychotic, Sheana who goes on instinct and sixth sense, and Tara. Melissa didn't catch on until Luffy added the bad-at-sexfighting bit to her, which made her much more intersting.
So yeah, I think a wannabe bad girl who is neither bad nor intimidating is a great idea.
I've also always sort of thought that what makes a new girl catch on is whether she has a good personality or not. I've made some characters based on just some random fetish like Sadie Boudreux and Kaavya, and they didn't catch on. The ones that did were Yasmin, who's an obsessive-compulsive perfectionist to the point of being psychotic, Sheana who goes on instinct and sixth sense, and Tara. Melissa didn't catch on until Luffy added the bad-at-sexfighting bit to her, which made her much more intersting.
So yeah, I think a wannabe bad girl who is neither bad nor intimidating is a great idea.
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Hoo, I missed a lot! Let's see if i can get it all in...
Little Miss Chaos would basically be an evil version of the Luv twins then (*imagines slap fight between her and Timmy)? either way, i'm on board
and holy shit, do i miss Ultimate Surrender. I can only find some of the leaks lately, and haven't subscribed to them in years. i keep checking in now and then and they're really expanded. and yea, Ariel looks way hot.... if only i had the money to follow them...
But could make a good crossover PPV or storyline. I'd say add Ultimate Surrender style matches in there, but they basically violate the loser anywhere here in the mixed league (is it still even called that after the male supression? maybe in the terms of mixed fighting styles...)
But the thing about new girls, I find, is their early activity. A few main things make them stand out to me, though I'm sure there's exceptions. They should ideally be something different, with something the other girls can't offer, for one.
Mainly it's how they develop. They should either carve a niche into the league, like Yasmin's immediate rivalry with Big Booty (when was the last time anyone called her that?),
Would like to maybe see something about Tanya McVan losing power after all this struggles (daughter and Baroness' usurping and various Luv rebellions and such, take your pick). Then a sort of chaos falls on the league with people vying for leadership or ownership, kicking asses to try and gain enough respect or fear or money to earn leadership. Maybe Tanya's bodyguards taking sides (I didn't follow it close, but maybe like the WWF vs WCW wars?) as major players, with some of them still secretly on Tanya's payroll to try and bring her back into power.
And like any stereotypical storyline, they'd find Tanya really did help keep order, or that the job isn't that much fun, or something to make them bring her back "just as planned." Or heck, go nuts and make a new staff
Little Miss Chaos would basically be an evil version of the Luv twins then (*imagines slap fight between her and Timmy)? either way, i'm on board
and holy shit, do i miss Ultimate Surrender. I can only find some of the leaks lately, and haven't subscribed to them in years. i keep checking in now and then and they're really expanded. and yea, Ariel looks way hot.... if only i had the money to follow them...
But could make a good crossover PPV or storyline. I'd say add Ultimate Surrender style matches in there, but they basically violate the loser anywhere here in the mixed league (is it still even called that after the male supression? maybe in the terms of mixed fighting styles...)
But the thing about new girls, I find, is their early activity. A few main things make them stand out to me, though I'm sure there's exceptions. They should ideally be something different, with something the other girls can't offer, for one.
Mainly it's how they develop. They should either carve a niche into the league, like Yasmin's immediate rivalry with Big Booty (when was the last time anyone called her that?),
Would like to maybe see something about Tanya McVan losing power after all this struggles (daughter and Baroness' usurping and various Luv rebellions and such, take your pick). Then a sort of chaos falls on the league with people vying for leadership or ownership, kicking asses to try and gain enough respect or fear or money to earn leadership. Maybe Tanya's bodyguards taking sides (I didn't follow it close, but maybe like the WWF vs WCW wars?) as major players, with some of them still secretly on Tanya's payroll to try and bring her back into power.
And like any stereotypical storyline, they'd find Tanya really did help keep order, or that the job isn't that much fun, or something to make them bring her back "just as planned." Or heck, go nuts and make a new staff
I like the idea of little miss chaos but you may want to change the name since Jessie's alter ego is name Chaos so we don't have any confusing between the two and with the power struggle i tired to do that with the civil war story line i tired to make up a while go when Tanya capture Jack and the other superstars but no seem to follow it that much. Maybe that type of storyline will have better luck this time around through.
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Actually if you want Ultimate Surrender videos I know a place where to find them pretty easily. I can PM you the link if you like.
Anyways I like that idea of doing a PPV with Ultimate Surrender style matches (realism wouldn't hurt too much every now and then.)
Also from what I've noticed the new writer is coming along quite nicely, I definitely think their latest additions to that Chigusa storyline were quite good.
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sense some of you are into pro wrestling. Wondering if you played Smackdown Vs Raw. The new one
You can created stories, and download them and upload them. Granted not OUR stories. But its fun none the less in a non sexual way. Also character. downloaded a SWEEEEEEEEEET user created Ultimate warrior
Also can make finisher.
Sad for you diva fans. The body types are more limited for them. only 4 types compared to the the 8 for men. Sad. Also you can fight men as Divas, not such story lines but at all
In fact they have MIXED tag matches. But if a guy hits the girl Game over, and the if a girl in the ring to long with a guy game over. This wouldnt be so bad, but in a mikie Jane Storyline, you HAVE to do a mixed tag TWICE
Got disqualified like 9 times our of pure accident. Cause my guy simply TOUCH the other lady
There is an illegal patch to get around it
but not going to use it myself cause microsoft been banned happy lately
But The created a highlight reel pretty sweet
and know havent made any character from our stories. Plan to though. Made basicly my self with a HUGE fro and assless chaps...just because I thought it was funny
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You can created stories, and download them and upload them. Granted not OUR stories. But its fun none the less in a non sexual way. Also character. downloaded a SWEEEEEEEEEET user created Ultimate warrior
Also can make finisher.
Sad for you diva fans. The body types are more limited for them. only 4 types compared to the the 8 for men. Sad. Also you can fight men as Divas, not such story lines but at all
In fact they have MIXED tag matches. But if a guy hits the girl Game over, and the if a girl in the ring to long with a guy game over. This wouldnt be so bad, but in a mikie Jane Storyline, you HAVE to do a mixed tag TWICE
Got disqualified like 9 times our of pure accident. Cause my guy simply TOUCH the other lady
There is an illegal patch to get around it
but not going to use it myself cause microsoft been banned happy lately
But The created a highlight reel pretty sweet
and know havent made any character from our stories. Plan to though. Made basicly my self with a HUGE fro and assless chaps...just because I thought it was funny
Ps Mys
PM me to
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also forgot, a big part of my first impressions of a fighter are their early dialogue. you get an idea of what they're like when you write on their personalities in the bios, but don't get a solid feel for them til they do some trash talking, or lack thereof. Hence I tend to dislike when a match starts with just a list of the fighters' stats. At least a brief match rundown or an exchange of unpleasantries is preferred, and i try to do that when i can
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Actually if you want Ultimate Surrender videos I know a place where to find them pretty easily. I can PM you the link if you like.
also, hell yes, please
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Ok I'll send out the link, though Luffy it says you don't accept PMs, so if you could turn that on I'll be able to send the link.
EDIT: Same for you Anty.
EDIT: Same for you Anty.
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Nah its still not letting me send.
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Eh, true true I suppose.
http://planetsuzy.org/showthread.php?t=40445
They usually update fairly often, the only downside is they usually upload the videos with rapidshare so it may take some time to download videos.
http://planetsuzy.org/showthread.php?t=40445
They usually update fairly often, the only downside is they usually upload the videos with rapidshare so it may take some time to download videos.
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I subscribe to Ultimate Surrender once a year, give or take a few months. Actually I kinda rotate the paysites I subscribe to, but I only subscribe to anything for a month, maybe twice a year. Wait for a whole bunch of new stuff to accumulate then download the shit out of it. US hasn't been updating very fast lately so I haven't subscribed there for a good while.
The other site I semi-regularly subscribe to is Utopia Entertainment. They're mainly muscle chicks and f vs m, but they've got some good stuff with more traditionally feminine chicks lately. I can rapidshit on demand.
I used to be a huge pro wrestling fan, and I'm the fan of realistic stuff, but it's hard as hell to write realistic good for erotica... sometimes I get it but usually not so much.
The other site I semi-regularly subscribe to is Utopia Entertainment. They're mainly muscle chicks and f vs m, but they've got some good stuff with more traditionally feminine chicks lately. I can rapidshit on demand.
I used to be a huge pro wrestling fan, and I'm the fan of realistic stuff, but it's hard as hell to write realistic good for erotica... sometimes I get it but usually not so much.
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Also posted my bad girl looks like a jobber but isn't character.
http://video.*********/video90107/alexa_von_tess_vs_ariel_x my site. Some of the scenes just go to the sex while some are the trailers. Just type catfight in the search engine and you get it. For some reason i get dashes where the site is and wont change so just copy the address and add xnxx .com where the star are and you should get it don't speparate the xnxx and the .com like i did since it went into dashes when i put them together for this thread
Also a site called OV guide has ton of free porn sites http://www.ovguide.com/adult-fetish-bondage.html some have long ultimate submission movies but you have search for them but i found plenty of good porn while looking.
this site has a lot of moves from the same studio like chanta's bitches or wired pussy
http://www.tnaflix.com/fetish-videos
Also a site called OV guide has ton of free porn sites http://www.ovguide.com/adult-fetish-bondage.html some have long ultimate submission movies but you have search for them but i found plenty of good porn while looking.
this site has a lot of moves from the same studio like chanta's bitches or wired pussy
http://www.tnaflix.com/fetish-videos
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Well I just added a couple of threads that could help with the Tanya take over, a new rival with Jack, the Baroness reign, The relationship Jack and Zoe and The thread that was made where Becky tries to have revenge on Jess for having sex with shadow ape. Well not all of them but if the story goes right then it will. It will even help with Jack's tag team, fraction and intergender belt storyline and why those belts for the men are back. It will even have a funny explanation about why Jack have a cat and hopefully shred some light on Jack and Zoe's family tree.
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