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Crime and Persuasion...
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OOC..
Waiting outside the door might have been a good move...
I'm a little bit confused, I was under the impression that Hayes had been taken to Amile's room not a voyeur Doctor's private clinic or hospital which doesn't seem to gel with the intentions of a serial killer wanting to keep an adversary occupied in seclusion with out the unnecessary complications of more witnesses. And I certainly wasn't under impression it was SRP etiquette to drug another role player without their consent surely if that was the intent then Stratton would have just drugged the guy and kept him sedated long enough to make his escape. Of course if this has been agreed before hand I retract the comment. But I don't find the prospect of seducing a drugged man particulary erotic.
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Waiting outside the door might have been a good move...
I'm a little bit confused, I was under the impression that Hayes had been taken to Amile's room not a voyeur Doctor's private clinic or hospital which doesn't seem to gel with the intentions of a serial killer wanting to keep an adversary occupied in seclusion with out the unnecessary complications of more witnesses. And I certainly wasn't under impression it was SRP etiquette to drug another role player without their consent surely if that was the intent then Stratton would have just drugged the guy and kept him sedated long enough to make his escape. Of course if this has been agreed before hand I retract the comment. But I don't find the prospect of seducing a drugged man particulary erotic.
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OOC: I wasn't given any guidelines as to what would be hapening in the thread, I've left it so he may refuse the drink if he likes. I was trying to work at getting Eve into it,since I've posted her as a nurse not a prostitute. Viagra is hardly something that would leave the man incoherent, But it might make an unwilling man more interested in all the women that are advancing on him.
I'd remove it if everyone wasn't into it, however it posted as unregistered. I apologize if this makes you uncomfortable, maybe we should wait and see how everyone else would like to play it.
I'd remove it if everyone wasn't into it, however it posted as unregistered. I apologize if this makes you uncomfortable, maybe we should wait and see how everyone else would like to play it.
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OOC:
Sure Coral, to be honest I am easy either way, but I'd like to clear up confusions as a writer and for readers, especially the Doctor character and 'hospital' feel that the plot has taken given that it wasn't in the initial description.
I was under the impression that no means of restraint other than that of seduction was the plan, drugging the cop would leave evidence of foul play. The opening stated no harm and 'feel free to leave' I naturally extended that in my own opionion to meaning no artificial persuasions or obstructions, but as you say see how it goes.
Sure Coral, to be honest I am easy either way, but I'd like to clear up confusions as a writer and for readers, especially the Doctor character and 'hospital' feel that the plot has taken given that it wasn't in the initial description.
I was under the impression that no means of restraint other than that of seduction was the plan, drugging the cop would leave evidence of foul play. The opening stated no harm and 'feel free to leave' I naturally extended that in my own opionion to meaning no artificial persuasions or obstructions, but as you say see how it goes.
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OOC : Shit's cool, I'll just refuse the drink, you girls knock yourselves out on drugs, LOL
IC : Were these women stupid? They wouldn't answer any question I asked. No, they weren't stupid, far from it. But I wanted answers, still, I was looking for them, as I looked at the two women, both leering at me.
"Look, I'm going to ask you what I asked her" gesturing the gun at the Asian girl. "Who sent you? There's no way I'm touching anything here today. I want my clothes, and I want to go home. Tell me what's going on, how did I get here?"
IC : Were these women stupid? They wouldn't answer any question I asked. No, they weren't stupid, far from it. But I wanted answers, still, I was looking for them, as I looked at the two women, both leering at me.
"Look, I'm going to ask you what I asked her" gesturing the gun at the Asian girl. "Who sent you? There's no way I'm touching anything here today. I want my clothes, and I want to go home. Tell me what's going on, how did I get here?"
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Amile
I reached out and took away the gun from behind in one swift moment.
"First of all mister police officer, if you are going to use a gun make sure it is loaded before trying to threaten anyone with it. Second, check to see if the saftey is off. The threat works better that was." I tossed the gun out of sight and gently pulled him back down to the bed next to me.
I reached out and took away the gun from behind in one swift moment.
"First of all mister police officer, if you are going to use a gun make sure it is loaded before trying to threaten anyone with it. Second, check to see if the saftey is off. The threat works better that was." I tossed the gun out of sight and gently pulled him back down to the bed next to me.
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OOC:The Preacher could not get to send so here it is from me
Rowland Hayes:
My hands were shaking, I felt so helpless as I looked at the impotent gun at the door. I followed her onto the bed, my eyes heavy with dissapointment, though still flaming with suspicion. I sat, like a lost puppy, waiting for the next move.
"Please, tell me what's going on?"
My last effort at anger had failed, I was practically begging them now.
Rowland Hayes:
My hands were shaking, I felt so helpless as I looked at the impotent gun at the door. I followed her onto the bed, my eyes heavy with dissapointment, though still flaming with suspicion. I sat, like a lost puppy, waiting for the next move.
"Please, tell me what's going on?"
My last effort at anger had failed, I was practically begging them now.
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Eve licks her lips, studying the glass, feeling herself throb as she watches Amile, pushing him back on the bed. Thinking how sexy she looked, how firm her ass was. Wondering how it would feel in her hands.
Trying to snap herself out of her thoughts, and get back to her job. She reaches for the tray.
" Please, Mr. Hayes, Let me tend to you" Her eyes fall to his crotch as Amile rubs him. Her eyes move over his bare chest. A tiny moan escapes her lips as she bends, feeling is breathe on her cleavage, while she inspects his injuries, finding them to be only minor.
Eve licks her lips, studying the glass, feeling herself throb as she watches Amile, pushing him back on the bed. Thinking how sexy she looked, how firm her ass was. Wondering how it would feel in her hands.
Trying to snap herself out of her thoughts, and get back to her job. She reaches for the tray.
" Please, Mr. Hayes, Let me tend to you" Her eyes fall to his crotch as Amile rubs him. Her eyes move over his bare chest. A tiny moan escapes her lips as she bends, feeling is breathe on her cleavage, while she inspects his injuries, finding them to be only minor.
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OCC: that was me again! Does anyone know how to fix this? I keep posting as unregistered.
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It was obvious that everything was under control, having waited for several minutes for someone to answer the door and listening to the muffled voices inside.
I left the bottle of champagne before the door and headed back down the stairwell to the street.
I left the bottle of champagne before the door and headed back down the stairwell to the street.
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Amile
I heard a slight knock at the door as I started to play with the cop on the bed.
"Mandy if that is you come on in and join us." I call out to the closed door too busy occupying Rowland to get up and answer.
"We have been expecting you"
I heard a slight knock at the door as I started to play with the cop on the bed.
"Mandy if that is you come on in and join us." I call out to the closed door too busy occupying Rowland to get up and answer.
"We have been expecting you"
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