Cuckold

BlackSnake said:
Chicklet, I agree with the reasoning for the wife that you laid out. I would also include her master minding the sex with the black guy as part of her coming into her own. She is manipulating her husband while allowing him to believe that he is still in control.

The subtlies of her manipulation can be written in the details.

In my story the husband wouldn't be the woman's "master" - they just happen to have a D/s relationship which they probably aren't even aware of.
 
First, I really didn't know what "cuckold" meant.

Chicklet, maybe I should have written mastermind, so that you wouldn't have misunder stood. So, my thought was lost in my spelling error. Good catch.

This couple inferred here is not that far from reality. I feel the same way as you, about them not classifying themselves as D/s. It just works out that way for the wicked minded reader.

BlessedBe, we can't have a different category for every thing, so I guess the administrators of the board had to draw the line somewhere.
 
BlackSnake said:

BlessedBe, we can't have a different category for every thing, so I guess the administrators of the board had to draw the line somewhere.

I never said Laurel should create yet another story category. (Though she seems to have taken every suggestive I've seen since they opened in 99.) I said "Loving Wives" is a false name. Especially with the provided definition of cuckold.
 
We are getting lost in a definition, take the story for what it is!!! The story has great potiental. The wife knowingly and secretly puts the idea of a husband offering his wife to a black man into her own husbands head. Then only 'goes along with it' because it is what the husband really wants - now, after all the subliminal hints and secret postings on his website. Forget about the title of the story and take it for what it is worth.
 
I think that this category (loving wives) should be split up.

From what I heard, the majority of the cuckold stories in the section get slammed by readers. I wrote a real loving wives story and got some really nice feedback "so nice to read about a real loving wife"

Chicklet
 
So, even though popular belief claims that "Loving Wives" are cuckold stories, the fan base at Lit disagrees? What was the basic theme of your story then? How did you write a "loving wife" story?
 
yeah. weird, huh? Axeltheswede had a lot to say about that - or so Tate is always telling me :rolleyes:

My story was just about a woman pleasuring her man. No real story, just, like, a girl and her guy. Not as much plot as my stuff USUALLY has.

Chicklet
 
BlessedBe said:
.... I said "Loving Wives" is a false name. Especially with the provided definition of cuckold.

I agree, "Loving Wives" to me means that the wife is only having sex with her husband.

"Slut wife" she having sex with all humans.

"Cheating wife" she is having sex without her husband's knowledge.

"Submissive wife" she does what her husband tells her to do. (The robot)...just kidding.
 
continuing the idea, to see where it will go and stay in-line with the main idea....

The wife is feeling more sexual than ever. The young white man was packing a really nice piece of equipment. What started out as a stab at her husband became a real sexual adventure. She logged onto the message board and saw where her husband had posted pictures of her being fucked by the black man. At first she was shocked that he would do it, but after reading some of the replies, she became turned on by all of the sugguestions.

She reviewed the pictures of her and the black man again. She could almost feel the thrust of his cock inside of her as she began to rub her clit. Her thoughts were interrupted by the sound of her door bell.

She opened the door seeing a handsome black man in a stylish suit. The man's warm greeting set her at ease. He told her that he was a friend of the white guy that had just fucked her.

His straight forwardness about what she had done prompted her to invite the man in to keep any suspicion away from her front door. She questioned him as to how many people knew about what she has done, and he comforted her by saying that he was the only other one.

The man told her how the other two men had bragged on her beauty and sexuality, that he had to come see for himself. The man explained the he was roommates with the other two men.

The wife asked the man not to tell anyone else about her. The man readily agreed with the foresight that she would have sex with him.

They did around the world, and the wife thought there could be no end to the amount of pleasure she was receiving. After the man left, she went onto the board and began posting sugguestions about a gangbag....
 
more thoughts.....

While she is one the board, logged in not as her husband, her husband logs on from work. She has an id of a man who has his wife doing all kinds of things and he loves it.

The wife post messages encouraging the husband to try a gang bang on his wife. She tells him that the pics he posted are great and that he should continue. Other posters agree. The husband posts that he will do it and posts the pictures.

The wife logs off and waits in anticipation. She had been fucked by two different men that day and she still found herself wanting more. The thought of having the three men she had already fuck at the same time excited her.

In making sure that she wasn't exspecting any company, she put on a plain t-shirt and spandex shorts with the t-shirt tied up around her waist. She also decided to be barefoot to further her look.

When her husband arrived home, he had all three men with him. He introduced them and the previous men pretended like they had never seen her before. The husband told the wife that they were just over for drinks and she could forget about cooking. He wanted her to join them.

Again, she showed relutance, but her husband insisted. She caved not wanting to put up a real fight. She just hoped that the wetness between her legs would not give her away.

All the men were sporting visible hardons including her husband. The situation went from the husband showing off his camera to him having the wife pose with all of the men.

The husband only made a single suggestion about how the should post, before the men had the wife stripped naked and posing with their hard cocks hanging out of their pants.

Cock sucking and cum swallowing was the first line of order, and then she was laid out with one man licking her cunt and the other two with her tits in their mouths.

It was very late when they called it a night. Each of the men including her husband had enter ever orifice that she had. Her husband had got multiple pictures of every scene.

The wife was completely wiped out and satisfied. After a long bath, which she nearly fell asleep in, she called it a night. She could still feel the pressure of each of the cock entering her.

The morning before the husband left for work, he uploaded the pictures. He should the wife how popular she was on the message board. She pretended to be upset that her husband posted pictures of her on the internet, but allowed him to think that he convinced her that it was good.

The wife noticed a thread called sexy places and knew that her husband would have an opportunity to take a vacation soon. After her husband left for work, she got on the board and explored the thread.

She saw pictures of women having sex with natives of the islands and other exortic places. She began to make suggestion on her husband's thread about these places.

The three men became regulars in her home. Posing for her husband while they fucked her.

By the time her husband put in for vacation, he had it in his mind to take pictures of his wife being fucked by the natives of each of the places they would visit.

When they returned from vacation, the wife confessed what she had done. Instead of being upset that he had been manipulated, the husband was over joyed. He had believed that his wife was weak, being the business man that he was. Seeing that she had out witted him gave him a new repect for her.

They continued posting fuck pics on the board, but this time the wife made the suggestion for the situations, and the pictures were much more exciting.

How about that?
 
well blacksnake, you seem to have it pretty well thought out.

gonna write it?

i'm thinking of writing the idea i mentioned previously
 
Chicklet said:
well blacksnake, you seem to have it pretty well thought out.

gonna write it?

i'm thinking of writing the idea i mentioned previously

Could we use this as a collaboration for the Survivor 2003 since you, I and BlessedBe had input?
 
BlessedBe said:
I never said Laurel should create yet another story category. (Though she seems to have taken every suggestive I've seen since they opened in 99.) I said "Loving Wives" is a false name. Especially with the provided definition of cuckold.

I think that you are absolutely on target about the "loving wives" category. It seems odd, to say that least, that romantic stories about constant faithful wives would be lumped together with "slut-wife" stories. They should be in altogether separate categories.

I'm sure this has a negative effect on the voting on either type of story. Fans of tales of truly "loving wives" probably aren't going to want to read about how some suburban White soccer-mom accidentally walked into the office of her daughter's soccer coach while he was undressing, sees his Pringles-can-sized Black shlong, instantly turns into a "slut for black cock" and yada yada yada, she and her daughter end up turning tricks in the ghetto for Black LeRoy the big-dicked soccer-pimp.

Conversely, I'd imagine that guys who surf to the "loving wives" pages with expectations of reading coarse lewd unfaithful slut-wife stories are disappointed when they happen upon enchanting idylls of impassioned young marrieds frolicking amorously amidst fields of wildflowers, whilst feeding each other fine Belgian chocolates and reading aloud from Byron and Baudelaire.
 
BlackSnake said:
Could we use this as a collaboration for the Survivor 2003 since you, I and BlessedBe had input?

if you started it as a chain story, and went through all the rules of doing a chain story, then you could get those points. otherwise it'll just count as a loving wives or interracial or however you choose to categorize this

(in the future, post survivor questions on the discussion thread. makes me feel important and stuff)
 
Cuckolded_BlK_Male said:

I'm sure this has a negative effect on the voting on either type of story. Fans of tales of truly "loving wives" probably aren't going to want to read about how some suburban White soccer-mom accidentally walked into the office of her daughter's soccer coach while he was undressing, sees his Pringles-can-sized Black shlong, instantly turns into a "slut for black cock" and yada yada yada, she and her daughter end up turning tricks in the ghetto for Black LeRoy the big-dicked soccer-pimp.

omg

i haven't laughed so hard in years

Chicklet
 
Chicklet said:
omg

i haven't laughed so hard in years

Chicklet

You didn't also find the "Byron and Baudelaire" thing funny? I very nearly pissed myself laughing when I wrote it.
 
you just crack me up period.

and i think we owe it to stanley to get back on topic now = )
 
Chicklet said:
if you started it as a chain story, and went through all the rules of doing a chain story, then you could get those points. otherwise it'll just count as a loving wives or interracial or however you choose to categorize this

(in the future, post survivor questions on the discussion thread. makes me feel important and stuff)

Yes, mam
 
Well,

Blacksnake you realy hit the nail on the head with your ideas. That is nearly what I envisioned! Great job.
 
StanleyCuckold said:
Well,

Blacksnake you realy hit the nail on the head with your ideas. That is nearly what I envisioned! Great job.

I'm putting it together into a story
 
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