Daughter getting women for her father
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Post-divorce (doesn't have to be a bad one or anything, just that the dad's now single - better this way so there's no extra drama involved), father and daughter develop a new relationship...less father and daughter and more like friends. After all, she's now 20-something with her own life, and the dad's in his 40s - she doesn't need an authority figure, and he realizes this as well.
Anyway, they hang out...they truly enjoy each others' company. They drink, smoke a little weed, talk about their lives, their past. The dad reveals more about himself, yadda yadda.
One night, the daughter brings a few friends over (males and females...doesn't have to be an all-girl party), and they all drink and smoke a few bowls. Eventually, one of the girls hits on the dad, but he lets it go and doesn't make any moves because of his daughter. At some point, he has a chat with his daughter in the kitchen or something, and she tells him to go for it.
He goes back and seals the deal with the friend, taking her up to his room.
The next day, the daughter ribs him a bit, asks him what went on, etc. Like buddies tend to do. The story could end with her cracking a joke about getting more chicks for him to knock out of the ballpark.
I think there's room tehre for drama, if necessary, but also doesn't have to be thick and sappy. It doesn't seem like you want a lot of tension between father/daughter, but of course, there's room for it.
Anyway, they hang out...they truly enjoy each others' company. They drink, smoke a little weed, talk about their lives, their past. The dad reveals more about himself, yadda yadda.
One night, the daughter brings a few friends over (males and females...doesn't have to be an all-girl party), and they all drink and smoke a few bowls. Eventually, one of the girls hits on the dad, but he lets it go and doesn't make any moves because of his daughter. At some point, he has a chat with his daughter in the kitchen or something, and she tells him to go for it.
He goes back and seals the deal with the friend, taking her up to his room.
The next day, the daughter ribs him a bit, asks him what went on, etc. Like buddies tend to do. The story could end with her cracking a joke about getting more chicks for him to knock out of the ballpark.
I think there's room tehre for drama, if necessary, but also doesn't have to be thick and sappy. It doesn't seem like you want a lot of tension between father/daughter, but of course, there's room for it.
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DarkBee said:
Yup. That was the intention. Plus, everybody drinks, and smoking isn't a big deal...marijuana, however, is taboo, as illustrated by how snooper hopped on the minor mention of it. The only reason for bringing up weed is that it's a little common secret that the father and daughter can share...an icebreaker for more and more things. Maybe I'm too focused on reality, but who the fuck is gonna sit back and tell their daughter they wanna fuck some some of her friends just like that? You gotta build up a confidence, a story, some character development, or else why even bother with a story? Just write about two people fucking, and at the end go, "And the chick he fucked was his daughter's friend, the end."
I don't see pot-smoking as a distraction...it's a plot device, and a thematic element. The father and the daughter are going beyond the authoritarian/subordinate relationship, and they share something that's secret. If the father smoked pot, he was doing it complete secret for the 20-odd years of the daughter's life, and if the daughter smoked pot, she was doing it while trying to hide it from her parents. They come to junction, and boom, they both share something with each other that shatters their previous perception of each other. Get it?
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I tried this angle in Reluctant Desire. A caring, college-age daughter sees that her father is in pain after the recent passing of his wife, her mother. She has made a post-mortem promise to help get him through the grieving process by finding him someone, an equally lost (and much younger) woman.
But as it turns out, it only inspires the daughter to have her first sexual experience with her father.
I have received feedback that it was very sensitive and well written, and have been prompted to continue the series, and I'm working on Ch. 4 as we speak. But if you're interested and don't mind incest, you might care to see how I've portrayed it.
I tried this angle in Reluctant Desire. A caring, college-age daughter sees that her father is in pain after the recent passing of his wife, her mother. She has made a post-mortem promise to help get him through the grieving process by finding him someone, an equally lost (and much younger) woman.
But as it turns out, it only inspires the daughter to have her first sexual experience with her father.
I have received feedback that it was very sensitive and well written, and have been prompted to continue the series, and I'm working on Ch. 4 as we speak. But if you're interested and don't mind incest, you might care to see how I've portrayed it.
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