Delicious Derrieres

The passage of time doesn't presage,
As he has other entries in mind;
He'd send her a nice, frothy message:
One that she'll remember. He'll find
She has places inside that intrigue him,
That. in a mad mood, he might hurt:
But, if she's prepared to believe him,
The hurt is a prelude: the spurt,
Of his passion's his main motivator,
He will not let her wade in a swamp;
Her wetness inside ought to make her
Prepared for his thrust. In her damp
And alluvial derriere chamber,
His hardness needs to re-arrange her.

Méli
 
The passage of time doesn't presage,
As he has other entries in mind;
He'd send her a nice, frothy message:
One that she'll remember. He'll find
She has places inside that intrigue him,
That. in a mad mood, he might hurt:
But, if she's prepared to believe him,
The hurt is a prelude: the spurt,
Of his passion's his main motivator,
He will not let her wade in a swamp;
Her wetness inside ought to make her
Prepared for his thrust. In her damp
And alluvial derriere chamber,
His hardness needs to re-arrange her.

Méli
Very nice Meli :). You're a talented poet.
 
Should be possessive case. The “delight of the Good girl.”

Otherwise a very nice poem.
I agree, much more eloquent with your suggestion. I do strive for better writing but sometimes when throwing words together, while aroused, pen just goes to paper lol

And thank you
 
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