Dimensional Gate

[LadiDarkMoon]

Goodness, I didn't realize it could fill so quickly....that's what I get for trying to talk to everyone via PM. I'll have to be more careful to empty it more often.

And Thanks you for reading my rough draft. I really appreciate it.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

Self-promotions are kind of odious, but I've been writing stuff where people are transported to different places in their mind during sex.

"In Pharaoh's Boat" is the story of a woman's seduction in a museum in which she's transported back into the middle of an ancient Egyptian religious ritual. Click on the "Cabinet" link below and you'll get there.

The problem with your idea is that it's not really a story idea, it's a device in a story. But the real story would be what happens when she gets there, and you give no suggestions about that.

---dr.M.

 

[Jenny _S]

Self-promotions are kind of odious, but I've been writing stuff where people are transported to different places in their mind during sex.

"In Pharaoh's Boat" is the story of a woman's seduction in a museum in which she's transported back into the middle of an ancient Egyptian religious ritual. Click on the "Cabinet" link below and you'll get there.

The problem with your idea is that it's not really a story idea, it's a device in a story. But the real story would be what happens when she gets there, and you give no suggestions about that.

---dr.M.

Dr. M is right. The middle is all there, but now comes the beginning and end.

(And by the way, "Pharaoh's Boat" is a great story.)