Dominate Black Female, white male

[Chicklet]

Re: Polar Opposite

I wrote a story in the genre that I mentioned earlier. It could stand a rewrite or two, but I posted it anyway just to get some feedback.

My first story took three weeks to get started, I was so scared of writing anything all the way through! Finally I just sat down and wrote a sex scene to get my gears going. Now <smile> I've got 51 submissions, and they're not all too terrible = )

WTG, and remember you can always re-submit it after you edit it again.

Chicklet

 

[Cuckolded_BlK_Male]

Sorry to make you "sigh" at me, but we knew this how?

I correctly deduced that her yahoo and Literotica screen names must have been one and the same. I'm assuming, of course, that the original reference to said yahoo profile was directed at me.

The picture was nice enough. There was certainly nothing about the largish brown booty depicted therein that would have offended my esthetic sensibilities. I do think that I noticed a small ingrown wild-hair nestled deeply between those dusky hemispheres. Finally, contrary to what I'd been led to believe, I was neither moved to stand nor compelled to kneel. Albeit, given that I'm not representative of that profile's targeted demographic group, some of it's more esoteric subtleties may have escaped me.

 

[Cuckolded_BlK_Male]

Re: Re: Polar Opposite

... WTG, and remember you can always re-submit it after you edit it again.

Chicklet

Thank you for the encouragement. Thank you again for pointing out that submissions can be edited and resubmitted. (I've already received some feedback which indicated that my story is in need of an editor.)

I have been taken to task no less than three times in the last 24 hours for dressing a character in a Prada skirt. Apparently, business women don't wear Prada skirts to work ... as if I even know what a Prada skirt looks like. I just went to Vogue.com and took the first name that I saw ... lol