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OOC: ok you had me worried,,,, CATS im waitin. soryan is growin old
lol j/k
OOC: ok you had me worried,,,, CATS im waitin. soryan is growin old
lol j/kDragonBall NW: Fate's End
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IC: Ray: So this guy brought us here. "Well thats not much to go off of. Do you have any other details of him? What race is he? Why is he so strong? Why is he killing" 'Well we think he came from earth. If you need answers I sujest you try their, maybe he missed some one and you can find out the reasons for him.' Earth, could he be a part sayain like these others?
IC: Ray: So this guy brought us here. "Well thats not much to go off of. Do you have any other details of him? What race is he? Why is he so strong? Why is he killing" 'Well we think he came from earth. If you need answers I sujest you try their, maybe he missed some one and you can find out the reasons for him.' Earth, could he be a part sayain like these others?
{after a month of serching for zeo soran is about to give up hope when he feels zeos energy its very far away but there }ive found quick stay on position we must make haste lets see where is this thats it it must be namic i heared from zeo ok ive got a while so im gonna train unmercifully i fear zeo is in trouble{and why is my but itching so much }
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"The forests burn and the oceans boil. Within twenty four hours the Earth shall be cleaned of all taint and we shall seed it anew for the new human race. Only this petty rabble remains, and soon enough she shall fall."
Within the cordoned off area of the jetisoned chunk of space ship, the four androids continued their assault. Their general strategy was to keep Jewelz off form with fast attacks and dirty tricks. They weren't doing much damage, rather, they presented major threats that consumed her attention, even as the Blue Armada's main battle ship section continued to fire upon it. Now the armored hull was beginning to give way to the cold emptiness of space, where the androids could operate, but where most living organisms could not...
Within the cordoned off area of the jetisoned chunk of space ship, the four androids continued their assault. Their general strategy was to keep Jewelz off form with fast attacks and dirty tricks. They weren't doing much damage, rather, they presented major threats that consumed her attention, even as the Blue Armada's main battle ship section continued to fire upon it. Now the armored hull was beginning to give way to the cold emptiness of space, where the androids could operate, but where most living organisms could not...
now training at the highest intensity of fighting a fighter can withstand he sets the gravity to 500 times earths and has the computer close 10 soldiers to have the same power level as he does so he can get the optimum fight out of it but now also learning that every near fatal injury raises his power level unbelievable he sets this as his final training before landing on namic
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Jewelz in "Opening Negotiations"
Well as I surmized earlier, the guards were hostile quickly a brawl broke out in the corridor. Utilizing my superior speed as well as intelligence I grabbed one of the guards before he could react and used him as a human shield while I was get shot at by the 15 other soldiers in the cramped hall. When his usefulness was done, I used his lifeless body as a battering ram 5 other guards were bowled over and left unprotected for a minor Ki blast. But the rest of the guards were alot more skilled than even I could have anticipated.
However just as things were about to get ugly the video screen in the corridor flickered on and the Empress of the Humans stood in front of me. I knew with the sercurity here it would way too dangerous for me to barge into the bridge and risk damage to ship and killing us all, so instead I played nice.
As she went into a speech about clensing Earth, I almost absentminded played with a strand of my hair. ( I tend to do that when I am think plus it makes my enemies assume they are smarter than me the red head with blondish highlights) Once the Empress was done speaking and ranting about purifying Earth I coughed and said " Uh Empress there is one problem right now there are no Saiyans on Earth currently they are fighting on the planet Namic, so congradulation on killing humanity. Now to discuss what I came here for."
Before I could finish my sentence things began to fly backwards into space. Looking behind me I summarized that she must have hit the jettison button. Ok now I was beginning to get slightly irritated.
Dodging the blast of the android soldiers while at the same time strapping on my mask that allows me to breathe oxygen in space I zoomed through the hall headed toward the bridge the only thing stopping me was the giant door and the androids firing at me. Pushing my speed up to top form, my body glowed with energy and right before ramming into the androids I pushed the buttton on my wrist and by instant transmission I appeared right in front of the Empress with every soldier on the bridge pointing a gun at me the instant I materialized.
Deciding to make this short and sweet, I said " Like I was saying before the majority of the Siayans are on Namic and Earth is your for the taking the problem is there is a menace that we Saiyans are fighting that is far more powerful than you could even begin to comprehend. Imagine the power of a Saiyan army wrapped in one killing package. So far 2 whole planets have been eradicated since his coming of age and more is at stake soon too. If you think that this menace will be contempt with just the removal of the Siayan race you are dead wrong. I know for a fact that he headed here to Earth and possibly soon your own lil planet after that. Now I came here to see if an alliance can be formed. As we speak this conversation is being monitored by more Saiyans that will attempt to destroy your armada if I am eliminated. In the past you have worked with my father Ski and I prepose the same deal you help us and we help you. Trust me when I say this but if I can get in here past your guards what makes you think you can stop him."
Well as I surmized earlier, the guards were hostile quickly a brawl broke out in the corridor. Utilizing my superior speed as well as intelligence I grabbed one of the guards before he could react and used him as a human shield while I was get shot at by the 15 other soldiers in the cramped hall. When his usefulness was done, I used his lifeless body as a battering ram 5 other guards were bowled over and left unprotected for a minor Ki blast. But the rest of the guards were alot more skilled than even I could have anticipated.
However just as things were about to get ugly the video screen in the corridor flickered on and the Empress of the Humans stood in front of me. I knew with the sercurity here it would way too dangerous for me to barge into the bridge and risk damage to ship and killing us all, so instead I played nice.
As she went into a speech about clensing Earth, I almost absentminded played with a strand of my hair. ( I tend to do that when I am think plus it makes my enemies assume they are smarter than me the red head with blondish highlights) Once the Empress was done speaking and ranting about purifying Earth I coughed and said " Uh Empress there is one problem right now there are no Saiyans on Earth currently they are fighting on the planet Namic, so congradulation on killing humanity. Now to discuss what I came here for."
Before I could finish my sentence things began to fly backwards into space. Looking behind me I summarized that she must have hit the jettison button. Ok now I was beginning to get slightly irritated.
Dodging the blast of the android soldiers while at the same time strapping on my mask that allows me to breathe oxygen in space I zoomed through the hall headed toward the bridge the only thing stopping me was the giant door and the androids firing at me. Pushing my speed up to top form, my body glowed with energy and right before ramming into the androids I pushed the buttton on my wrist and by instant transmission I appeared right in front of the Empress with every soldier on the bridge pointing a gun at me the instant I materialized.
Deciding to make this short and sweet, I said " Like I was saying before the majority of the Siayans are on Namic and Earth is your for the taking the problem is there is a menace that we Saiyans are fighting that is far more powerful than you could even begin to comprehend. Imagine the power of a Saiyan army wrapped in one killing package. So far 2 whole planets have been eradicated since his coming of age and more is at stake soon too. If you think that this menace will be contempt with just the removal of the Siayan race you are dead wrong. I know for a fact that he headed here to Earth and possibly soon your own lil planet after that. Now I came here to see if an alliance can be formed. As we speak this conversation is being monitored by more Saiyans that will attempt to destroy your armada if I am eliminated. In the past you have worked with my father Ski and I prepose the same deal you help us and we help you. Trust me when I say this but if I can get in here past your guards what makes you think you can stop him."
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(OOC: Does anybody ever actually comprehend what I post? I feel like you all read it, nod, and then make shit up.)
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OCC: That is because you set the situation up to wear there is no way to work with you or to work on a compromise. Hence I had to improve just to keep my character alive in the thread after all you tried to jettison her into space.
If you have a better approach to situations where you write someone into a corner like you did me just drop me a PM with an out or way to work with you.
If you have a better approach to situations where you write someone into a corner like you did me just drop me a PM with an out or way to work with you.
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Keep in mind Pheonix originally boared voilets comand ship and you placed him in a random subordanits ship.
Yea I would agree with Pheinix here but really this isn't my place to speak. So tkae my opion for what it's worth and nothing mroe.
Note Fate has destroyed two planets he's killed all sentient life on atleast a dozen now.
IDreamofBunnies said:
Keep in mind Pheonix originally boared voilets comand ship and you placed him in a random subordanits ship.
Yea I would agree with Pheinix here but really this isn't my place to speak. So tkae my opion for what it's worth and nothing mroe.
Note Fate has destroyed two planets he's killed all sentient life on atleast a dozen now.
{training at near suicidal levels of intenesity soran pushes his mind and body to the breaking limit to acheive what zeo and become a super sayajin 4}yes i understand the itching zeo{as he looks down now at his own tail }but i have a feeling that a super sayajin 4 wont be enough to beat this guy there has to be an ultimate level to reach there has to be but first i need to sleep}bridge this is soran how much longer till we reach namik}one week sir{good one more week of thius and ill be as strong as zeo}plus i cant wait to use my new technique i mastered {laughing a little as he falls aslep and dreams of a beautiful woman talking to what looks like a cyborg or compurter the woman is to beautiful and perfcet to be human at all but the other one very lovely{as he drifts off to sleep}
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OOC: correct me if im wrong, but it would take more than a computer generated training routine and a few months to get to super sayian 4, im still only SS3, tho my chara runs on emotions. If im wrong then forget what i said but i think the plot would work better with us all severly out powered by fate.
OOC: correct me if im wrong, but it would take more than a computer generated training routine and a few months to get to super sayian 4, im still only SS3, tho my chara runs on emotions
. If im wrong then forget what i said but i think the plot would work better with us all severly out powered by fate.
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Silver it's your turn to psot on Namic.
I agree in full with Silver Hit. Super Sayain four is something that would require much more effort then such a simple training exercise could bring. In dragon ball GT Gokou is the only one to rach super sayain 4, Vegetea dose as well but he dosen't do it from any amount of training. He dose it because Bulma made a machine that pushed Vegeta to that level. On top of that only two charas reach the third level that I know about, Gokou and Gotenks. Vegeta pretty much skips that level because it's so difrent from for you really don't even need to reach it.
As for reaching the fifth level know that it exists but no one will reach it besides Fate. It's supose to be what makes him unique as a villain.
Silver it's your turn to psot on Namic.
I agree in full with Silver Hit. Super Sayain four is something that would require much more effort then such a simple training exercise could bring. In dragon ball GT Gokou is the only one to rach super sayain 4, Vegetea dose as well but he dosen't do it from any amount of training. He dose it because Bulma made a machine that pushed Vegeta to that level. On top of that only two charas reach the third level that I know about, Gokou and Gotenks. Vegeta pretty much skips that level because it's so difrent from for you really don't even need to reach it.
As for reaching the fifth level know that it exists but no one will reach it besides Fate. It's supose to be what makes him unique as a villain.
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Gokou beat Majin boo who was stronger. Gohan beat Cell who was stronger. Vegeta was stronger and ended up at the Mercy of krillain, Raditz was devistated by two fighter well below him.
Power isn't every thing. What about fusion. What about psycologicly beating him, what about tatics? All the power in the world does him no good if he can't hit some one. Isn't it possible to wear him down?
No matter how strong he is he is mortal. he will also be out numbered more Ray, Soryan, five children of violet, Nilons, Zeo, Your character. Don't tell me that doesn't make a difrence. Yes he has an advantage in power and probably can keep pace with every single character but can he block an attack from ten difrent directions? Bruce Lee could be muged by ten people like you and me despite his movies.
Gokou beat Majin boo who was stronger. Gohan beat Cell who was stronger. Vegeta was stronger and ended up at the Mercy of krillain, Raditz was devistated by two fighter well below him.
Power isn't every thing. What about fusion. What about psycologicly beating him, what about tatics? All the power in the world does him no good if he can't hit some one. Isn't it possible to wear him down?
No matter how strong he is he is mortal. he will also be out numbered more Ray, Soryan, five children of violet, Nilons, Zeo, Your character. Don't tell me that doesn't make a difrence. Yes he has an advantage in power and probably can keep pace with every single character but can he block an attack from ten difrent directions? Bruce Lee could be muged by ten people like you and me despite his movies.
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ic: I turned to ray, " since its earth i can instant trasmit us there but it would be the mountain i landed at out in the middle of nowwhere.. " Ray nodded, as did nilions, I took bothg trhere hands and concentrated on that spot, as soon as i closed my eyes we were there. I opened them to look upon a desolate place. nothing there at all. " what happened it was so green once." i asked lookinmg about.
ooc: if this cats ill change it.
ooc: if this cats ill change it.
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OOC: Command ship? I read "Captain's Ship" and there are quite a few captains. You can leave nothing to assumption, either write it or deal with the consequences. Furthermore, it is not as if I left no option whatsoever, your character teleported to begin with and it seemed as if outer space was not an obstacle, why should it be now? And then there is matter of the guards, I posted four competant androids. Suddenly there are over a dozen retards...
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The while leave nothing to assumption principal is a pretty dumbass reason. Think of it like this what if I took control of fact because you just hurled Jewelz( my character )into space with no way to survive. Then while controling Fate I flew through space and annihilated your entire fleet inless than two lines. How would you enjoy that set of circumstances. Its not fair huh.
As for the guards you left how about you reread this again:
See what you said about us not paying attention to your posts. Maybe you should do the same. Look as a writer I like your style but you know you are dead wrong about this one.
As for the guards you left how about you reread this again:
Phoenix said:
See what you said about us not paying attention to your posts. Maybe you should do the same. Look as a writer I like your style but you know you are dead wrong about this one.
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Damn. Their is jsut to much tention going on here. I'm not sure why we are even bothering at this point. It's odvious the story isn't important at this point. I wish I had noticed that earlier. No one is haveing fun and no one can have fun we are all to stuborn to work togeather this is a team sport and I think it's time I retire.
IC: Ray: "This is your damn fault!" 'How am I to blame?' "You did nothing to help me then you did nothing to help this place now." I powered up to my maxium power. 'I thought we called a truce.' "Yeah backing down from a fight again!" She began to gather her power to her. "I'm ending this now!" I moved my hands back into a move she developed. "Furry." 'Furry' her voice echoed mine.' "Beam" her voice moved in sync with mine as if on some level we were the same person. With a flash I fell to the floor a hole in my gut and across the way my motehr lay there a hole in her own. I smiled knowing that in the end she was jsut as strong as I hoped. She was infact my mother.
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Damn. Their is jsut to much tention going on here. I'm not sure why we are even bothering at this point. It's odvious the story isn't important at this point. I wish I had noticed that earlier. No one is haveing fun and no one can have fun we are all to stuborn to work togeather this is a team sport and I think it's time I retire.
IC: Ray: "This is your damn fault!" 'How am I to blame?' "You did nothing to help me then you did nothing to help this place now." I powered up to my maxium power. 'I thought we called a truce.' "Yeah backing down from a fight again!" She began to gather her power to her. "I'm ending this now!" I moved my hands back into a move she developed. "Furry." 'Furry' her voice echoed mine.' "Beam" her voice moved in sync with mine as if on some level we were the same person. With a flash I fell to the floor a hole in my gut and across the way my motehr lay there a hole in her own. I smiled knowing that in the end she was jsut as strong as I hoped. She was infact my mother.
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How am I supposed to spot anything that coherent when the standard theme is random fucking babble? Anyway have fun, let's just invalidate the whole lot of it because when I rationed out my precious fucking time I didn't plan to spend it on this idiocy. It's a wonder that Young Gods is dead and this crapfest rolls along. Why oh why do I ever even try to do anything in a DBZ RP? That's a rhetorical question by the way.
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OOC:Because that dear boy Cats asked so nicely I'm going to write myself out of this, enjoy!
"There! The last of the balefires die and the Earth is cleansed at long last. Now we shall seed the Earth anew. We shall know peace and glory in another time/space, in another side/universe. For we are there/here, now/then!"
At that moment a strange glow emanated from the Empresses' Personal Flagship. It was like a radiant rainbow, it was so beautiful that Timothy Leary could not hope to concieve of it on his most vibrant trips. The glow spread through the sphereical formation of the Purple Heart combined fleets. Then there was the crackle of thunder, in outer space where no sound could be there was the boom of thunder. Bolts of lightning: green, red, purple, white....they webbed between the ships and spread to the charred earth.
Jewelz could see it all through a porthole in the partition she had been trapped in. And she could see even more. All around her the ships of the Blue Armada were fading out, they appeared almost ghostlike. And beyond that more and more ships faded into nonexistence. Even the dry and dying Earth seemed to be slowly winking out of existence.
Then she could feel the presence of others in her little compartment, people seemed to be flying through the walls, little more than shades themselves, and more ghosts could be seen out of the windows. They all had serene expressions and their arms were crossed over their chests. The only exception was Xuxa herself, she had come from a considerable distance holding the hands of her eldest son and daughter who in turn held their siblings hands. The shade family had their eyes open and seemed to shepard the others along with them.
The youngest one, Atlantis, seemed a little sad but the others faces were aglow with the glorious light of salvation. Xuxa looked her usual arrogant self and her eyes actually fell directly upon Jewelz. She tried to speak, to tell Jewelz of her great and final victory but she was too far gone and the words were the whisper of a shade of a whisper. The Violet family was soon out of sight and after a few minutes the Earth and all her peoples were gone.
The ships that had faded out snapped back into reality, wherever their creators had vanished to, they were not needed. Jewelz could easily make her way to any of the other ships. The vast armadas, arsenals, and knowledge of the Purple Heart was at her disposal, if she knew what to do with it. There was also a veritable army of androids and robots although they all seemed intent on being non combatant. The very same androids she had fought began to repair the section of the ship that had been ejected, leaving her to do as she pleased.
"There! The last of the balefires die and the Earth is cleansed at long last. Now we shall seed the Earth anew. We shall know peace and glory in another time/space, in another side/universe. For we are there/here, now/then!"
At that moment a strange glow emanated from the Empresses' Personal Flagship. It was like a radiant rainbow, it was so beautiful that Timothy Leary could not hope to concieve of it on his most vibrant trips. The glow spread through the sphereical formation of the Purple Heart combined fleets. Then there was the crackle of thunder, in outer space where no sound could be there was the boom of thunder. Bolts of lightning: green, red, purple, white....they webbed between the ships and spread to the charred earth.
Jewelz could see it all through a porthole in the partition she had been trapped in. And she could see even more. All around her the ships of the Blue Armada were fading out, they appeared almost ghostlike. And beyond that more and more ships faded into nonexistence. Even the dry and dying Earth seemed to be slowly winking out of existence.
Then she could feel the presence of others in her little compartment, people seemed to be flying through the walls, little more than shades themselves, and more ghosts could be seen out of the windows. They all had serene expressions and their arms were crossed over their chests. The only exception was Xuxa herself, she had come from a considerable distance holding the hands of her eldest son and daughter who in turn held their siblings hands. The shade family had their eyes open and seemed to shepard the others along with them.
The youngest one, Atlantis, seemed a little sad but the others faces were aglow with the glorious light of salvation. Xuxa looked her usual arrogant self and her eyes actually fell directly upon Jewelz. She tried to speak, to tell Jewelz of her great and final victory but she was too far gone and the words were the whisper of a shade of a whisper. The Violet family was soon out of sight and after a few minutes the Earth and all her peoples were gone.
The ships that had faded out snapped back into reality, wherever their creators had vanished to, they were not needed. Jewelz could easily make her way to any of the other ships. The vast armadas, arsenals, and knowledge of the Purple Heart was at her disposal, if she knew what to do with it. There was also a veritable army of androids and robots although they all seemed intent on being non combatant. The very same androids she had fought began to repair the section of the ship that had been ejected, leaving her to do as she pleased.
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OOC: CRys, Man and i liked it when me and ray worked together, and when we had good working actions going on. I messed up once and healed myself quite unusually but i also healed the other person with me, which made it still quite an equal battle. but the fights me and bunnies have had have been sensational, aswell as ray and others. i am very heartbroken to see 2 of my favorite people to rp leave and i am very close to doing aso myself seeing as how,,,,,, MY CHARECTER IS OBVIOUSLY GONNA JUMP IN THE WAY AGAIN..... SO maybe someday i will start a DBZ thread that wont consist of the same problems, then again maybe not, so here is the death of my charecter.
IC: I felt Ray and nilons both powering up to ther full lvl. "NO, YOU FUCKING PROMISED ME" I Yelled, I powered up to SS3 and started to smolder red with the betrayal i felt, I say the beams release and jumped in the way again. This time however i was not so lucky, ...Nilons beam ripped through the left side of my stomach and into ray and rays ripped through my right side and into nilons, The force flung my two halves in different direction. I opened my eyes after the blast to look streight into rays eyes. She was almost dead right then and so was I. I managed one last message.... "You know ray,,(weaze), I really liked you. Why couldnt we have just gone somewhere." rays eyes seemd to shrug at me as life was seeping out of us. "ah well atleast i die for someone i care for. " A tear formed in my eye and fell down my cheek. I reached my hand out and touched rays cheek as my vision clouded black and i felt no more.
OOC: CRys, Man and i liked it when me and ray worked together, and when we had good working actions going on. I messed up once and healed myself quite unusually but i also healed the other person with me, which made it still quite an equal battle. but the fights me and bunnies have had have been sensational, aswell as ray and others. i am very heartbroken to see 2 of my favorite people to rp leave and i am very close to doing aso myself seeing as how,,,,,, MY CHARECTER IS OBVIOUSLY GONNA JUMP IN THE WAY AGAIN..... SO maybe someday i will start a DBZ thread that wont consist of the same problems, then again maybe not, so here is the death of my charecter.
IC: I felt Ray and nilons both powering up to ther full lvl. "NO, YOU FUCKING PROMISED ME" I Yelled, I powered up to SS3 and started to smolder red with the betrayal i felt, I say the beams release and jumped in the way again. This time however i was not so lucky, ...Nilons beam ripped through the left side of my stomach and into ray and rays ripped through my right side and into nilons, The force flung my two halves in different direction. I opened my eyes after the blast to look streight into rays eyes. She was almost dead right then and so was I. I managed one last message.... "You know ray,,(weaze), I really liked you. Why couldnt we have just gone somewhere." rays eyes seemd to shrug at me as life was seeping out of us. "ah well atleast i die for someone i care for. " A tear formed in my eye and fell down my cheek. I reached my hand out and touched rays cheek as my vision clouded black and i felt no more.
