Editing at the Fox website

IG_88

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Really gone downhill.

http://www.foxnews.com/sports/2018/...ideo-her-scolded-for-cheering-goes-viral.html

Headline forgot the "of."

Young Houston Astros fan invited to playoff game after video her scolded for cheering goes viral

Body of story:

A young Houston Astros fan who was scolded for cheering to loudly during a game has received the support of players over social media and tickets for the team’s first playoff game after a video of the incident went viral.

Here they have two separate paragraphs for what should obviously be a continuous sentence.

Chloe Beaver, 8, was cheering her team from the stands at Minute Maid Park on Sunday during a game against the Los Angeles Angels.

At some point when a woman sitting in front of her turned, and with a stern voice, said “Enough
.”

Beaver’s mood quickly went from happy to quiet and visibly distraught.

"It made me feel like I did something wrong," Beaver told the Fox 26 Houston. “I’m a huge fan. A really big fan.”

I get some channels call themselves "the" all sorts of things but that isn't how they wrote it.


Ruined a nice story for me. How will I get thru the day?
 
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