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F!rstRåte
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: : TO ALL THAT VIEW, AND DON'T COMMENT : :
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LIKE ALL THESE PEOPLE THAT HAVE AND CONTINUE TO POST ON THIS SITE, I HAVE SPENT ALOT OF TIME & EFFORT IN TAKING THESE PICTURES!...
I WOULD APPRECIATE SOME KIND OF RESPONSE FROM 'THE SHADOWS' THAT DRIFT IN, CHECK OUT THE NEW EDITIONS! THEN LEAVE.
SURLY THIS ISN'T TOO MUCH TO ASK? IF SO THEN PLEASE DO NOT WASTE YOUR TIME IN VISITING AGAIN...
F!rstRåte
____________________________________
: : TO ALL THAT VIEW, AND DON'T COMMENT : :
____________________________________
LIKE ALL THESE PEOPLE THAT HAVE AND CONTINUE TO POST ON THIS SITE, I HAVE SPENT ALOT OF TIME & EFFORT IN TAKING THESE PICTURES!...
I WOULD APPRECIATE SOME KIND OF RESPONSE FROM 'THE SHADOWS' THAT DRIFT IN, CHECK OUT THE NEW EDITIONS! THEN LEAVE.
SURLY THIS ISN'T TOO MUCH TO ASK? IF SO THEN PLEASE DO NOT WASTE YOUR TIME IN VISITING AGAIN...
F!rstRåte
LadyBlueMoon
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While I always enjoy your posts, I thought #30 was a most erotic shot.... a keeper 
texasgemini2002
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such a dreamy photo...what are you thinking about???
TexasGemini
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Re: LadyBlueMoon
you can hold your breath...I'll have you breathing heavy in no time...
FirstRate, your pictures are truly the most beautiful and sexy that I have seen on here. I love the shadows that cast over your body and the wrinckled sheets underneath you...
Please don't stop your posting...we are out here and we appreciate your beautiful body...like a work of art
Ladies, am I right...help me convince FirstRate not to go anywhere, but to stay right here with us
TexasGemini
F!rstRåte said:
you can hold your breath...I'll have you breathing heavy in no time...
FirstRate, your pictures are truly the most beautiful and sexy that I have seen on here. I love the shadows that cast over your body and the wrinckled sheets underneath you...
Please don't stop your posting...we are out here and we appreciate your beautiful body...like a work of art
Ladies, am I right...help me convince FirstRate not to go anywhere, but to stay right here with us
TexasGemini
F!rstRåte
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TexasGemini
*smiles* thank you for such a lovly reply!! truly means alot, as I was having serious doubts wether to carry on with this thread seeing as no one bothers to post anything...
You have truly made my day, but the real test is who else shall follow your example hmmmm not many I'm sure
*kisses*
F!rstRåte
texasgemini2002 said:you can hold your breath...I'll have you breathing heavy in no time...
FirstRate, your pictures are truly the most beautiful and sexy that I have seen on here. I love the shadows that cast over your body and the wrinckled sheets underneath you...
Please don't stop your posting...we are out here and we appreciate your beautiful body...like a work of art
Ladies, am I right...help me convince FirstRate not to go anywhere, but to stay right here with us
TexasGemini
*smiles* thank you for such a lovly reply!! truly means alot, as I was having serious doubts wether to carry on with this thread seeing as no one bothers to post anything...
You have truly made my day, but the real test is who else shall follow your example hmmmm not many I'm sure
*kisses*
F!rstRåte
hey baby doll...
man, I have stayed away tooo long!
Ok, my new fav is 17, although 32 is very nice too, I am a huge fan of backs.
but it seems like you are in search of some feedback, on more than a "damn, your sexy" level..
so, in my very limited experience, I have found that the trick to getting responses from pornographic pictures is to try to convey what you like sexually in the pictures. The pictures of your body are bueatiful, but they don't tell us much about you..what you like, what you think is sexy...
It is part of why I like picture 17...you are grasping your ass like you LOVE it sqeezed. It is conveying a certain level of lust and desire, which requires a response from the viewer.
Another tip is to show us your eyes. Even without the context of the rest of your face (in a close up, or the rest of your face strategically hidden behind an arm, pillow, whatever...). And really LOOK into the camera. Give us a sense of who you are..and what you would do to us (or let us do to you) if given a chance. It places you in the room with the viewer and the viewer in the room with you. Then your pictures evolve from "pictures of a subject matter" to "pictures of a person", which are infinitaly more interesting...well, to me anyways..
ANYHOW, so so so nice all in all. You definilty have a bueatifull body. Although Im not sure I would interpret the fliter as dreamy. I would call it grainy...and it seems to work well because all of the textiles in the pics are grainy (the sheets, tee shirt, demin) and makes the contrast of your smooth skin soooo appealing. Making you seem down right lickable...portraying texture in pictures makes people want to touch...to connect the sense of touch and sight.
Ok, well, with that said, can I make a request??
How about the lenght of your neck...including your collar bone, shoulder...and your long, stong jaw bone. From what I have seen it just BEGS to be nibbled (and down right bitten if you let me!!) Would love to see exactally where I can place my mouth in neck worship!
man, I have stayed away tooo long!
Ok, my new fav is 17, although 32 is very nice too, I am a huge fan of backs.
but it seems like you are in search of some feedback, on more than a "damn, your sexy" level..
so, in my very limited experience, I have found that the trick to getting responses from pornographic pictures is to try to convey what you like sexually in the pictures. The pictures of your body are bueatiful, but they don't tell us much about you..what you like, what you think is sexy...
It is part of why I like picture 17...you are grasping your ass like you LOVE it sqeezed. It is conveying a certain level of lust and desire, which requires a response from the viewer.
Another tip is to show us your eyes. Even without the context of the rest of your face (in a close up, or the rest of your face strategically hidden behind an arm, pillow, whatever...). And really LOOK into the camera. Give us a sense of who you are..and what you would do to us (or let us do to you) if given a chance. It places you in the room with the viewer and the viewer in the room with you. Then your pictures evolve from "pictures of a subject matter" to "pictures of a person", which are infinitaly more interesting...well, to me anyways..
ANYHOW, so so so nice all in all. You definilty have a bueatifull body. Although Im not sure I would interpret the fliter as dreamy. I would call it grainy...and it seems to work well because all of the textiles in the pics are grainy (the sheets, tee shirt, demin) and makes the contrast of your smooth skin soooo appealing. Making you seem down right lickable...portraying texture in pictures makes people want to touch...to connect the sense of touch and sight.
Ok, well, with that said, can I make a request??
How about the lenght of your neck...including your collar bone, shoulder...and your long, stong jaw bone. From what I have seen it just BEGS to be nibbled (and down right bitten if you let me!!) Would love to see exactally where I can place my mouth in neck worship!
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just pet
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Sweet man, although on Lit most infrequently these days, you know I lurk in your vicinity.
Your body is most delicious, and I know those eyes hypnotic.
Please continue to post, my friend, even if there are few posts in feedback. There are many of us who lurk and leer, and dream...
Your body is most delicious, and I know those eyes hypnotic.
Please continue to post, my friend, even if there are few posts in feedback. There are many of us who lurk and leer, and dream...
F!rstRåte
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Esha & justpet
Thank you Ladies, this is what I want to hear, ways in which I can better myself!
Esha your points were very valid and very thought provoking, I shall take the pics for you over the weekend coming.
The light is bad by the time I get home fro mwork and the pics don't come out.
justpet, yeah I know the people who lurk in the shadows, but I prefer them not to! seems pointless to me...
F!rstRåte x
P.S. I hope these pics shall do you Esha & justpet...
Thank you Ladies, this is what I want to hear, ways in which I can better myself!
Esha your points were very valid and very thought provoking, I shall take the pics for you over the weekend coming.
The light is bad by the time I get home fro mwork and the pics don't come out.
justpet, yeah I know the people who lurk in the shadows, but I prefer them not to! seems pointless to me...
F!rstRåte x
P.S. I hope these pics shall do you Esha & justpet...
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Love the new pics, honey! Sorry if I have been neglecting you..
Sorry if I have been neglecting you..
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Well, its going...lol Only time will tell, at this point.
F!rstRåte said:
Well, its going...lol Only time will tell, at this point.
Oh, I like the new pics.
Very intimate...your hand touching your skin...gives us a context to go by.
I wonder if you just have a naturally talented eye for light or if you are a pro??
The reflective light in both pics is your groin...intentional or just your sense of ascetic?
Either way, divine.
Those pics look warm and gentle. And strangely close.
Don’t stop posting..Your pictures aren’t just smut, they are erotica, sexual art in its highest...would be an injustice to stop posting.
and I CAN'T WAIT to see that lovley neck of yours....
BTW, very nice hands...i love sucking on fingers..fingers filling my mouth while the rest of me is filled with other things...
<naughty grin>
Very intimate...your hand touching your skin...gives us a context to go by.
I wonder if you just have a naturally talented eye for light or if you are a pro??
The reflective light in both pics is your groin...intentional or just your sense of ascetic?
Either way, divine.
Those pics look warm and gentle. And strangely close.
Don’t stop posting..Your pictures aren’t just smut, they are erotica, sexual art in its highest...would be an injustice to stop posting.
and I CAN'T WAIT to see that lovley neck of yours....
BTW, very nice hands...i love sucking on fingers..fingers filling my mouth while the rest of me is filled with other things...
<naughty grin>
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Esha said:
I agree with everything you said...these pics make your mind linger a bit with the mystery of those shadows...
FirstRate, your hands and fingers ARE absolutely amazing...I only wish I could feel your touch with them. I know it would be simply amazing.
I agree with a neck shot...maybe one over the shoulder looking at us here in LitLand
TexasGemini
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Esha & texasgemini2002
*smiles* than kyou so much ladies!!
Esha
Certainly not a pro, but as a designer, I know how to manipulate things *smiles*, so its a mix of light and handy skills! Like you I don't see my pictures as smut or simply something to get off of, I take pride in how I'm seen.
Again thank you for the reply, its very constructive!! how can I not carry!!??
P.S. your nexk photos may take a little time, as I have alot on my palte at the moment, but I may be able to sneak them in for you *Kisses*
texasgemini2002
*loving kisses* I have never given my fingers much thought, to me there just long and skinny *laffs* but perhaps I've overlooked them somewhat!
Would be nice to touch you softly, gliding my fingers over your warm sexy body *winxs*
F!rstRåte x
Esha said:
*smiles* than kyou so much ladies!!
Esha
Certainly not a pro, but as a designer, I know how to manipulate things *smiles*, so its a mix of light and handy skills! Like you I don't see my pictures as smut or simply something to get off of, I take pride in how I'm seen.
Again thank you for the reply, its very constructive!! how can I not carry!!??
P.S. your nexk photos may take a little time, as I have alot on my palte at the moment, but I may be able to sneak them in for you *Kisses*
texasgemini2002
*loving kisses* I have never given my fingers much thought, to me there just long and skinny *laffs* but perhaps I've overlooked them somewhat!
Would be nice to touch you softly, gliding my fingers over your warm sexy body *winxs*
F!rstRåte x
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