Feedback on Cuck/Bull Series

[knightofpassionn]

I started posting a story last week in parts. The idea came to me in the middle of the night and I wanted to share it. A story told from the perspective of the Bull. My only concern so far is that I may have lost some people’s attention in part 2. Part 1 started off strong and steamy but the next part was short and honestly not as intense. I’m not sure if that lost some people but I would love some feedback on the story so far. I attached both parts.

https://www.literotica.com/s/becoming-a-bull-part-1
https://www.literotica.com/s/becoming-a-bull-part-2